CMYAD T13E: Chp 69: The Counter-Attack

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Anandi Rahman

@CrazyDollAnandi

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

U're back 😃.
Nice update. Still confused about the masked man.
Plz pm me from next update.

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

@Lord.Voldemort: Nyc story n nyc thread!!!!😊

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@Crazy-fanarhi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

It was seriously sooo coolll!!!ugghhh..GAAWDD HOW MUCH I HATE THE MASKED KING!!and uh-uh*holds finger up*is he gonna rule or invade the kingdom!!

Im sooo happy khushi talked some sense into arnav..bechaara went all numb..but thank goodness he got over it soon.

Oh..i know..i know now armav is gonna maybe fight till he frees them like..kinda breaks the spell and there FREEE!!haha arnav to the rescueee..again!!😳😳

Ooohh..i cant wait for the next chapter!!yeah yeah i know i replied late and..well i was travelling and didnt have internet*yeah it was like i was in STONE AGE🤣🤣*update SOOONNN😳😳

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..SunnYaara..

@..SunnYaara..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Hey evil...how r u? Where is the update yaar?

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

soo now time for my comment..
soo mr. this story made me go crazy
i completed freaking 13 threads in 1 day...
and right before my maths exams...

but this story held me...
it was soo mysterious to know about the nightmares but wen it came out it was suparb
khushi the queen and arnav the king...
everything was jusy awesome...

the update which freaked the hell out of me was wen arnav asked absh and his men to beat him and that bikke jump into water was just wat do i say...

u rrealy had an evil mind dude...
wen i started reading the story i felt tat a girl cannot write such stuff {maybe rey can as writer if harry potter is a girk }
nut wen i checked ur profile u wre a male...

soo it was interesting as i was reading the work of the first male writer othr den me { i read my own stories to lolx}
but u really have a mind and a great creativity power ...
building such a story and pouring rite emotions mystry love is a difficult job..*saying if i am a writing critic lolz*
i just love this stoty...
and will love to read more...

the story has a essence
essence of power love suspence...
extremities and everything...

just loving the tigers and the cub and the bolt...
hope too see a happy ending...

update soon...
please pm me...
regards
..hrideyy..
byeee
meet u in the next update...

ps:this is the longest comment i have ever written*tired* off to slrep tommorow is maths exam pray for me

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maliha

@dangerangel

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

yhur storii iz luk awesommee! ah cnt beleev dah yhu actuallii wryt dis its lyk totally diffrnt! ah dnt usually reed stuff lyk dis buh yhu changed it all! dah white room kindah reminds me of narnia the lion the witch n da wardrobe! update soon! its absolutely aaawwwesome! n plz dnt leev it on a cliffhanger! an ah hav da worlds weirdest feelin dat the masked man iz dah one who he used tah fyt before da kingdom! (ah hav a bad memorii wi namez sorrii:( )

update soon xox