||~Something About You~||#4 *COMPLETED* - Page 9

nice update, Khushi finally started coming out of the shock, waiting for more Arshi moments

Congrats 4 new thread
lovely update

arnav opened up...goodie!!!!!!

K has a lot to say as always.

That kid was nursing a broken heart for her whole existence to be unturned in the manner it was. Poor Khushi to come to terms with the truth of her birth and the murder of her mother, which led to the suicide of her father. She is just a baby as Arnav puts it and to be able to shoulder that, it is so difficult, my heart went out to her. Her brother and sister are cousins all of a sudden and her parents are uncle and aunt. Her whole life has turned over, what all will she bear. This bit you have written with such poignancy, kudos girl and I like the story all the more for that. I did feel sad while reading all this.

The malicious gossip has not spared Khushi's ears and poor thing to wonder why she was subject to it all these years and to be introduced to the truth and in that manner, I feel horrible thinking of her plight. I want to club the whole society she moves around with a blunt object till their thick skulls are sense filled.

It is so believable the way things unfolded in the story, the right amount of feelings, nothing over the top. The way everyone handles Khushi after the revelation was so relatable, that is how a loving family reacts to a loved one coming to terms with their truth. They have not changed but Khushi has.

I love the manner Arnav handled the whole truth disclosure, in his style angry at the world for subjecting his Khushi to all that pain. I loved how he was relentless in quelling her pain, he spoke with so much sense and feeling, it did have an impact on Khushi and she worked on that talk they had. She reached out to her parents and her family to help heal her wounds. Arnav too realizes he is so into Khushi that he wants to take care of her for the rest of her life, can this get any better and I am hoping it will.

I better stop before I write too much and make you hate me.

Love the story Fari and you girl are doing a great job with it.

congrats on the new thread hope there's more to come:)
aww love the way Arnav had consoled her :)

i loved how Arnav talked to Khushi, and him realizing that he would always be there for her. i am glad khushi is taking the first step towards healing :)

Wow the fact that this beautiful story has reached thread 4 makes me feel less adequate to even comment!