TaaRey FF: 'With you..forever' part 6 updated pg18 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Curvmars

Aww... 😳
Smiley Smiley Taarey!!!!
Gr8 update!!!!!!
Too good...
Loved it...
Update soon...
Pm me!! 😃


smiley smilešŸ˜†šŸ˜³ thank you.will update soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: velvetrose

awesome update .. it was not boring at all

rey taani same class n loved that the gang are friends wid taani

but why she's in orphanage?? .. update soon n thnx for da pm


aww thank you.will make it clear about taani in future updates😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sonakshigupta

Hey dear gr8 update...i always lyk rey tanis light heartd convos...n thnx 4 d pm dear...plz update soon :)


i love it too.even their small simple convos make me go aww😳 thank you😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ilovemyself14

Cute and sweet...I am loving it..and pm please...!


hey thanks😃 will pm you surely😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

So hi everyonešŸ¤—.Hope you all are doing good.Thank you so much your lovely comments again.It boosts up me really😃.So here is the next part.Sorry for mistakes.Thanks for reading.So here you go!😊

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chap-3

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Two three weeks passed .Taani helped him in his GS works whenever he was busy with his dance practices.Dance was their gang's and his life.Rey got a gift for taani in between..a cute teddy.they knew a little about each other's likes and dislikes..But still he didn't know or never asked about taani' s parents or why she is in home since he thought it may hurt her..He was least bothered of it all untill she is with him..and she reamined happy..Taani and Rey were more than friends by now even though they were unaware of it. Kehte hai na …in someone's absence only we realise what they mean to us really!

It was a holiday.

Taani woke up to see her sleeping friends.

Hey "mannu suni get up guys .its getting late.Omg its 7.00 already." She was shocked. Ut jao na pls.she started beating them "arghhh Taani jao yaar. Subhe subhe aake chilla rahi hai." One of them shouted.

"Hmm.how dare you?" ab dekho me kya karti hu.she smiled naughtily and went to washroom. While returning she had a bucket full of water.

…Splash'

She was laughing at her friends fully drenched in water. They gave her very lovely looks. The loud noises filled with laughs and shouts from their room was enough to shake the whole building.

On the other hand someone was sleeping peacefully. The rays fell upon his face through the window said him it has become morning. He got up and took a shower thinking about that days plans.he dressed up and left to a restaurant nearby to have his breakfast.

After ordering ,he was looking here and there around when she came in focus to his eyes."Taani!" he was a bit shocked. she was working there in the billing counter with his favourite smile of hers plastered in her face naturally.

She felt someon's gaze upon her and immediately looked up to find him staring at her.

He was caught .what to do…his mind went blank…after a min..ha "hi!" Rey waved his hand.

she waved back.

"Who is that taani?"

"I said na yesterday 'Rey' my friend in college"

"oh yeah..hmm handsome to hai" they both giggled.

Someone was a bit jealous by now none other than taani.she said in a little angry tone" wo take care of my section for 5 mins.I ll be back"

" Ok ok" Mannu winked at her.

She came towards him.

"Hey" his all 32 were out.

"hi" she smiled .

They walked out to the park in the restaurant.

"tum yaha…..par.." rey asked questioningly.

"ha rey me yaha kaam karti hu…they afford only for our studies in home...baaki sab ke liye kaam karna padta hai.."

He didn't know what to reply.

"tumhe pata hai rey..bahut maza aata hai yaha kaam karne me...aur room ke saaf safai karne me...she was going on listing...with a lot of happiness and excitement.

"Taani you know..tum ...tum..Sach me weird ho...pagal ho..you know crazy" rey started laughing."cutely weird" (he said in his mind)

Taani was about to cry.She took it wrongly..It was evident from her looks.."meri mazak uda rahi ho na!" tears were about to form in her flower like eyes..

Rey got shocked and felt like something pricking in his heart.in his mind"oops she is so sensitive ..hey universe ji..ye kya kar diya mein ne"

"taani I was just joking yaar..tum bi na..taani ..." he said in a trembling voice and pulled her into a hug pacifiying her by tracing his hands up and down her back.

Taani didnt protest or maybe she didn't want to.She felt like heaven in his protective arms.She never ever felt like this.Ya she had friends but this feeling was something different.A pleasant one .A special one..Which made her feel special ..Even she didn't know why she got affected for this simple matter.Thousands of questions were running through her mind.Her heartbeats were raising more than ever!She wanted to remain in those arms forever…<3It was like being in his presence is the best thing in her life.He wept like a small child in his arms that too for no matter.,

Rey was feeling very bad.his heart was sinking. It was true that she meant to him more than a friend.But he didn't think about love or anything like that deeply.How can he become this cruel.In this three weeks from the day they became friends he cared for her more..He was excited to go for college daily ..It was upside down before.He alwayz felt lazy to go to college,,But now it was different..He was getting impatient if she didnt come for college...He would fight for her and support her during their boy girl gang fights!! and eventually getting scoldings from other boys!!! but now..He was the reason now for the tears in her ever sparking eyes!

"Im sorry Taani" He whispered in his dreamy husky voice in her ears.

She came to her sense and broke the hug.

"No..its ok rey...actually I didn't kkn.o.o.ww why I reac.."

"Taani…Taani!!!!! Come soon pls" suni shouted from the restaurant steps.

She signalled her that she is coming and Turned to Rey.

She tried to be normal.She avoided his eyes. She was feeling awkward.

"Ok rey I need to go.See you in college.Apna khyal rakhna"

"hmm..tum bi..my dear friend." By this she looked up to see him. Those smile bloomed again in her lips.

Rey:"toh mein jau"?.

"ya sure" she blushed a little.

" hmm..finally thank god you're ok" " see you soon taani." he smiled and turned to go after taking a last look at her.

Rey was driving back to home..

(in his mind)..Im sorry taani.I never wanted to hurt you.and I promise ki i willn't never ever let anyone hurt you.tum is duniya me sabse achi dost ho..

Precap: "Agar tumhe bi family hoti na tab tumhe relationships ke feelings aur values samajh me aayegi! Par tum toh…"

"Enough Vishaka" Rey yelled angrily like a roaring lion.

The whole gang was totally shocked .None of them reacted.

Taani couldn't control..tears were forming up in her eyes.she ran away immediately.

He gave a burning look to V and ran after taani …"Taani…Taani stop!"

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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Wow. Lovely again. I really love this innocent Taani and the feeling Rey has for her. Precap- hated Vishakha. How could she. But anyways loved it. Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Lovd it:-) n beautifully written ;-)waiting for next part:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

loved it ..im loving taani's caracter .. but hated vishaka in the precap

update soon :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: ShivTRSS

Wow. Lovely again. I really love this innocent Taani and the feeling Rey has for her. Precap- hated Vishakha. How could she. But anyways loved it. Update soon


thank you dr .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: lavanyamishra

Lovd it:-) n beautifully written ;-)waiting for next part:-)


hey thank you dr .

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