~*~Road Trip A-K~*~LAST PART p66 on 11/19 - Page 17

Originally posted by: muqualp

i know we do!

great part! cont soon jaan!

😆 i agree with muqu =]

awsome part 👏 👏 👏 angad was annoying kripa and shhe just loose her cooooooooool temper so easily 😆 i love that.cont soon 😊 😊 😊

great part!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 i know exactly how u feel! i have sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much hw as well! i barely have ne free time!

ok i mite post a smal part rite now~

Road Trip

Chapter 8

"Where are we?" Kripa sat up and said puzzled. They were in a dark isolated road, and Angad had stopped the car, waking up Kripa. Angad grimaced and pointed to the gas gauge [u know where it shows the gas and how much is left- Sry I don't know what it's called!]. The red line was right on top of empty.

"WHAT?!?" Kripa screeched. "WHAT HAPPENED??" She asked with a worried frown. Angad shrugged his shoulders and said easily, "We ran out I guess."

She looked at him bewildered. How in the world could he take this so easily? This was serious! Angad noticed the expression and braced himself. He was in for it now. She would yell at him till no end.
And boy was he right. Kripa started screaming, cursing and yelling. While she went wild, her hair flew out of her loose ponytail, causing a few stray strands of hairs to fall on her face. Angad couldn't help himself and he slowly lifted his hand, touched her soft and rosy cheeks, and tucked the hair gently behind her ear. Kripa stopped yelling. His touch was soft and gentle- dare she say it, she almost felt his touch was loving and caring. She knew that Prithvi never touched her like that. Sure they kissed, but his kisses were slobbery and forceful. Angad's kiss was slow and tantalizing; making her yearn for more.

At the same time, Angad was comparing Kripa to all the other girls he had dated. She wasn't the most beautiful; not was she the hottest. But there was something about her- something that he couldn't pinpoint. Her touch did something to him, something her never felt before. When he had kissed her, he meant it to be a challenge, but he knew that it was more than that. The minute their lips touched, he felt a strange charge in his body. He felt his tongue move slowly and gently, unlike before. He always kissed hard and forceful, making the girls give it up quickly. This time though, he wanted to be near her, to be talking with her, to be fighting with her, to be annoying her forever. He yearned to feel that charge in his body again.

Kripa felt the same need. She pulled his hand from behind her ear and squeezed it. Angad took his other hand, put it on her ponytail, and released it from the scrunchie. Then he nudged her closer. Once she was close, he started stroking her hair, and feeling the softness. Their lips were two centimeters apart, and as they were about to touch- Angad's phone rang. They both pulled back like a snake had bit them, and Angad nervously picked up the phone, while Kripa smoothed her hair and put it in a ponytail- this time tightly.

"Hey dude. How are you?" Angad said into the phone. Kripa watched him from the corner of her eye. Angad then gasped. "WHAT? HOW!!?? Don't worry! Ill do something quick." He said into the phone and turned to Kripa. "Umm…before you woke up, I called AAA and they said they'll be here in a bit. So you can sleep till then, 'cuz it 10:30 at night."

Kripa looked outside the window, because the hood was up. She hadn't noticed how dark it was before. She nodded silently and closed her eyes. She wasn't really sleeping, but she didn't want Angad to know that. She wanted to think about things, about her life.

"Why did Angad have to come into my life? Now I don't know what to do!" She thought and sighed. She realized that she was signing a lot since she met Angad- but she also remembered that she was feeling more happy and carefree.

That's all. It's an ok length I guess. It was about 2 pgs in word. This was more of narrating and less of speaking but I wanted you all to know how they both feel at the moment. Yes it was boring and im sorry for that. Please leave comments, suggestions, complaints ect!

Prakriti

great part, just of interest they are starting to like each other, but when in love coming into the question? 😳
i know it is going to take time, and personally i prefer all the chasing and "falling" in love at the beginning of the realationship, rather than the actual realtionship itself, but when i read fan fics like this, it still frustates me on how long it takes, to actual get there, do u get what i mean, i dont think i have articulated myself well! 😛
anyway, great part, and continue when u can! 😊

mind blowin prt plz cont soon 👏 👏

THAT WAS SOOOOO GOOD!! 👏 yay kripa is confused lol good sign! plz continue soon!

Originally posted by: kkbiri

great part, just of interest they are starting to like each other, but when in love coming into the question? 😳
i know it is going to take time, and personally i prefer all the chasing and "falling" in love at the beginning of the realationship, rather than the actual realtionship itself, but when i read fan fics like this, it still frustates me on how long it takes, to actual get there, do u get what i mean, i dont think i have articulated myself well! 😛
anyway, great part, and continue when u can! 😊

i totaly understand. but if i get em togehter, i usualy end the ff, cuz i dont like all the problems and then them getting seperated and evrythng. I believe life is already sad for sum ppl and thus i dont make my ffs sad. and this ff is prety short too...mayb like 5 more parts are left..so i hope u undersatnd and r ok wit it!😊