Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144

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@debby_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

that was really an awesome update

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InvisibleSmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Lazy/Zehra, you totally blew me away with the twists you created. They were absolutely ingenious, and added the perfect amount of amusement to the update. Seriously, what is it with them and kissing. Let them go at it and there is no stop to it 😆😆 I can't believe that Khushi took a rolling pin with her. It kind of reminded me of the frying pan from tangle...!!! I seriously could not stop laughing all throughout the update. You set up the perfect kind of atmosphere for entanglements from everywhere...

My favorite bit was when Khushi sat staring at the box of jalebis trying to decide her next move. All those incredulous thoughts sure had me laughing :) Wonderful Update.

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Blahblah16/Aanya. Wow, you had them kissing again. This kissing factor really adds the x - factor to the updates doesn't it|? I loved that while kissing him she was thinking of HAKH.. I was wondering how you would fix up the muddled confusion between AK and you did it perfectly. I cannot believe Arnav compared himself to Mills&Boons hero...🤣 Khushi, I am sorry dear but you are a damsel in distress...

''Office Office'' like seriously, Anjali???😆 & I loved the misunderstanding here// perfect twist and with a pregnant Anjali that calls for craziness..

Salesaabs girl is definitely the best remark here. It's good to hear it from Shyam also...

I really enjoyed reading the update

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Suchi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Awesome FF.. Loved each part..

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emistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Haha love Anjali's mind!!! She would give KJo a run for his money, after managing come up with that plan!!!

Nicely done!

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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

@madmaxine: Nyc story!!!!😊

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Loved it... Anjali and her super duper hit plans.. Muaahhh..😆

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ayushma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

This was a great update! I loved how Anjali carefully plotted this entire ordeal, and everything happened according to plans! No wonder how she was always successful at interrupting Arhi in the show! Lol.

I can't believe that this entire marriage was broken up so quickly! And it didn't need much effort! I wonder what the Gupta household has to say about this. :/ hopefully the girls will not get yelled at. Does Arnav know that Khushi was going to get married too?? I need to go back and read the chapters...

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Mahnoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Okay I love Anjali and what an amazing update! Loved it. Continue soon. ⭐️

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opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Just finished reading all the chapter! Well done to all the writer! Amazing and interesting work! It has all in it, I mean, love kiss , rude ASR, funny and crazy khushi, different kind of Payal and Akash and most its hilarious! Keep up the good work guys!