An ArHi SS: Secrets #2 *COMPLETED*

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Mini17

@Mini17

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#791

I'm gonna miss this SS so much. It had become a habit for me to check for your PM from past 8-9 days.
Dhamakedar last update! It was just perfect.
It was not all goody goody.
Khushi accusing Arnav- Showed how much guilt Khushi is carrying.
Arnav blasting NK- How much Arnav trusts Khushi.
Anjali and Buaji's drama and silent support, respectively- How a family should conduct itself for some one they love. It was exactly opposite of the shows!
Sweet shop convo- Forgetting the past and moving forward where there is only love, care and most importantly, Trust.
Finally my favourite part of the update- Red rose! His explanation of love was simply outstanding. I so loved this Arnav. I mean, you showed him pretty practical. A ruthless business man who was once very harsh on his own wife (he had a reason for that) becoming all mushy mushy and hopelessly romantic would have been very impractical. He stayed true to his character.
And the best-est part was Khushi's 'Always mirror to my soul'. It has so much depth in it.

I'm will miss this SS. Come back soon with a bang!

P.S. It has become a ritual for me to leave long comments on the last chapters 😳

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blackdice1001

@blackdice1001

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Oh Buaji. She wouldn't be left out when everyone else had secrets of their own. How was she to know about the pain and tears that were to follow. But then it all turned out well in the end.

I like their new beginning, starting over at the sweet shop, where it all began. Him taking her to see the roses, finally red. So romantic. Then he goes out and ruins it by saying it was all because it was his favourite colour, and why do you want me to say i love you anyway, ok fine, I love you *facepalm*

And then he goes and says all those sweet things that would make her fall in love with him all over.. seriously, only Arnav Singh Raizada would do this.

I'm not disappointed that the story ends here, it was never about the number of chapters you gave me to read, it was the story you told. And you did that beautifully. It's been a hell of a ride with all those maddening cliffhangers you threw our way but it was worth it. I see you grow as a writer with every story you write and this was no different. Much love for all the effort you put in entertaining us 🤗

Now waiting for the epilogue. Would there be any more secrets?

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#793

Fantastic and brilliant update, the last part was amazing all the misunderstanding has been cleared, its a shame at the start Khushi still did not trust Arnav regarding the file, but i'm glad Arnav was not to blame. The whole update was beautifully written and i just loved the part where he went to the sweet shop as they were going to make a new fresh start, by forgetting the past which was fabulous because Arnav went along with it. Awww the bedroom scene was outstanding because Arnav had grown all the red roses, poor Khushi was so emotional. Can't wait to read the epilogue, thanks for the PM xx

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oceanssea

@oceanssea

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#794

Never thought I'd say this but I love Buaji more than Khushi and Arnav ,for
she was the force behind Arhi's marriage and was the first to notice that
Arnav loved Khushi.

You are,as always,brilliant in your writing.

Thanks for this wonderful story.

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#795

You gave justice to the ending... after all the misunderstandings, the cheating, the trust issues... they've started fresh with their relationship... and they needed this desperately...

They're so in love with each other, but the past kept playing in their head. It was like one step forward, and ten backwards... But neither one could leave each other. AHHH!! I'm in smiles with this update! But, I am being greedy here, I wanted more updates :(

Well Buaji's lie was quite a surprise! Chupa rustom... My, my! But hey, it helped the lovebirds in getting together!

Waiting for the epilogue now... gutter mind alert?? ;)

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#796

wow...what a story...amazing!! Loved it!
the story telling, description of feelings of both arnav khushi was penned down fabulously!!
really sad that it has ended so soon.. waiting for the epilogue.

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#797

a truly beautiful update that nicely wrapped up everything... good of khushi not to keep her misgivings to herself but to ask arnav about the detective still following her, however unpalatable his reasons for doing so might have been... at the same time, hearing what he had to say makes her feel bad for misjudging him again... though nk was responsible for the continued investigation, can't really fault him for his loyalty to and love for arnav... khushi's idea of replaying their first face-to-face meeting was a good one and cute of arnav to play along... truly shows his love for her... he is right that actions speak louder than words, which is why he understood khushi's love even before she acknowledged it to herself and to him... his reasonsfor gifting those multi-hue roses was as unique as his wife... so buaji was also keepng secrets... nice to see all of it coming together for a happy ending

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RICHA

@ar_sajan4evr

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#798

i jus loved d twists n turns of d story
realy amzingg
d last bit was realyy nycc
well wrtn as alwaz
thnx 4 d pm
waitng for the epilouge now..:)

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Summer99

@Summer99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#799

that was beautiful end to a lovely story

will be waiting for epilogue and your next story

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#800

such a beautiful ending

I loved Arnav explanation for knowing that you love someone
and for knowing someone loves you

so emotional

cant wait for the epilogue, will miss this story though

I am hoping you have a new SS or FF soon