Swaron Os 'U ME HUM' - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Awesome os 😊
beautifully penned
every single scene of Swaron was nicely portrayed
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dear...
Its so beautiful...
Beyond any words of appreciation...
I wish...I dream for something like this...in D3...
lovely OS dear...keep writing😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really amazng OS tha...

U hv perfectly describd der secret reveald...jst awesm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wowww!!! Really wowww!! I enjoyed readin it soo much dat i cnt evn describe it!!! Jst loved it!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazingšŸ‘..beautifully written n i jst luvd it..really hope d3 mai bi aisa kuch ho..
n sharon's plan was damn gud..swayam bechare k to band baj gyi..šŸ˜†..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum n lovely os..
boring not at all.. i loved n enjoyed readg every line..😊 especially d way sharon made swayam (along with me) travel down d memory lane of beautiful memories starting from d auditorium, BB, abandoned corridor, classroom, locker room, canteen n endg at rehersal hall.. the notes as clue nice ideašŸ‘šŸ¼ Beautifully penned down...

dats really sweet of sharon to remember swayam's bday and they slept together holding each other's hands...😳
ending part was cute gang waitg for dem to wake up n knowg abt deir relationship
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do write more!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its so cute...gr8 job šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Had a lovely read, was smiling thruout :D
Super cute OS! D3 mein aisa hota toh, chodo dnt wanna thnk nd go into sad mode as dis OS made me super happy :D
Keep writing :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: maliha_khan

Awesome OS... Kaash k d3 mei b aisa hota i lyk da game part n every note of sharon... Har interactn ka glimpse it was soo cute n sweet loved it keep it up wid ur awsome work...



haina.. I too wanted sawron track to run +ve after sharon's return..

Thank you so much for liking it... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: binuja_

<font color="#990033"><font size="2">Now that was an awesome OS...truly mindblowing...
😊

Starting with reyam conversation...they are always magical...my favorite after swaron...:)
<font color="#FF0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">"tu jab full majnu mood me hota hai to kya tujhe mai hi milta hu pakaane ke liye</font><font color="#FF0000">"</font> šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

I really liked Sharon's surprise...each note she related it to swayam...starting from the auditorium where they had their first dance together...then the BB court where the Shivam brat was being beaten up...the abandoned corridor where the secret admirer was revealed...the classroom where both of them were at their worst...boy's locker room where swayam burnt all the secret admirer's gifts...the canteen where they had their foodfight scenes...and finally the most important place for both of them, the rehearsal <font size="2">hall</font>...i knew <font size="2">t</font>hat u would <font size="2">finally make them meet</font> <font size="2">there</font> only...😊

It was like a saga of the whole swaron story for me...reminiscing all the scenes related to swaron...and it made me go all <font size="2">crazy</font> over swaron again...😳

Beautiful ending as well...by the gang coming to know about their six months trial relationship...and how sweet of sharon to remember swayam's bday and they slept together holding each other's hands...aww...😳

All in all beautifully penned down..do write more on swaron...(;

love,
binju
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OMG.. Thanks a load for such a deep analysis... Means a lot...

I too love the bond Reyam share.. And Swaron is close to my heart and i rem each and every moment they had spent with each other so thought of cherishing those wonderful days came into my mind..
D3 gang... I love each one of them so i cant miss them to be included as swayam and sharon both are incomplete without their friends...

Glad u liked it.. Thanks again for such a warm and lovely comment.. Will try to write more for sure... :)

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