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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
last both ur update was awesome
i love them
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved d update
swaron were so cute n romantic..
thanks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb update :-) thanks for the pm

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
ok here's the next part :D hope U guys enjoy it :) there's not much of swaron tho :/
Part 5b At st.louis
Rey: guys chalo abhi, VP sir ne hum sabko bulaya...atrium mein assemble karna hai.
All assemble in the atrium...where VP sir is waiting for them.
Sw: sir apne bulaya?
VP: haan. First and foremost, welcome back to st.louis :) and yea meine decide karli ki ab aapka surprise ka waqt aagaya hai. I'm sure rey ne aap sab ko bata diya ki hum iss baar kuch nayi karnewali hai.
RDX: Exactly. Iss saal humara college mein mein ek dance fest hogi.
All: RDX sir!!
Rdx: yes guys, iss baar meine socha kyun na mein meri students ke saath kuch time karlu.
Neha: aap abhi bhi looking very handsome sir.
Vicky: tho mein kaggu??:(
Neha: tum thoo mera hero ho, so u looking extra handsome. ;)
*viha share a hug*
Avp: so getting back to the point guys, aaj humare college ka dance fest hai...so...
Sw: so hum judges hain?
Nicole: nope, u r the participants...hi swayam..&Sharon :)
Sharon looks at swayam while they tell hi back, with possessiveness..
Swayam engaged in a conversation with Nicole didn't notice it...
Tanni: Don't worry bhabhi, bhai aapka hi hai. ;D
Sharon looks around in surprise as the gang goes *yes Sharon, kal aaj or kal*
Sw: umm...ye dialogue kisliye?
Sh: wo wo kuch nai...
Nil: so Nicole, aap abhi bhi itni beautiful ho...how come? *moves forward with a lost expression and simmi pulls him back, and slaps his head, glaring at him*
Nil: I mean you still look the same ma'am...
(to simmi) you're forever mine so don't worry ;)
Nicole: umm..thanks nilesh...
Vp: ok so back to the topic, aaj dance fest hai...or aap log participate kar rahi ho...
Rey: par sir Hume tho unprepared hain...
Sw: haan...rehearsals nahi karli, costumes...kuch nahi hai humare pass...
Sh: haan sir so how can we participate?
Vp: no problem, humare students sab manage kar liya hai...or dance aap sabka career hai na...tho ye easy task hai...unless you guys are bored of dance..
Rey: no sir, dance humara passion tha or humesha rahegi.
Amar: haan dance humale liye dil (looking at rinni) dosti (at bharath and the rest), dono dey diya hai...
Simmi: yes sir iss liye humara motto hai...
All: Dil Dosti Dance
Rdx: exactly besides dancing can be even your old performances...
Rinni: tho phir costumes?
Avp: aapka costumes locker room mein hai...
Bharath: par hum perform kya karegi?
Nicole: anything...paso doble?(looking at swaron)
Rdx: wo dance Jo boys ne kiya...meri sangeet mein...or girls bhi...
Avp: the folk dance you did in college
Vp: boys, you guys did a dance on dangers of love? ^^
all: ok so...lets do it!! For dil dosti or dance!!
Avp: ek minute, u guys have to give a solo performance each also.
All: yes ma'am :D
And they leave for the changing rooms...talking of what to do first.
Vicky: Hume solo karna chahiye...first aur phir...
Nil: couple dance...
Rinni: 3rd group dance!
Swaron: perfect
*look at each other while the gang go awww*
Rey: ok so it's decided then solo first...let's go dress up guys...late ho raha hai...
They change and assemble at the backstage...
Sw: tumhe yaad hai? Dance camp mein...performance...national champion...hum...
Sh: humara pehla hug...pehla promise for forever...meine tumge ek flying kiss diya...tumne wo return nahi karli...
Sw: don't worry aaj raat meine tumhe wo kiss with interest return karlunga.
Sh: you know mein kitni lucky hoon? Tum kaise itni ache ho?
Sw: mein kitni baar bolu...mein lucky hoon to have the love of my life to love me back...
Sh: coz u made me fall in love with you...bahot pehle...i didn't realize it...vaise tum jaise perfect guy ke saath kon pyaar nahi karuga?
Sw: mein or perfect? Right, agar mein perfect hoon...tho tumhare liye mere pass words nahi hain...sirf ek phrase 'out of this world' ho tum
Sh: oh please...
Sw: no such mein Sharon...mein imperfect or incomplete hoon tumhari bina...
Sh: mein bhi (blushes and rests her head swayam's shoulder as he holds her by her waist)
Vp: so guys humara dance fest shuru honewale hain...solo performances ke saath...so may I call upon reyansh singhania to start the show with lyrical hip hop solo?
And so it goes on...rey then taani(kathak)...vicky(popping)...neha(freestyle)...bharath(hip hop)...vishakha(pop)...nilesh(pop)...simmi(belly dance)...rinni(lyrical hip hop)...amar(tutting)...swayam goes
Sw: before that..i want you to stand in front of me while I dance...pehle ki tarah?
Sh: ok..you should also when my turn comes...
Sw: of course...your wish is my command...
Sh: hmm..ab jao...aur best of luck
Swaron share a passionate lip lock as swayam's name is called out..
Swayam performs freestyle, and towards the end he walks to wards the front...to Sharon...pulls out a red rose and hands it over...saying I love you Sharon...
Sharon is surprised but pleased, accepts the rose while saying as I love you swayam...
Swayam ducks down as Sharon all of a sudden finds herself being lifted off ground and put on the stage...surprised she doesn't move...
Sw: best of luck, love
Its your turn to dance now.
Sharon overwhelmed with all of this...gives it her best shot and performs a hip hop solo...
To be yet again recieved by swayam with a kiss after her performance.😳
Ok guys I'm sorry if I haven't pm ed everyone of U :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Awesome chapter girl! 👏

ThankGod iss baar thora tu bara pdate dia, next time isse bhi bara! I loved Swaron kiss and liplock add more like this in coming updates! 😳😃

Update soon and PM me!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was nice update
swayam dance nd after dance gave rose to sharon was so romantic
whole gang doing masti
i love d update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm sooo sorry for the delay..had pre boards :(
anyway thanks for ur beautiful comments...though I did expect more...here are the 2 final parts of the story...and sorry if I haven't pm ed u after asking also :/
PART 6 COUPLE&GROUP PERFORMANCES
Rey: ok chalo guys next couple dance hai...and obviously hume humara partner patha hai. :P
sw: haan mera tho, kal aaj or kal, sirf or sirf ek ho...
All: Sharon! :) *simmi pushes Sharon into swayam...who catches her by her waist and holds her really close to him*
All: ahem ahem...
Taani: ok guys ab hum sab taiyaar hokar aaungi...umm bhabi or bhai...aap dono bhi...
Sw&sh: haan...umm what?
Rey: hum abhi couple dance ke liye taiyaar hona chahiye...tum dona tab bhi kho gaya tha...or abhi bhi...*smirking*
Sw: hum couple ke liye change karma hai na...change bhi...as a couple...
Sh: swayam!! Tum bhi na *mock punches his chest*
Sw: Ow ;) tumhe bohot zoor se lagi kya?
Sh: mein tumhe punch kar di...tho tumhe lagaana chahiye...
Sw: par yahan sirf tum ho *making a heart in front of his chest where his heart was supposed to be*
Sh: aur meri dil mein tum...
Swqron share an eye lock
Rey: ok guys...ye talks baad mein...or swayam...nai...wo sab nahi hain...hume locker room jaakar..ek boys talk karni hai...
Sw:awww...i'll miss you :3
Sh: mein bhi maybe..;)
Rey: oho...tum dono zindagi bar ek saath honewale hain..or tum don ye 30mins seperation unbearable hai?
Simmi: Sharon ye sach mein tum ho na?
Sh: haan iss mein kya doubt hain?
Sim: the diva Sharon?
Sh: ab swayam's Sharon
Sw: you mean meri siren ;)
Sim: haan what? :S
sh: kuch nahi :P
Sw: or btw tum humesha diva ho...no one can change that..nor being my siren Sharon :)
Swaron share an eye lock again...
Neha: babu kuch sikho swayam se!
Vicky: mein kuch nahi sikhne wali hai...kyunki jab mein bolte hoon dil se bolte hoon...humara sab batein romantic hai :)
All: lol :P
Viha shrug it off and share an eye lock :P
Rey: ok bahot hogaye ye cheesy batein...chalo ab sab taiyaar hokar aaunga...
Boys and girls leave for the locker rooms and change and assemble back stage...tannu and sneha waiting for swaron...swaron notice and reach at the same time to their kids...
Sh: kaise lag rahi ho mummy abhi?
Tannu: pretty :)
Sneha: per...perf..perfect! :D
sw: waise tum humesha mere liye perfect hi lag rahi ho ;) nai perfect nahi...out of this world lag rahi ho :) tumhe patha hain na...is costume se tum mujhse emotionally attached ho...
Sh: haan..or ye dance itni special hain...ki mein describe hi nahi kar paun ki ye mere liye kitni special or close hai...
Sw: humare liye...
Sh: humare liye...or ye dance hum kabhi perform nahi kiya...sabke samne :/
Sw: DW...aaj hum ye dance perform karoge :)
Sn&ta: hum aap dono ki dances dekh liya...aap dono ek dum super hai!! :D
Swaron: awww :) tum dono isliye yahan aaye they?
Ta: haan mumma.
Sh: ok ab tum dono jakaar beto...pappa or mein aa jaungi...
Sn: ok mumma :)
Sw: pappa ke liye ek hug?
Sneha and tannu hug swayam..who is in turn hugged by Sharon...making it a group pyari si family hug ^_^
Sneha and tannu leave...
Sw: tumhe patha hain na?...
Sh: kya?
Sw: ki...i love you Sharon..
Sh: as I love you swayam :)
Both of them share an eye lock and are interrupted by...and our next couple dance is by none other than swaron :D
They step onto the stage...but are in their own world...both their thoughts reflected in each others eyes...thoughts..memories of their dance...in the RH...the dance to which both where emotionally attached...
Haye rama ye kya hua...
Throughout the dance they look into each others eyes which reflect..intensity passion and love for each other...reflects every moment of that day's dance...
Swaron danced with a passion...with an intensity that was taken to be chemistry...till the end...when they finished the crowd went wild...asking for one more performance...which they gave...this time a funky one
Aaja ajaa mein hun pyaar tera...
Another dance which made them realise they were perfect for each other...in dance and life
The gang met them backstage yelling U guys nailed it...awesome performance...
Sim: tum logon ko yaad hai...jab swayam Paso doble kaha...
Rinni: Sharon actually thought...but when suggested dances she shrugged it off?
All: haan
Nil: haan kyunki swayam Sharon ko jaanta hain...as in bohot accha sa jaanta hai...guys remember...jab swayam ACS ban gaya...wo Sharon kya kar rahi thi..predict kar liya...wo bhi bina dekhne ke baad
Vicky: haan dude mujhe yaad hai...or uske baad Hume swayam ko so advice diya hai na nil?
Amar &bharat: wo tho swayam ko tabse aata hai...esp Sharon...
Rey: sirf ye nai or bahot aata hai humare majnu ko
Sw: ok guys enough discussing my love story
Sh: *blushing at every comment* haan chalo guys group dance ke liye taiyaar hokar meet karungi..in 15?
Vicky: kya baat hai...ab Sharon swayam ki baat accept kar hi hai...
Sh: mein wo kabse kar rahi thi :P
Taani: ab hum jaake taiyaar hona chahiye...
They go get ready for the performance...it was boys performances first and then girls...(the dances were in this order)
Maa da ladla (b) yeh raat (g) urvashi(b) taal se taal(g) pyaar mein 100uljhane(b) gopala(g)
Group(b & g together)
Upp wala dhunka; koi yahan aja nach nache; chamak chalo;mein Tera dhadkan; dil dosti dance...the bharath day version and flash mob one.
And the group dance come to an end with a boys v/s girls face off...in that the ending part...the couples do a signature pose :D swayam carrying Sharon...rey holding taani by the waist...and so on
And with that the dance fest ended with a bang :D
Part 7 party on my mind and returning home.
The reunion ended with a party in the canteen...this time without cameras...
During the party they play Chinese whisper...where..the sentence given wasn't what had been passed on by others to swayam...sharon was the one to tell it out loud..
Sw: I love you Sharon...
Sh: *blushes*
Simmi:so what did U hear?
Sh: mein nahi bolungi...
All: c'mon Sharon...plz plz...
Sw: bolo na...itni Sharma kyun rahi ho?
All: haan bolo...sharon c'mon:3
Sh: ok fine...but no teasing...i heard...
Swaron: ilove you Sharon...
All: what?^^
Rey: par mein tho kuch or kaha...
Taani: haan mein bhi bhai ko kuch or kaha...
Vicky: iska matlab hai ki...swayam ne change kar diya sentence ko...kyunki Sharon last hai...
Girls: awww...
Sh: swayam! Tum ye kaisa kar sakte ho!!! Mein chodunga nai tumhe!! Wait!
Swayam gets up and starts running around as Sharon sees a glass full of ice gradbs it and runs after him...
Sh: wait...u have to pay for this...
Sw:no Sharon...ruko..meri baat tho suno...
Sharon catches swayam and pours the whole glass inside his shirt...but before more than 2 ice cubes could get in...swayam holds her hand away from his shirt and pulls her close by her waist...and plants a kiss on her cheek...he's about to go further for a lip lock...
Meanwhile the gang laughs..and go awww when swqyam pulls Sharon towards him...
As he kisses her cheek and goes forward...for the liplock
nil: get a room you both...dont make out in front of us ;P
Swaron quickly break apart and blush...
Rey: ok guys chill...ab hum kuch khaoge...mujhe bahot bhuk lag rahi hai...
Amar: haan yaar mujhe bhi...
Sh: tho chalo...can someone call the kids?
bharath: mein jaake usse bhula deti hoon
Swayam goes behind Sharon...very tempted for a kiss...
Sh: tum kya kar rahi ho?
Sw: kuch nahi...mujhe wo lip lock chahiye abhi...
Sh: sab dekh rahi hai...aur ye sab bacho ke samne? You're impossible and insane.
Sw:correction I am possible...mein insane hoon isliye kyunki tum egg-straw-ordinary ho...*picking up an egg and a straw*
Sh: *blush*
Sw: waise tum bahot cute lag rahi ho aaj...you take my breath away...as in my heart stops beating for a minute when you blush...
Sh: *blushes harder*
Sneha and tannu come in and hug swayam and Sharon...saying they are hungry
Sh: ok mein abhi abhi bobo deti hoon...
Sw: mujhe bhi bahot bhuk lag rahi hai...mujhe bhi khana khiladho :3
Sh: acha ok Baba...tum 3 jaake beto..mein khana lekar aati hoon :)
Sw: ok chalo my lil angels...hum khana ko intezar karunga...
The 3 leave Sharon to get the food and sit at a table where the kids spend some quality time with their father.
Sharon as she finishes taking the food...sees them and thinks : mein kitni lucky hoon...mujhe swayam jaise life partner or sneha tannu jaisa Bache hain...sneha tho bilkul meri taraf hain..just like swayam wanted...or tannu ek dum swayam ki taraf..just like I wanted...God plz Hume humesha is tarah rakiye...humari choti si pyaari si duniya...
With these thoughts she reached the table and looked at swayam with adoring eyes...swayam looked up and smiled...he dint need her to talk her thoughts..he knew them just by looking into her eyes...
Sn&ta: mumma Hume khana khiladho plz...hume vapas Janna hai...khelne ke liye
Sh: haan in a minute..
Sharon feeds her kids with the fork as swayam looks on at his perfect family...Sharon finishes and the kids go out to play..
Sw: abhi mera turn hai...
Sh: lemme go refill the plate...
Sharon goes refills her plate and comes back..
Sw:par ek condition hai...
Sh:what condition..
Sw: tum mujhe haath se ya spoon or fork se khana nahi khilaongi...tum tumhari lips use karogi...
Sh: swayam...abhi nahi..ghar mein ok...
Sw: nahi ab!
Sh: zid mat lo...ziddi mein hoon...aur aaj mein tumhe khana khilaonge...as per ur conditions but ghar mein
Sw: ok...
Sharon and swayam take turns in feeding each other...
And as Sharon goes to leave the plate..swayam follows her...(no one is around)...she washes her hand...and turns and bumps into swayam who catches her by her waist and closes the distance between them..their lips meet and before they knew it it turned into an intense one...
*Ahem*
Swaron break apart and as Sharon blushes swayam smirks...and turns around to see rey..smiling uncomfortably...
Rey: ye kya ho raha hai? ^^
sh: *blushes more*
Sw: kuch nahi...wo kya hai na..meri wife ki lips par kuch khana hai...or mujhe bhuk lag raha hai so I thought I could...
Rey: ok ok...tum kabhi suderega swayam...once a majnu always a majnu..mr.lover boy agar tumhara stomach full hai...tho mere saath chalo...boys ne kuch plan kar raha hai..;)
Sw: oh haan...mein bhul gaye they.
Sharon meanwhile leaves silently...blushing all the way...
Boys: ok ab Hume ek food fight rakhna chahiye...pehle ki tarah?
Girls: good idea!
And so they get into a food fight...where swayam keeps trying to protect Sharon...and both end up falling on top of each other...eye locked :D
The party ends as everyone is tired after the whole thing and go to clean up and leave after a group hug.
Later at home,
Sharon enters the room in her nightgown with wet hair all over her face making her look hot...swayam ogles at her...
Sh: abhi tum ja, wash karke aao...mein khana banakar khiladungi..as per your conditions ;)
Swayam immediately leaves as the offer is irresistible...after washing, he came down...with his wet hair at the back...making him look like Mr.Sexy shekhawat...to find Sharon ready at the dining table with a candlelight cake,
Sh: to one of the most best reunions :D
Sw: yeah...
And together they cut the cake...sharon puts a piece into her mouth and comes closer to swayam...slowly closing her eyes and as their lips met both of them just melted into each other...swayam slowly carried her back to their room without breaking the kiss...they finally broke apart for the want of breath...and as swayam said its payback time my siren with a naughty smile on his face and Sharon blushed, the moon hid itself giving them privacy...and when it came back...its rays fell on a happily peacefully sleeping couple..sated and in each others arms just like the other nights.
~~~~~~~THE END OF SS~~~~
I want good feedback's on the whole ss...long ones perhaps? And no spamming plz :)
This is my first ss...and I've completed it because of ur encouragement...thank you sooo much :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
res
unres
well portrayed the dance memories of Swaron
Each dance showing their flow of emotions towards each other
Edited by sanstina - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
both d update was nice
love it

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