ArHi SS- Beauty and the Brute::Thread2::Chapter16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

love payal and get well soon

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sruthick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Cngratz on new thread...
Finally.. U updated...
I was waitng 4 ur PM..
Asusual...Awesm update... Lovd it...
Poor Khushi...Flt bad 4 her...She s cmpltly brokn...
Ad Arnav hate 2 her in this conditn...
He s very nice in this update...
So...He care 4 her,...
Cntinue soon

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dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

poor khushi emotional she is broken and arnav thinking about giving his marriage a try glad he realized she just need to cry out her pain and payal she is so sweet loved the update thanks for the pm

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Swetyz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Beautiful story...can't wait to read more

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reshkn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

..so finally an update...😊😊

to me,the first few scenes were mind blowing...to see khushi..to feel her agony...heart wrenching...i cud actually visualise the scene unfolding before my eyes...very well written👏

and then Payal...tat wasnt expected.. and now we have 1 more lovable member in the family...maybe she l be another cupid...

cant wait for the dinner...update soon plz..😊

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MidnightReader

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Hi! 😊

It was definitely an emotional chapter but it did have a hint of romance in it especially when Arnav put the blanket on them. I really enjoy the way you write and describe the characters emotions and perspective. 👏

I can see Arnav is starting to feel and care for Khushi. I am glad he decided to apologize but I am wondering why the sudden change? Is he feeling guilty and feeling bad the Khushi has no one?

Aww…Payal is such a kind and sweet person. 😊 I am glad that at least Khushi will have someone to open with and someone other than Arnav to comfort her. Anjali also supports Khushi but I don't know why I think Payal would be more close to Khushi.

Akash! I am still not a fan of him but I think getting to know more about him will maybe change my perspective. I am sure he is a kind person just like the Akash in the show. 😊

Please continue soon. ⭐️

Happy New Year!!! 🥳

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Aliya_hzsn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Loved the Update!!

When i was reading the first few paragraphs i found myself tearing..!! Youve written it so well, that i actually felt the pain!!

Her muffled sobs and cries and arnav comforting her afterwards sounds so Loving and caring!!

Payal introduced!!I like her character!!

Please please update the next chapter soon!!!

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Homeslice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Thank god you updated!

I died for so long waiting!

Loved the Pa-Shi convo!

How you get better soon!

And yes the ArSHI part was OMG. Marvelous job!

Update SOON Please i beg you! :P

LOve you take care!

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LoveArnavKhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Nice update.. I am liking this Arnie..

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Sanj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Congrats for the new Thread...

Awesome Update...loved it...Poor Khushi Roh rahi thi...aur Arnav ne shadi ko ek try dene ka socha...Payal is very Sweet...Waiting for the next Update...