#2 FF:Ten things I hate about you (Chapters13-19)

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#871

Hey!

Well-written.

Brave woman. Faces situations that arise head on. Good for her!

Emotional. Khushi was hated for no reason ... and beaten ... very upsetting yet things like this happen in reality and are totally out of order. Shouldn't happen. 😭😡😡

Woah! Angry young man! Yes he was worried and anxious about Khushi, where she is ... her state of mind ... but lashing out ... he shouldn't have. Nuh-uh! 😡

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shreyasonia

@shreyasonia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#872

oh man...she knows that he knows..gasps...
hopefully all this does not back fire on arnav when all the poor guy was doing was to understand what was going on and help her.

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#873

Superb update.

Sorry for late edit..

Amazingly beautiful update must say..

Khushi took all her courage to make him proud and go ahead.. Payal who was she???

Arnav hope he succeeded in his attempt.Hope Khushi won't mu him.

Thanks for pm

Edited by riafna - 12 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#874

oh boy that cant be good right
the fact that she knows that he knows of her past
ahh things are geting interesting more and more
how will she deal with this i wonder
so why was this lady so hell bent on torturing poor khushi
and what happened to payal i wonder
what will this brings about for them
i mean was this the right move to make i think so
as she does need to let go of the past for the present and future to be free from this darkness
but it isnt going to be easy in fact it can lead to more and more heart ache before she is free of the monsters of the past
and dont you worry take your time with this
after all exams are very important
best of luck with those and see ya in the new thread

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#875

loved it

if u hide from ur past u r dommed for eternity

as u forget everything n only live in that pain

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#876

So he blurted out her full name !!! 😲

That would lead to some major showdown i suppose !!

Very beautifully written chapter...you captured the emotions of not only Khushi but also Arnav very well in the last part.

I hope she is able to locate Payal ... whom she once found a family in.

Best of luck for your exams !!

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katunkka

@katunkka

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#877

I love how you start the chapter. Khushi os very emotionally damaged and I feel bad for her but arnav is doing what he can so I feel she should cut him some slack and open up for him.

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Anamika Kumari

@Anamikarocks

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#878

It was Gr8...Khushi faced her past!!!😊

But how is she going to react to Arnav knowing her past!!!😲...😕

But she needs to face this get over the past...hope she understands his intentions!!!!...ya today found your writing style a bit different!!!😃...but carry on!!!😊😊