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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guy's I'm back with an update. This is exclusively a Kriyansh update, like akku wanted it. I hope you guys like it.




Chapter 10:



Kriya was wearing a 3/4th black leggings with grey top, which according to her which was suitable and comfortable for her to wear at the club.

Her Dress:



Rey carefully took her out of the club, away from the crowd. He messaged Swayam that, Kriya and he are leaving.


Once they reached outside, Rey asked kriya "So, ab kya karne ka plan hai? It's still 7:30."


"Umm, I don't know...aap hi kuch socho..."


"Beech par chale??"


"umm..okay..."


They started walking on the road to find any cab or taxi, but unfortunately there wasn't any. Strangely the roads of Goa were empty. Silence was prevailing between them. Kriya decided to break the ice since she was curious to ask the question that was wandering in her mind.


"Rey can I ask you a question?"


"Kriya you don't have to take my permission. You can freely ask whatever you want to."


"You're a party freak right?'


"Yeah"


"Then why did you leave the club for me. As far as I know you never ever leave any party or club when it is your type. Then why today?"


Rey had no answer at that moment. She was absolutely correct. He loved partying and clubbing and would never leave in between. But today he felt like leaving it. He didn't want to her to stay there and sulk in some corner. He didn't want to see any irritated expression on her face instead he wanted to see her curvy smile that automatically lightens him. He didn't feel like dancing with one of those skimpy girls, rather he wanted to spend some time with her.


"Err...I don't know. I felt like doing it and I did it."


"Hmm"


Again the silence interefered between them. While they were walking, Kriya halted for a minute. She caught hold of Rey's shoulder for support and bent down a little to adjust her stilletoes. Rey loved it. Her touch gave him a different feeling. Many girls had touched him but none of them had the magic to create butterflies in his stomach. His hand involuntarily crept over hers. On sensing his touch, kriya looked up to meet his gaze. His warm chocolate orbs kind of hypnotized her.


He pulled her up and made her stand straight. His hand rested on her back while hers comfortably lay on his shoulder. They were deeply drowned in each other's eyes.


Their moment was disturbed by the horn of a vehicle. They immediately jerked apart. It was a cab approaching them. Before it would pass by them, Rey shouted to stop it.


"Stop...stop!!" Rey yelled. On seeing him yell in this way, kriya couldn't control herself and started giggling.


"What??" He asked with a confused expression.


"N...nothing" She said in between her giggles.


The cab stopped in front of them and they got inside. The drive was a silent one. Rey streched out his arm and placed it on her left shoulder. He was hesitant at first but then slowly place his hand on her shoulder and pulled her towards him.


Kriya was surprised at this action of Rey. She looked towards him and found him staring at her. She lowered her lashes and looked away letting his hand over shoulder. Kriya was surprised at herself too.


"Had it been any other guy, I wouldn't even let him get close to me. Then why couldn't I stop Rey? Why am I letting Rey cross the limits that I've set for myself?" Kriya wondered.


"Gosh! What's wrong with me? Why am I feeling nervous with a girl's presence? Why am I thinking a lot before taking any step? I know Kriya's different from the rest but then she's a girl and Reyansh Singhaniya never gets hesitant in front of a girl. There's something in her that pulls me towards her. What is the feeling that I feel for her??" Rey deliberated.


The cab driver on noticing them so close to each other, said "Sir, ma'am both of you make a lovely couple."


On hearing this from the driver both their cheeks turned crimson.


"Uh...there's nothing like that." Rey said.


"Hota hai sir...shuru shuru mein sab log yehi bolte hai." The driver said laughing in between.

Finally they reached the beach. The beach wasn't completely packed. Only a few couples were roaming around. At first they felt kind of odd there. But then as the time passed by, they eased out with each other.

"You know Rey; I just love walking on the shore with the water touching my feet." Kriya said inhaling the fragrance of the serene atmosphere.

"And why so?"

"I don't know. It gives me an appeasing feeling. I feel relaxed."


Rey had intertwined their hands and Kriya showed no objection to it. She was actually comfortable with. They continued walking along the shore while sharing about their memories. Most of the time it was Kriya who was speaking and he was enjoying it. She was actually opening up herself. He was getting to know about her better.

"Aap kuch nahi bologe?"

"No..."

"Kyu??"

"Because tum bahut kam bolti ho and now I don't want to interrupt you. All I want to do is just keep listening to your melodious voice." He said with utmost honesty from the bottom of his heart. Kriya lowered her eyes. Rey lifted her chin and stared at her emerald orbs.

"Dance??" He asked forwarding his hand.

"Yahan? Sabke saamne?" She asked looking around.

"Ha yahin. When we're with each other why do we need to think about the others?"

Today he was letting his heart speak on his behalf. He was permitted his heart to voice out his treasured feelings. Slowly, she placed her hand in his.

"But music?"

Rey took out his mobile and randomly played a song. He placed it on a nearby stone. Fortunate enough, the song that started playing was Tum Hi Ho. They began their dance. It was a slow and romantic one.

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera (x2)
Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

He pulled her towards her and placed his hands on her waist. Kriya was hesitant at first. Tentatively she placed her hands over his shoulder. The just swayed side to side, slowly lost in the depth of the emotions in the other's eyes. Rey's grip on her was firm. On hearing the music being played, people gathered around them.

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

He pulled her towards him, such that she banged in to his chest. Slowly pushing her away he twirled her. He made sure that they never lost the eye contact. His touch on her body created havoc within her. She began to feel comfortable and no longer was cautious about the eyes on them.



Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

His hands crept from her waist to her face, touching over her curves and neck. Kriya wriggled at his touch. He pushed away those locks of her disturbing his view. He turned her, such that her back faced him. He lifted her hand and caressed his face him. He then let her away from him sideways and then pulled her towards him. He repeated it for twice.



Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
Tumhi ho... Tumhi ho...

He lifted her in his arms and swirled around. He lifted her as if she was a fragile feather. Well she was no less than that.


Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..


"I feel different around you. Every time I see your eyes, I feel like drowning in them. You surely know how to cast a magic spell on people." He purred in her ears while dancing. Kriya just closed her eyes feeling that moment.

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho (x2)

Her back had faced him. She let her head rest on his shoulder while they continued swaying to the tune.

As the music ended, they heard applauses of people. "You guys are such a romantic couple." One of the girls present there said. Both of them looked down blushing.

To lighten up the atmosphere Rey, took Kriya in the water and they played there for some time. They were having a lot of fun. Both of them were completely drenched. Rey couldn't take his eyes off her. He had seen many girls drenched in water with their clothes hugging them, but none of them look as angelic as her. Rey wrapped his jacket around her on seeing her rubbing her arms. They headed back to the hotel.



So, how's it?

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Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
its really
awesome
so romantic
so cute
so ahem ahem
i really loved it
loved each n every scene
so real
their dance was awesome
loved the caring rey
this side of rey is so cute
i again fell in love with this ff
update soon
Edited by crazysky - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
its such a cute and romantic update...:)
luved dis syd of rey...:)
jus awesome update...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
AAHHH... *screams loudly* ... OMG OMGG OMGEEE... Mannuuu... I Love youuu...I LOVE YOU SO SOO SOOO MUCH *runs to hug u* 🤗
maine toh jst KR exclusive manga tha...Tune to Tum hi ho saath mei free de diya.. Eekksss... 😃
i sooo just loved it... 😃 ... you know der was a sweet si smile all the time on my face throughout this update... 😳
Kria ne bhi kya mast questn pucha Rey se regarding party leaving & he spechles 😆
Taxi driver ko bhi shak hogya..haha.. 😛 .. then that oh so romantic beach walk..haaye.. 😳
Tum hi ho was like a Cherry on top.. 😳
i wonder tu crowd ko beech mei kyu leke aayi..? Ek kiss toh ho he jaati varna.. 😛
but i just loved it..the way u portrayed der feelings.. It was Megical... Loved it to the core... 😳
Thabk you for this Mannu... 🤗
Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
When they were walking on streets..when they kept looking at each others eyes...i just loved that moment... 😳
Uske baad in Taxi whn Rey held her shoulders... Mann...i just loved that... And all the confusion which was gng on in der minds... 😳
and whn they both stood in beach...interwining der hands... Eeppp... Haaye... Maar he daalo... 😳
P.S. - these were the things which i missed in prev comment as i cnt comment longer than 1000 words via ph...including all the bold..italic stuff...
So baaki ka installment ye raha... 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read it twice... Lol... 😆
This chappy truly made me Fall Badly for this story..!!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahhhmazingg update
it was so serene, so beautiful ..
Was waiting for such a romantic update..
Finally Rey has started to listen to his heart..
Luvd it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
the chapter was must magical and awesome chapter loved it... 😊😊😊😊😊
and finally they clear their between everything their confusion and express it in the best ways..
🤗 🤗🤗 and the song selection and dance amazing ...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Supab update
love kr moment
they were so cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
marvelous...
the song, the dance,
everything was perfect...
loved it to the core..
kriyaansh is slowly faling in love...
superb..
mindblowing...
update it soon dear...

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