An ArHi SS:Secrets #1 (Thread 2 link Pg 1)

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Happy to know that you started to write again! Seems like ASR in romance mood. looking forward to read more. thanks for the pm

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amv63

@amv63

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Juhi, congratulations on the new story. I loved the start (and the fact that Arnav Singh Raizada was intrigued enough by a woman to actually spy on her like a lovesick teen😛).

Looking forward to the secrets...

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riafna

@riafna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Wow
Arnav Singh Raizada and his thoughts...
Feels same thing..
First was am accident, then next day confusion and determination of stop coming there
Third day its not a big deal... even he is gonna leave this place soon
Jealous
After week he came there to meet her see her...in order to get rid of her thoughts ; make sure he wear indeed best and look handsome
When he didn't see her ,alarmed himself something happens..

Superb feelings of ASR when he starts his new journey

Like it. One doubt this time serious or funny . We will get your funny thoughts dialogues in between na?

Thanks for pm

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

you are quite a prolific writer... was wondering if and when we would be seeing your next piece! an interesting premise... a lovely picture of how much arnav was intrigued by the girl and his obsession with the colour of her eyes... I am sure she has been fully aware of him hanging around her store... the intensity in those eyes is hard to ignore... his decision to finally meet and the special care he took about his appearance was cute... it nearly became anti-climactic when she wasn't at the store but then she crashing into him was surely meant to be... such a nice reason to be in each other's arms, fulfilling his heart's desire of learning the colour of her mesmerising eyes! there was a magical aspect to that encounter... can't wait to find out how things progress!

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@debby_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Ah..i just loved the starting...The name of the ss is very interesting..The projection of the prologue is just fantastic..here starts a new journey..looking forward to this ss :)

Thanks for the pm

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

great start! 👏

brilliant chemisrty.
hint of intrigue.
they are people i know, yet i am not sure if they are the same.. great feeling you gave to the beginning of their story.
beautiful writing.👏