ArHi SS- Beauty and the Brute::Thread2::Chapter16

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ace13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

i like this payal..

nd akash is halh brother of asr...goshhh

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soppy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

im glad arnav is comming around!...please make him fall desperately in love with her!

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tina_1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

amazin part

congo for new thread

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Summer99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

loved the story, the over all look of the story is calm and serene

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Arati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Hey!

Congratulations on the new thread!

Loved the update...Arnav's concern for khushi was really well written..and i love Payal...

looking forward to some light moments between arnav and khushi...:)

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shilpa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

i was thrilled to see an pudate. happy new year to you. i loved payal. she is so muhfhat.

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Anjani Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Res res res!!

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New Thread! ^_^ Yay!!! Must be exciting! :)

And thanks for the sweet mention ;))

Third Page?!?! I'm a bad Di :'( *pouts*

Now to the update ---->

Ok so I looked over the chapter and did a little seeing it was pretty long! ^_^

Then I had to go back and reread/skim over chapter 11. I just LOVE Khushi's outburst at Akash in that for some strange reason >.<

The first scene with Khushi in the bathroom broken heart. It made me think about if I had lost my father when I was around her age(now) and I could literally feel the pain she went through.

That was brilliantly written Pari<3

Arnav here seems to move a little faster then a Arnav on the show... Yesh!

I'm so glad he's going to give Khushi a chance :) I'm also glad her had great hearing and he found Khushi!

The way he just held her<3 *dreamy sigh*

Payal seems like the Khushi of the show! Her mouth runs faster than the Hoshiarpur Express! Lol. But she cute and lovable ^_^

Akash Akash Akash. I just knew he couldn't be that bad! It's understandable. He probably presumed his brother didn't like Khushi and so that's what he went with. Let's see how Khushi wins him over as well ;)

Ok, Arnav disappeared after Khushi passed out... Kaha gaya?! >.<

This update was wonderful. I felt like it was probably needed in a sense and it fit perfectly. :)

Can't wait for the next chapter where everyone's going to play Dinner-Dinner! ;D *cringes at bad joke*

Oh and I love you Pari ji<3

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 12 years ago