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apoorva12sharma

@apoorva12sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

the first word that came into my mind after i completed reading this chapter was peace
i don't know why but this update was peaceful
i mean there were emotions,contradictions, confusion, rejection in arnav's point of view
yet i felt that the update was peaceful
maybe it was because arnav was meeting arnav at arnav
or maybe because there was no actual conversation between khushi and arnav
it doesn't matters
in the end all of this were your word...seeped into my heart
i truely loved it
i don't know if you will even get time to read my comments or to observe them but i am goin to tell you nonetheless...i love you babe

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amritab

@amritab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

I always enjoy the quotes you choose before each chapter. The past few chapters have shown so much movement in the relationship between Arnav and Khushi - I admire Khushi for finally letting loose, for not holding her tongue, for being so honest and it's wonderful to see Arnav trying to be honest with himself - a real breakthrough.

Hope you had a good trip and so glad you're back to this story!!

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dazzlerabi

@dazzlerabi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Congrats on new thread,loved both the updates.. Hope Arnav finds way to earn her trust..

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sharma_vartika

@sharma_vartika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

heya! busy wid my xamz... u r dng realy gud as alwaz..! :-D tc

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Very nice ... Plz update soon ... I wonder what Arnav will do

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mini_kh

@mini_kh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Beautifully written..Am so glad I hv come across ur work :)

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upatel89

@upatel89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

I caught up with this story in two days, it's absolutely wonderful and I couldn't stop reading it. I like how had Khushi has tried to warm up to Arnav. I do admire you for staying as true to the characters as you have, Arnav did his push and pull on the show so much it wasn't exhausting. He would warm up and find himself caring about Khushi, and a second later he would turn into a jerk and do something to convince himself he doesn't care for her.

You've done a wonderful job, I adore this story and I look forward to reading more! 😊

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thesis

@thesis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

It jus keeps gettin better

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paaskhanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

read last three chapters in one go...very late :(

loved how you gave us the insight into Arnav-NK relation...reason for the tension between two but also the love and trust on each other...

He knows in his heart what wromg he has done but his ego is not allowing him to accept it. Arnav's introspection has begun... he keeps remembering her words and has started thinking about 'how to earn her forgiveness' ----cannot wait for that to happen. He is acutely aware of khusi - how she laughs, how her hair flies and is sad that he is not the reason for her carefree laughter...

needless to say love your style of descriptive writing ... it is almost like the scene is playing in front of me

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toblerone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#270

you updated!! i'm always so excited when i get to read a new chapter!!

again a great chapter!! i liked how you described his inner thoughts, how he tries to justify his present for her, and then in the end questioning if that was actually the right thing to do.. and the whole scene at the beach was just beautifully written!!

can't wait to see, if and what he plans to earn her forgiveness!!