TaaRey FF: 'With you..forever' part 6 updated pg18 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Hey Nisha it's amazing u did a superb job. Taani is so bubbly and carefree, and Rey gettir lost in her enough to follow her lol and it was so cute when he lift her up the wall. Mr handsome and miss beautiful, cant wait to read more plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
pl pm me when you update next. this is a very interesting concept
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Omg.. I loooveeeddd it!!!!! It was tooo good!!!! Cant wait to read the next part .. please pm me when u updat.. I hav sent u a buddy request :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi loved it was amazin plz pm me when u update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
sooo sweet...! n ya don forget to pm meee :-P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nisha welcome to the forum

nice concept .. awesome!! update soon n pm me 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
I toh loved the first part... Interesting concept... M loving it!!
Update sooon n pm me.. M waiting for your pm...
Also, a warm awrm awrm welcome to the forum.. You are gonna enjoy lots!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hei Nisha, this was fab yaar 😳
update soonnn!!
i loved ittt <3
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Awwwhhh, they will fall in love with each other, but is taani an orphan?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
hi guys here is chap 2.Again this might be a little boring too😆 so im sorry for that,but this is all i could come out withbut i will try my best in further updates.thank you all .you guys are so sweet.thank you each and everyone for your precious comments.Im not able to reply for all.Im getting a spamming message since im a newbie.Thats whyhere you go😳

Chap-2

There was standing his dear friends with their hands on their hips ready to kill him

Vicky: (angrily)rey kaha ti tu??kyu nahi aaya??

Rey:wo mein..mein..nahi aaya..ha wo..

Swayum(suscpicious) :kuch to hai bata kya baat hai.

Nil(laughing a little) : swayum is right. Tell me dude. What is the matter ?

Bharat:kya hua?? Koi ladki mil gayi kya?

All of them started laughing.

Shut up guys. Aisa kuch nahi hai.i was so tired .that's why. Tomorrow college bi hai. Isliye socha thoda rest kar lu.

amar:"Ok then.we will meet tomorrow."

Swayum: guys I will come after sometime.tum log jao.

Gang: ok..bye guys.

They left.

Swayum : ok !!!!!..so rey who is she?

Rey(shocked) : she..she kaun??

Swayum: uss she jiski wajah se tum koi koi se lag rahe ho..rey don't hide it from me.im your best friend.tuje jaanta hu achi tara se!

Rey: swayum ..wo..hehe.. he smiled a little.

He told swayum the whole story.

Rey(in dream mode) : swayum..i have never seen such a cute and innocent hearted girl.she is different from others. I don't know why but it feels like she is close to me..(coming out of the trance)whatever!! but why is she staying in aashram? And she must be college student or !he went on blabbering.

Swayum:" ohhhohoh ..rey stop stop..im leaving ..its late.we will talk tommorrow!!."

"Bye"

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Next day in st.louis:

It was the start of a new term for st.louis students. All were happy to meet their love and friends again. The place was filled with happiness.

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So our gang were awaiting for the newbies to rag them! Somehow rey saved everyone being the GS of the college.They moved to their class as it was time for lecture.

Their sir entered and was about to take the class.

"may I come in sir"

All the eyes turned towards Her.-A girl in blue jeans and baby pink top entered.

Taani didn't notice him.she was looking at the lecturer scared.

sir breaking the silence

" you are late.this is your first day.so im allowing you in.dont repeat it"

Taani: "Sorry sir..Thank you "

Girls(gossiping) : "she is so cute! " " yeah" "neha thinking ye bahut achi ladki hai" "hmm and beautiful too"

Rey was shocked and an unknown happiness spread in him in unmeasurable amounts.His mouth wide open :o "miss beautiful.you...here..in my class..wow!!"

And ofcourse only one place remained empty next to rey. She went there and sat beside him.he was constantly looking at her expecting that she would look at him.but"No" taani who was a bit afraid experiencing a new situation didn't even turn her head anywhere other than the board.it didn't go unnoticed by our boys.they looked at each other and smirked.

The class was going on.

Rey( in his husky voice to taani): "Hey.."

Taani looked up. She was surprised."She met him again.For some reason she wasn't able to sleep peacefully last night .she was engrossed in his thoughts the whole night.and here again he is next to her now"

Rey: " hi..(looking into her eyes) kya hua?? Aise kyu dekh rahi ho"

Taani: "Aap bi toh dekh rahe the na " she chuckled.(girls always have an extra power na..so she found him staring at her when she cane near her and sat beside him)

He was about to...

Suddenly..

"You both get up! Rey and his partner" they looked up to see their sir .his eyes were burning in anger.

Sir: "Whats happening"

Rey: wo..sorry sir. He looked at taani.

Taani: sir sorry .. actually..

Whatever! If I find you both talking next time.You will be sent out!sit down.

"..."

The bell rang .

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The gang surrounded rey and taani . Vicky tried to imitate their sir.." Rey..whats happening..hmm?" everyone joined him and started teasing them.

Taani was not used to it. He saw her scared face.

Rey: "Guys guys ...stop..wait"

He introduced her to the whole gang .

Neha: (smiling) " hi taani..you are becoming member of humari gang"

" yayyy" the gang joined in.

Taani was so happy now.she had new friends!!and He was ofcourse happy to see her happy.that is the satisfaction we get when we see our friends/lovable ones being comfy around us!!

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Rey and Taani somehow got sometime alone to spend after college.They were walking through the corridor.

Rey: "So .."

Taani: "so"

Rey: "you are leaving to home(orphanage)?"

Taani:" yeah"she smiled. He loved her smile.He was ready to get lost in forever!!

Rey: "so..let me drop you"

Taani:"no its ok rey..i can manage"

Rey:" Oh..c'mon Taani.Im your friend na?"

Taani looked at him with a questioning look.

Rey: "what?? You don't think im your friend" he asked her making a puppy face.

Taani burst into laughter.

Rey was again lost in her.

"Rey..rey you are so cute" she pinched him in his hand.

" auhh..tum!" he tried to catch her. She ran away.

Chasing chasing chasing...😆

They were tired by now.She stopped.

Taani holding her ears: "acha..sorry baba ..tik hai?" (laughing still")

"That's good" rey said with a light smile. Taani got lost in him.

"ok ..its getting late"

"Yeah.."he caught her hand and dragged with him to drop her.

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Edited by Breeze_13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
hey dear it was really awesome!👏taani aur rey ek college mai brilliant idea par wo orphanage me kyun hai?😕taani ke parents nahi hain?well this part was really awesome do update soon!😃

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