IPKKND SS:Sins * Thread 1* - Page 20

I read all three in one go and they're amazing!!!...brilliant piece of work and absolutely well written...i am looking forward to the next chapter

Amazinggg how uve expressed feelings of all tje characters throughout all the chapters
Just read them all
They're amazin hon
Ur really have a knack for writing and will go far x
Cus u pls pm for nxt update

expected that of the policemen and often policewomen are no better... is this a speciality of India or general male chauvinism at play?

*breathes*

Loved the update !
You know, Ive said this everytime, but I wish so badly that Anjali could have been shown as a stronger woman in the show, but *sigh* let that go ! Thank you for making her so much more stronger, she's strong enough and wants to continue living if only for her child !

But what the policemen did, it made me want to slap them... I know it happens all around the world, that the official personnel often pass comments, but never realise the extent of hurt it may cause the victim !

As fir Arnav, just go tell Khushi that you love her, that you'd be there for her through thin and thick and Im sure she'd come back, cause right now she needs unconditional love, and I guess Arnav is the only one who can give her that ! As for the ending, I just hope Khushi is all fine,... cause the way you described, the state of the room is supposed to look scary ! Hope she's fine

All khushi needs right now is the right support.. i really hope she gets it from arnav.. i think thats who she is looking to get it from!

This chapter leads me to believe Khushi will respond to Arnav only, slowly.. You have portrayed Anajli as a very strong woman and her strength hopefully will allow Khushi to heal and strengthen too. Arnav needs to take solace from this alone as he under estimated his sisters strengths and tried to shield her. Anjali can prove to be crucial in Shyam receiving punishment, she has accepted he is unworthy and she will live for her child alone...

Shyam knows the law too well and is pushing Arnav to push Khushi into silence, the despicable policeman have proved this sad state of affairs, has Shyam presented his web of lies to them already... I truly hope your writing will allow both Khushi and Anjali to fight this corrupt system.

Khushi running away after hearing what the so called people who are supposed to protect , has me hoping that she is aware of what is happening around her but may not necessarily want to respond to everyone yet. The last line of something lying broken, has she lost her belief in Devi Maa?

Many have said it and many will say it, but had the show captured any of this, it would have reached amazing success and showcased actors who were not used to their full ability, Nk and Anjali come to mind straight away..

What an amazing story. I see NK atleast had the guts to point out the obvious, and Arnav should have spoken up and said something to those idiotic cops, that's what Khushi needs right now, to see that he's on her side, with her And those cops- just hit them on the head and take away their uniforms.. Her prettiness made him stray? Really? Should she throw acid on her face now?

Last two chapters were intense! I like how you exploring the NK angle which remained unexplained in the show