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Posted: 12 years ago
Buddy what eh start!!

I was wondering who this lady is n den aditiya n den avantika came up I was like is this ArShi story? Is the girl phanku n pkdh!! But when kinjal came up 8 was like no twist again n den karan came up I was like whose karan now?

N wedding n then repentance n den for d sake of login some one she agreeing for a. Child n den I realized may b arnav or khushis parents but my khushi said it all!!

Sad man d story touched my heart! But I was just wondering somewhere deep down kinjal could hv moved on! Atleast tried!! Its hard but when u don't try u relli hv no clue! Who knws things might hv changed! She could have had a lyf n her daughter might nt hv hated her den n loved her der oso like she loves her now!! Hmm

Cheers waiting for Arnavs entry!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow amazing story very interesting and different
can't wait to read more continue soon please and thank u for pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
ver interesting the message as well as the prologue
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great concept and very interesting!👍🏼
First I thought it was khushi who was writing the letter.
But then the father said kinjal I was like whaaat? Who is kinjal?😕
The last part cleared it out that khushi is kinjal's daughter.
Kinjal's story is really sad.
Please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: precious-pie

Sounds intresting!!!!
Is aditiya is related to arnav?????


maybe 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TwilightStar_JP

Buddy what eh start!!

I was wondering who this lady is n den aditiya n den avantika came up I was like is this ArShi story? Is the girl phanku n pkdh!! But when kinjal came up 8 was like no twist again n den karan came up I was like whose karan now?

N wedding n then repentance n den for d sake of login some one she agreeing for a. Child n den I realized may b arnav or khushis parents but my khushi said it all!!

Sad man d story touched my heart! But I was just wondering somewhere deep down kinjal could hv moved on! Atleast tried!! Its hard but when u don't try u relli hv no clue! Who knws things might hv changed! She could have had a lyf n her daughter might nt hv hated her den n loved her der oso like she loves her now!! Hmm

Cheers waiting for Arnavs entry!


"But I was just wondering somewhere deep down kinjal could hv moved on!"

there's more to the story 😉
a little more to it in Chapter 3 😉
Edited by evrydayirabbave - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow amazingt
this concept is totally different,,wasnt expecting it
so kinjal is dead now?
was actually confused if this was an arhi story=] lovely suprise
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the concept..very emotional , I must say...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg that letter was sooo emotional bought a lump in my throat loved you setting the past and very intrigued fir the next part :) thanks for the pm can't wait for the next oart :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great story.. looking forward to it.. her mum went thru a lot.. continue soon

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