Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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Anu

@Carpe_diem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#491

Love anjali when she sets out to be the matchmaker..."Chemistry double check"...Sparks were flying for everybody to see...

" I can't die a virgin"..I was literally rofl...

She threw the packet of jalebis??? Is this our khushi who forever keeps talking about chashni mae ghuli hue jalebis ????

Couldnt expect anything less from NK...3 things that can make khushi do anything...

Gotas,Salman khan and jalebis

she mentally chanted hud hud dabangg..😆...I actually imagined khushi chanting it...🤣

Anjali and khushi convo...was laced with double meaning lines...like you have done it with him once...:)... thank god buaji doesn't think on those lines...😉

You put in the scene where khushi asks arnav to slap her...its the cutest scene of the serial...THANK YOU!!!!

In the end...i wanted to go in front of arnav and screm GOTCHA!!!...

Poor thing...he thinks its a marriage proposal...Awww choo chweet

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riddhima11

@riddhima11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#492

awesome!!!!! desperately waiting for the next part...

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Kamala

@Kamala05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#493

Chapter 9

Be it in collab work or in individual attempts, Lazy u have an unique style of writing. U know how to bring twist in a story and u excels in humour .

It is their fourth meeting and they cannot resist themselves from kissing !!

Arnav misunderstand the proposal matter and he actually agreed for marriage.

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Deepa876

@Deepa876

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Posted: 12 years ago

#494

It was an awesome chapter. I was laughing the almost the whole time :)
Khushi being a scardey cat at the drop of a pin, confusion between her & Anjali and confusion between Arnav & her was just hillarious. Plus these two kissed & that too willingly & passionately. Great work done as usual dear. Your writing is always a treat for your readers :)

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Barun_Riti_LMH

@Barun_Riti_LMH

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Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Fabulous update...
Its jz simply awesome...

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priya247

@priya247

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Posted: 12 years ago

#496

Amazing update.😊

Khushi and Arnav's conversation is very funny 😆

and the best part was Khushi's hud-hud dabang dabang 😃

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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Fine, Khushi. I will tell Di that we can get married"

She pushed at his shoulders and looked at him shocked, "What?!"

zehraaa

wow superb update and mind blowing and longish too with so many treats

kudos

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Shifa Khan

@chulbuli94

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#498

U CRACKED ME UP~~~ & U R TALKING ABOUT A SMILE😕 ~~~ JUST A SMILE😲

ZEHRA,U KNOW SOMETHING~~U CONFECTIONERY SISTERS EXCEL IN HUMOUR & APT DIALOGUES~~WELL,IN KHUSHI'S CASE~~MONOLOGUE😳

ARNAV BITWA,U CAN'T RESIST HER CHARMS EVEN WITH A BELAN IN HER HAND😊~~~ AND U CAN'T DARE DENY HER PROPOSAL😛 KHUSHI BITIYA~~~~I WONDER HOW U ALLOW YOUR POTENTIAL MURDERER TO KISS U SENSELESS😕😉

BTW~~ ZEHRA DO U REALLY NEED TO TELL~~PUN INTENDED???LIKE U SUSPECT YOUR REDERS INTELLIGENCE😆

Edited by chulbuli94 - 12 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#499

part 9
awesome part...
enjoyed so much reading this...
wow fantastic...
cont soon dear...

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#500

That was a hilarious update...I loved how NK and Anjali played the game...And yes, the last para left me laughing like anything...Finally ASR had agreed to marriage...oh god, cant wait to see Khushi's reaction now..