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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update :) loved it
loved riya and arjun's conversation...
loved simar and sameer's fight with goons... simar and sameer are so cute...
hope they find that person who wants to kill riya soon..
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
its wounderful update
i am worried dear
wat will happen and wat happened
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update..!!!
loved it..!!!
loved ariya's love for each other..!!!
feeling scared for riya..!!! hope she will be safe..!!!
finally riya ke samne toda sa truth aaya..!!!
loved sameer's dialouge in the end...!!!!😆
cant wait for the next part..!!
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
first Sorry wanna to giv long comment but real bussy...
but realy realy nice...
hop arjun soon find that man...
conti soon
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next part is on the way please wait

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Part 25

Arjun: mujhay lagta hai Saam ab tujhay bhi shadi kar leni chaheay,

Saam: kyun.

Arjun: jotay khanay k liay. He laughs.

Saam: tu ruk mei tujhay batata hun..

Riya: Arjun theek hi toh keh rhay hain , kab tak ap is tarha kunwaray raho gay, mujhay ek bhabhi chaheay..

Sameer: my dear Sis…. Shadi k liay ek adad larki ki zarorat hoti hai..

Arjun: bus itni si problem, teray galay mei ek board laga detay hain zarorat-e- rishta, ek teez , hanseen khubsorat biwi darker hai jo strickly meray isharon par chal sakay..

Sameer: nahi ye board teray galay mei latkaun ga .

Arjun: yar kyun meri basi basai zindagi ujar rha hai, meri biwi hai ghar bar hai, aur kuch dino mei bachay bhi ho jaen gay…

RIya: shut up Arjun.

Arjun: why shutup Miss Riya. Iam sorry Mrs. Riya Rawate… Sari umar mujhay papa koi nahi kehay ga..

Riya: Arjun dear ye time nahi hai in sab baton ka .

Arjun: chalo kabhi aur sochen gay, I know tum Sharma rhi ho, next time separately bat Karen gay..

Simar: smiles.

Sameer: ya Riya Arjun is right .

Riya: bhai aap bhi Arjun ka sath day rhay hain..

Sameer: ha Why not? Aakhir mujhay bhi koi mama toh kahey..

Riya blushes , She Stands quietly and try to move away from there, Arjun sees her…

Arjun: sam tum aur simar pyar mohabat ki batein karo zara mei bhi apni Mrs say kuch batein kar lun. Chalo riya

Riya: mujhay nahi jana.

Arjun: samjha karo Riya..

Riya: ok chalen..

They leave..

Simar: ha toh kab kar rhen hain ap shadi jaisa Arjun Sir nay kaha hai waisa add tyar karwaun.

Sameer: tum bhi uska sath day rhi ho

Simar: ha., kyun nhi day sakti unka sath, waisay kaisi larki chaheay ap ko. Jaisi chaheay mujhay bata do. Kahin bhi ho dhund nikalun gi

Sameer: bilkul tumhari tarha tumhari copy mil sakti hai wo.

Simar: aaisa ek hi piece banaya hai bahgwan nay is jaisi copy ap ko kahin aur nahi milay gi.

Sameer: theek hai copy na sahi yahi sahi..

Simar: sameer..

Sameer: ha … tum aur Arjun meri tang khich rhay thay toh theek tha jab mei nay kaha toh naraz ho gai wah kiya zamana aa gaya hai.

In Arjun's room.

Arjun: ha toh kya keh rhi thi tum.

Riya: kuch bhi toh nahi.

Arjun: dekho Riya last warning day rha dun mujhay satana chor do..

Riya: mei kya hi kya hai, waisay aap bahir keh kya rhay thay.

Arjun: sach hi toh kaha tha Riyu jaan.

Riya: shut up, ab moun band Karen aur soo jaen..

Arjun: buhat orders denay lagi ho na mujhay, tum auratoon ko apni kamzoriyan nahi batani chaheay ..

Riya: kis kamzori ki baat kar rhay hain aap.

Arjun: meri kamzori tum ho Riya, tum aagay ab mujhay kuch kehnay ki himmat hi nahi hoti order dena toh dour ki baat hai.

Riya: itnay masoom aap kab say ho gay, lagta hai aapka Rawan wala roop mei nay nahi dekha…

Arjun: tum nay mujhay RAwan kaha.

Riya: ha bura laga..

Arjun: nahi bilkul bhi nahi..

Riya: ab chalen .

Arjun: kaha..

Riya: sonay..

Arjun: no.

Riya: yes …

Next day In Mumbai ETf

Simar: tum logo ko sari batein aachi tarha say samjh mei aa gai hain na.

Karan: yes mam..

Simar: Aur tumhain Tanya..

Tanya: ya Simar.. I mean Simar mam..

Simar: that's good , I hope tum teams ko aachi tarha handle kar lo gay..

Karan: yam am, aap fikar na Karen hum apni position's mei rahen gay,.

Simar: good..

Sameer: Simar sab theek hai na humain Riya ko full security dayni hai, Riya ko kuch bhi nahi hona chaheay.

Simar: Don't worry Sameer every thing runs smoothly..

Sameer: I hope so.

Arjun and Riya enters in Simar's cabin.

Arjun: Saam tujhay pakka yaqeen hai na Riya ko kuch nahi hoga.

Sameer: tu pareshan kyun hota hao mei, Simar aur tu hai na Riya k sath, hum wahin Riya k aas pass rahengay, hare k movement par alert rahen gay, dekhna Riya ko kuch nahi hoga..

Arjun: bus aaj ki raat tal jaey, phir humari ek nahi zindagi ki shruwat hogi.

Riya: Arjun hum sath hungay hamesha, aaj ki raat hamari zindagi badal day ga…

Arjun: par mujhay aaj ki raat say buhat dar lag rha hai.

Arjun goes to madir for pray' s for Riya. After his return from mandir a beggar is sits in the floor, he bend down and give some money.

Beggar: janta hun ti kya mangnay aaya hai, tere dil ki har murad pori hogi, tu jis k liay dua mangnay aaya hai na teri dua zaroor qabool hogi, aaj ki raat teri zindagi adal day ga, aaj ki raat teray ateet ka khulasa hoga, aaj ki raat tera ateet tere samanay aaey ga, aur tera ateet teray aaj par hawwi ho jaey ga, par tera pyar jeetay ga…

Arjun: mei aap ki baat nahi samjha.

Beggar: aaj ki raat tujhay sab pata chal jaey ga, tu jaw o tera intezar kar rhi hai..

Arjun: ha baba meri patni hai wo, buhat chahta hun mei usay khud say bhi zayda.

Beggar: ye aankhen sab dekh sakti hain, wo jot ere dil mei hain wo jot ere chehray par hai, wo jo ho chukka hai , aur wo bhi jo honay wala hai, us say dua kar kyun k dua har cheez badal deti hai… aur is dua ki taqat say tujh say zayda kaun waqif hoga, tu nay bhi apni chahat k liay dua kit hi kiya sila mila dal diya na khuda nay usay teri jhooli mei… mang us jo mangna hai teri chahat sachi hai toh tujhay milay ga, agar teri chahat mei zara bhi khot huwa jo mila hai wo chen jaey ga..

Arjun: nahi mei usay dobara paa k khona nahi chahta..

Beggar: ja usay apna bana lay is say pehlay dyar ho jaey, mei us malik say teray liay dua karun ga… par taqdeer ka likha nahi badal sakta..

Arjun leaves from there.

At night, whole ETF Mumbai is on the Mumbai night Club..

Arjun: ye kaisi jagh hai yahan k log dekhay hai kitnay ajeeb hain.

Riya: ye night club hai Arjun, yahan mostly youngsters aatay hain..

Arjun: but saam hum yahan us shaks ko dhonden k kaisay

Sameer: Riya meri baat ghor say suno, tumhain bhi in mei shamil ho k inki tarha dance karna hai, wo tumhain is party mei dekh k zaroor tum par attack karay ga,..

Arjun: but saam Riya akeli wahan jaey gi, nahi saam mei bhi jaun ga..

Sameer: agar unhen shak ho gaya toh.

Arjun: nahi hoga shaks I promise, mei apni Riya ko aaisay nahi janay dunga.

Sameer: ok.. hum yahin hain apni positions mei tum aur riya aandar jao.

Arjun and Riya: ok .

Arjun: Riya ye kaisi jagh hai , mujhay samjh nahi aata aaj kal k youngster ko kya ho gaya hai, aaisi parties mei aatay hain, aur in k parents kaisay hain inhen mana bhi nahi kartay…

Riya: Arjun aaj k youngsters hai apki tarha Old nahi hai. Yahan sirf couples allowed hain wo dekhen aur yahan saray couple mojood hai..

Arjun: aaj kal k nojawano mei pyar k yahi importance hain, pyar k naam par ye aaiyashiyan kartay hain , ye toh pyar k naam ko badnaam kar rhay hain, aur songs suno kaisay wahiyat song hai..

Waiter: sir agar aap logo ko dance karna hai toh Karen warna please aap bahir chalen jaen.

Riya: nahi bhaiya hum ja hi rhay hain dancefloor par kyun Arjun..

Arjun smiles : ya..

Riya: chalen.

Arjun: mei nahi jar ha..

Riya: ok I go..

She rushes towards dancefloor and start dancing . A boy follows her.

Boy: hey ap akeli aai ho is party mei apka partner nahi aaya.

Riya want to explain, but he cuts her in between.

Boy: koi baat nahi I understand so aap meray sath join kyun nahi karti mei bhi akela hi hun.

Riya: no thanks meray husband aatay hi hun gay.

Boy: aachhh Husband, mujhay laga k aap yahan apnay boyfriend k sath aai hungi.

Arjun interrupts .

Arjun: kyun koi apnay husband k sath nahi aa sakta..

Boy: ha kyun nahi par mostly husband wife aaisi parties mei nahi aatay ..

Arjun: If you permit us we can dance?

Boy: sure wht not sir

Riya: Aap to nahi aanay walay thay..

Arjun: bus aa gaya , mujhay tumhara khayal aaya socha dance toh hai tora dance hi ho jaey..

Song is played..

"Humko kehte superman
On karlo handy cam
From AM to PM
Bande at your service mam

Arjun pulls her towards him.

Tenu main love karda
Bematlab karda

He encircle her hand around his neck.
Baahon mein aa soniye
Bus aaj raat ke liye

He moves his finger on her check
Saadi taa desi hai adaa
Saade te hojaa ni fidaa

He pulls her closer .
Baahon mein aa soniye
Bus aaj raat ke liye
Subha hone na de
Saath khone na de
Ek dusre ko
Hum sone na de
Tu mera hero..
O o o..oo
Tu mera hero..
O o o..oo

Subha hone na de
Saath khone na de
Ek dusre ko
Hum sone na de
Main tera hero..
O o
Haan hero
O o
Haan hero
Main tera hero..

Let's go..

Now they face opposite each other and Arjun put his hand around her waist and rubbing his nose on her neck

Hai mainu tu hot lagdi
Lakhaan daa note lagdi

Now he move his around here and there in her waist
Mauka mila hai abhi
Hoga na phir yeh kabhi

Saanu bhi dudge kar le
Ae ae
Mazaa too much kar le
Ae ae

She move away from him, She still face opposite he holds her both hand and pulls , encircles his hand around her
Baahon mein aa soniye
Bus aaj raat ke liye
Saadi pardesi hai adaa
Saade te hojaa ni fidaa
Baahon mein aa soniye
Bus aaj raat ke liye
Subha hone na de
Saath khone na de
Ek dusre ko
Hum sone na de
Tu mera hero..
O o o..oo
Tu mera hero..
O o o..oo

Subha hone nade
Saath khone na de
Ek dusre ko
Hum sone na de
Tu mera hero..
O o o..oo
Tu mera hero..
O o o..oo

Main tera hero..

A man say to another.

Man: oh dekho riya.

2nd: riya mukherjee yahan.

1st man: agar ye yahan hai to pori ETF bhi yahin hogi.

2nd: nahi itnay din say hum isay dhind rhay thay aaj isay aaisay kaisay chor dyn..

1st : pagal hai kya sher k monh mei hath dal raha hai.

2nd: janata hai boss nay kya kaha tha k har hal mei usnhen Riya Mukherjee murda chaheay agar aaj isay zinda chor dyn gay toh kal hum zinda nahi milen gay.

1st: mei aasia risk nahi laynay wala.

2nd: tujahy nahi layna tu nahi lay risk, par mei toh chala..

1st: soch lay .

2nd: soch lia.

1st: par I k sath kaun hai..

2nd: ACP Arjun Surayakant Rawate.

1st: tu is k samnay usay maray ga.

2nd: tu dekhta ja.


Sun lo ameeron
Banda mein rab da
Main friend sab da
Dekhe duniyaa ke kone
Bus hum dono hi sone
Kudiyon mein apne charche
Hum pe karti hai kharche
Life ne aisa dhoya
Main jaan bachake soya
Guru se maine bola
Yeh bola bola
Subha hone nade

Subha hone na de
Saath khone na de
Ek dusre ko
Hum sone na de
Tu mera hero..
O o o..oo
Tu mera hero..

Humko kehte superman
On karlo handy cam
From AM to PM
Bande at your service mam

Mera hero..
O o..
Mera hero..
O o..
Mera hero..

At the end of the song the light of the venue become dim, no one sees other.

Suddendly light on , But Riya is not there,

Arjun: shout Riya , riya Where are you, he runs towards sameer.

He sees some one drags Riya in the cars, Arjun follows them.

Sameer: simar Arjun kahan gaya aur Riya kahan hain.

Simar: pata nahi..

Sameer: ok karan say kaho Arjun ka phone trace Karen.

…………………………….**********************……………………..

Man: toh tu hai RIya mukherjee aaj tak naam suna tha aaj ap k darshan bhi ho gay.

Riya: kaun ho tum.

Man: batata hun itni jaldi bhi kya hai Miss Riya Mukherjee, pehli ap ki khatir ho jaey phir aap ko upper bhejnay ki tyarai Karen gay..

Arjun shouted behin that man.

Arjun: sikander chor do Riya ko.

Sikander turns.

Sikander: ACP Arjun rawate, aap yahan meray ghar k naseeb phir say jag uthay aap phir yahan tasreef lay aaey.. aap yahan aae hi gay hain toh aaj bh isay tofatan hamein day k jaeay,

Arjun: kaha na chor day usay..

Sikander: kyun chor dun usay lagti kya hai teri, ek baat mani paray gi itni haseen officer rakha hai tu nay par kya Karen hum apni patni say dhoka nahi kar saktay, bhai hum apni mohabat k pakay hain kahin nahi dagmagen gay..

Arjun: tu chahta kya hai, tu Riya ko kyun marna chahta hai..

Sikander: awaz neechi rakho ACP ye mera ghar hai , mei tujhay aur isay dono ko marna chahta hun, pehlay toh tub ach gaya par is baar nahi, bol, pehlay tujhay marun ya is larki ko..

Arjun: tu usay chor day sikander teri jang mujh say hai na phir isay kyun marna chahta hai..

Sikander takes a knife and cuts Riya hand.

Riya: ouch.

Arjun shouts: sikander..

Sikander: sorry ghalti say ho gaya. Par ek bar tu aur chilaya na is k jism par ek aur ghao lagay ga.

Arjun: nahi tu Riya ko kuch mat karna.

Sikander: teri ye tarap mei nay us pal kyun nahi dekhi jab mei nay teri patni ko mara tha

Arjun: nahi sikander tumhain jaan leni hai na meri lo magar Riya ko chor do please sikander..

RIya: nahi Arjun …

Sikander: ab boli na tu bol isay mar dun pehlay..

Riya: nahi , tumhain mujhay marna hain na mujhay maro, unhen kyun takleef day rhay ho..

Sikander: ek baat bata sach batana, ye tera lagta kya hai ..

Riya: kyun bataun mei tumhain ye meray lagtay kya hain..

Sikander: mat bata mujhayye janay mei koi dilchaspi hai, bus tum dono decide kar lo marna kisay hai pehlay tujhay ya isay..

Arjun: tujhay marna hai na mujhay mar..

Sikander: mar ka shoq hai na ye lay…. Na na na aaisay kasiay marnay say pehlay tujhay ye janay ka haq hai na.. ek sachai sun, Roshini Roshini rawate janta hai na usay teri patni jis ka Ram naam satay ho gaya tha…. Wo mari nahi zinda hai milna chahta hai bulata hun, Roshini darling dekh kaun aaya hai tera aashiq.

Roshini: Arjun. She runs towards Arjun but sikander hold her.

Sikander: o my dear tera pati mera matlab hai tera X husband…, Arjun milo in say ye hain Roshini Rawate… na na na Roshini sikander meri patni…

Arjun and riya become shocked.

Sikander: jhatka laga na… soch raha hoga ye zinda kaisay hai.. chalo marnay say pehlay tujhay bata hi deta hun… Tu aaj zinda hain tu Roshini Sikander k kurbani ki wajah say warna tujhay mei usi roz mar deta, par teri patni bar bar kyun isay teri patni keh raha hun I mean meri patni nay agar us raat mujh say teri zindagi ki bheek na magi hoti toh tu zinda nahi hota, unhhh kitna pyar karti hai na ye tujh say, par is ay kahin zayda pyar mei is say karta hun, hai na Roshini darling… ha toh mei kahan tha sun kya huwa tha us raat ko.

Flashback.

Man: lay aaya hun Arjun Rawate aur uski patni ko, Arjun Rawate behosh hai aur uski patni o goli lagi hai.

Sikander: kahan hai wo dono.

Man: yahan hai boss.

Sikander: tu nay is par goli chalai is larki par aray iski khubsurati dekhi hai tu nay tu nay osay goli mari lay tub hi mar..

He shots that man.

Sikander: ab kharay kharay mun kya tak rhay ho doctor ko bulao..

After 30 min.

Sikander: kya huwa doctor kaisi hai wo.

Dctor: theek hai ap un say mil saktay hai.

Roshini shout: Arjun mera Arjun kahan hai..

Sikander: jaan chilla kyun rahi ho .

Roshini: kaun ho tum mera Arjun kahan hai.

Sikander: mat lay uska naam…

Roshini: kya kya hai tum nay meray Arjun k sath mujhay mera Arjun chaheay.

Sikander: shutup kya Arjun ka kamla parhay jar hi ho dekh wo rha tera Arjun.

Roshini: Arjun she tries to reacj near Arjun but he catch her.

Sikander: mar day us ACP ko.

Roshini: nahi please aaisa mat karo mei us k bina zinda nahi reh sakti.

Sikander: tujhay zinda rehna hai jaan meray liay.

Roshini: nahi mujhay mera Arjun chaeay.

Sikander: theek hai baksh di teray pati ki jaan,

Roshini: sach

Sikander: ha, par sikander kisi ko koi cheez muft mei nahi bakshta, tujhay marna paray ga.

Roshini: mei tyar hun marnay k liay.

Sikander: nahi jaan tujhay tere Arjun k liay marna hoga aur meray liay zinda rehna hoga, tujhya mujh say shadi karni hogi.

Roshini: nahi kabhi nahi.

Sikander: soch lay tut u aasiay bhi meri hi aur isay mar k bhi meri hi hogi faisala tera hai, tu widwa ho k suhagan bana chahti hai, ya ……….

Roshini: theek hai mei tyar hun par Arjun ko chor do, mei wada karti hun mei kabhi palat k bhi apnay past ki taraf nahi dekhungi.

Flash back ends.

Sikander: ha kaisi lagi meri surprice. Par ACP Arjun aaj tujhay marna hoga.

Roshini: nahi Sikander Arjun ko chor do.

Sikander: Roshini meri jaan, tum ab tak mujhay nahi jaan pai sikander ehsan bar bar nahi karta aaj ACP ko marna hai.

He point his guns to Arjuns and shot, but Roshini comes in between.

Sikander drops his gun.

Sikander: ye kya kyat u nay nahi tum mujhy chor k nahi ja sakti nahi Roshini uthho, kharay kya ho doctor ko bulao, tum nay is shaks k liay jaan di nahi mei isay nahi chorun ga He shots Arjun but someone shots him from back, he falls the shoter is non other than Riya, Roshini is lying in Arjun legs in unconscious condition , Riya runs towards Arjun to hug him but she stop by seeing Roshini, ETF team reach there by tracing Arjun cell and arrested all the gang member of sikander and Siaknder dead body is lying on the floor. Arjun walks toward Riya and hug her.


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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update :) loved it😛😛😛

loved ajrun's dialogue "teray galay mei ek board laga detay hain "😆😆
omg roshni is alive🤢 and is married to sikander 😲
nd abt my ariya whts gonna happen 2 them r they gonna be together 😕,or roshini will create problem 4 them 😡😡😡
loved arjun👏 he walked straight to his riyu.⭐️⭐️⭐️
but wht i couldn,t understand was why sikander wanted to kill riya 😡was roshini making him do soShocked, plz clear my confusion.😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yaar...
Zor ka jhatka laga mujhe...
Kya twist dala hai tumne...
Maanna parega tumhe...
Yay...
Riya killed Sikki...
Uss khasmanu khane toh ek din marna hi thha...
Arjun is safe,and,so is Riya...
Thank God.
Hope Roshni is ok.
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh roshni is alive
what a twist yaar
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update :) loved it
loved ajrun's dialogue "teray galay mei ek board laga detay hain zarorat-e- rishta, ek teez , hanseen khubsorat biwi darker hai jo strickly meray isharon par chal sakay.."🤣
riya called him rawan :)
so sikander is the one who wanted to kill riya 😡 hate him
omg roshni is alive and is married to sikander 😲
sikander shot roshni :(
thank god riya killed him
eagerly waiting for next part
hope roshni is fine...
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon

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