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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

awsum update...
loved etf bonding...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
this is part 11(A)

Krishna: isme bura maan ne waali koi baat nahin hai shree…we are family..😊

(all settle on sofa).( note: aisha is not a part of this entire convo as she refused to come to their place)

She begins their story:

Mein Krishna vikramsingh Rathod, tumhare chief sameer damsingh Rathod ke bade babasa ki beti hun. Umar mein iss se sirf 4 mahine choti hun..even b4 we were born, babasa business expand karne keliye Mumbai shift hue. They got a house next to your Arjun sir's house. Very soon raute's and rathod's bahut acche friends ban gaye. Kuch mahine baad Arjun was born aur uske 2 months baad mein..humare dono families milkar hi humaare naam rakha tha Arjun aur Krishna… we were best buddies. Uthna, baithna,khana,sona sab kuch ek saath karte the hum dono.

😛

Arjun takes over:

5 years baad hum donon ke ghar mein khushi ki ek nayi lehar aayi.it was when our siblings were born. Meri behan Anvesha, aur iske bhai pawan aur behan pratigya jo twins the. Life was soo good back then. saal beet te gaye.. hum bhi badhne lage. Sam would visit us during his holidays or all of us would go to rajastshan to their place and enjoy a lot. Rosh tab bohot hi silent, shy ladki thi.. who sam ki own sister thi. I actually never got along with her back then. (he chuckles) main aur kookie bohut naughty the bachpan mein. Aayi-baba, mom-dad sab ko pareshaan kar ke rakhte the. Dhire dhire sam bhi hum me ek ho gaya. mastikhor shaitan... ladkiyon ko sataane me yeh maahir tha... sab larkiyan iske adaaon pe marti thi...😉

Krishna continues:

It was when we were 16... Holidays the humari and aayi-baba,(krishna called arjun's parents as aayi baba and arjun would call her parents mom-dad) mamma-dad ek function attend karne gaye the. Anvesha ki tabiyat theek nahin thi. to me, jun, pawan-prati ghar pe hi the. Woh Function attend karne gaye the, magar phir waapas kabhi nahin laute.unki accident mein death hogayi. (She and Arjun wipe their tears.😭 In chocked voice she continues). Uske baad sam ke babasa mujhe waapas lene aaye. I did not go. He took back pawan and prati with him. Sam came to Mumbai to stay with me. We resumed college, then joined police academy.

Sameer speaks:

Kishu studies mein bohot tez thi. Isiliye usne more than 1 course liya tha. She excelled in all. Then after our training we joined police force. Hum wahan sab se young the. But due to our hard work,we were promoted.

By that time mein meri wife ko leke aachuka tha..pallavi. uski aur meri shaadi bachpan mein hi hua tha. She was jus 19 aur mein 23 years ka tha. She was studying medical. Krishna told she want to marry Dr. Abhinav Singhania whom she loved. He was a good man, but 5 years elder to her. I and Arjun were 1st against it but eventually agreed with her marriage.

Arjun:

Usi shaadi mein Maine roshni ko dekha tha. She was just 20. Bachpan me jaisi thi who bilkul aisi nahin thi. I fell for her at that instant. (He smiles). She told me that she would be staying with sameer as she would be studying in mumbai. I was soo happy. Kookie aur abhi ke shaadi ke kareeb 2 years mein unka ek beta paida hua. Ansh. He was soo cute.( saying so he gazed krishna's face. She had a slight smile on her face. He knew that she was living those moments). Uske kuch din baad maine rosh ko propose kia aur humne shaadi karli. By then sam's daughter dia was 1 yr old baby. Humaari zindagi mein sab kuch theek tha.. happiness was around us. Par use kisi ki kaali nazar lag gayi.


to be continued...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Res..
Yay...
First one to comment...
Excellent story...
Sam aur larki patane mein mahir...
Mujhe toh kisiki jalne ki bu aarahi hai. :p
anyways,the whole story is PERFECT.
Lved each n every bit of it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: zebbie

Res..
Yay...
First one to comment...
Excellent story...
Sam aur larki patane mein mahir...
Mujhe toh kisiki jalne ki bu aarahi hai. :p
anyways,the whole story is PERFECT.
Lved each n every bit of it.


haha... wo line mere actual story mein nahin tha...
phir socha kyun na add kiya jaye...😉
humare iss forum mein sameer rathod ke adaaon pe marne waalo ki koi kami nahin hai na...😉
socha ki unke reactions bhi dekh le😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Gud one dear
loved it..
superb story
very interesting..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
amazing update
love the story
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
here is a teaser for next part ie for part 11(B)

Arjun and sameer rushed to her and gathered her shaking form in their arms.Shree and chotu went numb after hearing her scream. They could not imagine the depth of pain she went through.


i ll post the part as soon as possible...its almost done...

thanks for your support... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
here is part 11(B)

Krishna:

It was my 2nd marriage anniversary. Hum shopping gaye the. Dopahar lunch karke hum log ghar aagaye. Shaam ko party tha to uski tayaari karni thi. Par jab hum ghar enter hue to kisine mujh pe aur abhi ke sar pe zor se waar kia.jab hum hosh mein aaye to dekha ki I was tied to a piller and abhi to a chair. On sofa was that ba***d😡 with my baby. Woh mere 3 mihine ke bacche ko hawa mein uchaal raha tha.( her eyes were filled) Ansh dar ke mare ro raha tha. Maine dekha ki abhi pe bohut saare ghaav ke nishaan the.(silent tears flowing through her eyes... every scene was replaying in her mind as she spoke...) wo sikander mujhe hosh mein aate dekh ansh ko apne saathi ki taraf uchala. I screamed but no vain. He was laughing. Slowly he took a knife and pressed it to my wrist allowing a trail of blood to flow. Uske baad who abhi ki taraf gaya aur uske wrists cut kiya… he was in pain. Sikander meri taraf dekh kar has raha tha.usne phir knife ko uske stomach mein daalkar twist kiya.. I was screeming… then I saw him keeping ansh between me and abhi on ground. He went few steps back and told me he won't let me live a peaceful life. He then shot my baby at his heart… NOOO…………… she let out a blood curdling scream. 😭

Arjun and sameer rushed to her and gathered her shaking form in their arms.Shree and chotu went numb after hearing her scream. They could not imagine the depth of pain she went through. After a few minutes Krishna wiped her tears and continued in chocked, trembling voice:

Uske baad we both went numb. He then went to abhi and stabbed him again and again and left him to die. He came to me and stabbed me too… b4 dying abhi told me to change my name back to Rathod and lead a new life. He died in front of me and very soon I went unconscious.

By the end she was crying bitterly for her loss…

Arjun wiping his tears:

It was 7 in the eve. Main,roshni, sam aur pallavi dia ke saath wahan gaye the. Kaafi der tak koi darwaza nahin khola. Kuch guests bhi wahan wait kar rahe the. We then broke the door and went inside. We all were shocked. There was blood everywhere.abhi chair pe khoon se latpat pada tha, uske saamne ansh tha aur piller ko bandhi hui kookie thi. I went to kookie and saw she was still breathing. Sam told abhi and ansh were dead. I along with sameer took her to hospital and also called police. Kookie ka bachna bohot mushkil tha. But she survived.she would not respond to any of us. ahe just sat there on hospital bed gazing at nothing. she was well breathing, but dead inside...

It was about a month she started behaving very weird. She would for no reason hurt roshni and pallavi with her words. sam took her to his home. I thought it would be better to keep roshni far. I was angry on her.i did not know why she was behaving like that. Everyday I would see roshni crying herself to sleep cos of kookie's words. Ek din achanak kookie gaayab ho gayi. We all were hurt, and angry on her. we searched her in every possible place. but it was of no use. maano she had vanished in thin air. we were worried and also angry. But pallavi was not. We knew pallavi was hiding something from us but she would not tell.


to be continued...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
awsum update..!!!
feeling bad for kishu..!!! she has gone through so much pain..!!!!
that sik na..!!!😡
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is last part of this segment...
part 11(C)
bear with me...its little lengthy...

Sameer:

Maine pallavi se bohut baar poocha.. she never told me anything. It was more than 6 months kishu left us. Achanak se roshni pareshaan rehne lagi. Bina baat ke darna, over protective rehna. We then foundout kishu was sending her mails and calling her. Her mails mostly scaring roshni telling her that her life was in danger. It was better that she would be away from Arjun. This enraged Arjun a lot. He blocked her from sending mails to roshni.it was 3 days b4 Arjun roshni's anniversary I and pallavi met with accident.aur unke anniversary ke din rosh……..

Arjun:

Us din roshni ko mere aankhon ke saamne usne maara tha, usse mujhse cheen liya.. Kitna accha din guzaara tha humne. Usne meree saare favourite dishes banaye the.. hum saath mein hi the ki Achanak ghar mein smoke bhar gaya…before I could comprehend anything, someone caught my hands and banged me to piller and at the same time I heard her scream. Thodi der baad smoke cleared and I saw him. uske ek aadmi roshni ko pakad ke rakha tha. Sikander aakar mujhe maarne laga. Phir jab wo roshni ki taraf badha to I panicked. Maine socha tha ki wo mujhe maarega. But her showed me his knife and shoved it in roshni's body and twisted it. She din even scream when he stabbed her. I was very badly wounded. He took a knife and scratched roshni's tattoo on my hand. I could not save her kookie… I cud not… then I had to keep anvesha away from me to keep her safe….

Isiliye I went off……

Sameer: kya matlab hai tumhaara?

Krishna: sam usse bhi sikander ka letter mila hoga threatening him to destroy you all… jab tum kuch kho dete ho esp., someone who is close to your heart, you fear losing others. so you distance yourself from them as i did.(clearing her tears)

Arjun: yes. Even I did the same thing what kookie did. I hurt him and pallavi also anvesha. I was really mad at sam that time as I never knew he had met an accident and was in hospital when I needed him the most. I mis understood him… m so sorry sam… mujhe maaf karde…

Sameer: chal koi nai yaar…. Maaf kiya.

Chotu(sobbing like a small kid): phir kya hua tha?

Sameer: kya hona tha… Arjun ke jaane ke baad, ek din pallavi achanak gaayab ho gayi. When I checked her mails and call records I got to know she was in contact with kishu.i never was able to trace her till today.

Krishna: sab meri galti thi sam.. agar mein usse uske baba ke ghar jaane ko na kehti, to shayad wo mujhse jhoot bolke mere aadmiyon ke nazron se chupti nahin.

Sameer: isme tumhari galti nahin hai. You just wanted her to stay away for some time…..

Shree: didi, aap itna dard sehne ke baad bhi kaise muskura sakte ho??? How?

Krishna: waqt ke saath mein mere dard ko chupa ke rakhna seekh gayi shree…. I had to make my weakness my strength. I did it. Sab log situations ko apne tareeke se handle karte hai. jaise Arjun and sameer gusse se karte hai…. Samjhe ya samjhau….

All chuckled amidst their tears…

Chotu: taayi aapne apke bhai behan ke baare mein to bataya hi nahin….

Sameer: sikander ne pawan aur prati ko ansh ke paida hone ke kuch mahino pehle ek car blast mein maar diya tha… ab Rathod family ke 5 bacchon mein se sirf mein aur kishu hi bache he..

After that there was a long silence.. sam,jun,kookie shed silent tears, and shree & chotu went quiet they did not know how to respond to them.

Shree: we are soo sorry… humari wajah se aapke ghaav phirse taaza hogaye..

Arjun: nahin shree… aaj saalon baad man hulka hua hai… as kookie said we are family now. You had a right to ask… it was we who chose to speak… dil mein jo dabaake baithe the sab boke accha laga...thanks for listening to us...

Again silence.

It was sameer who broke the silence.

Sameer: Arjun, anvesha ab kahan hai? Itne saaalon mein woe k baar bhi nahin aayi hai yahan…

Arjun: ab wo Bangalore mein hai.. as recreation expert.

Krishna: kaisi hai wo?

Arjun: she is fine. Bas mujhse naraaz hai….baat tak nahin karti hai mujhse..

Krishna nods her head.

Sameer: ab sab jaake so jao.. subah ke teen baj chuke hai. Kal jaldi uthne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai ok…. Oye chotu, tere liye ek aur glass milkshake leke aau kya??😆

Chotu: nahin sir…..

(he was cut of by sameer): kaha tha na maine mere ghar mein tum dono mujhe bhai bulaoge??????

Chotu: sorry bhai…..

Chalo milkshake peeke so jao… night every 1…..

All move to their rooms…


to be continued...

sorry i actually did not want to drag this part much. arjun's past, atleast in bits are shown in serial...so i did not elaborate it.

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