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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Wow!! A thriller!!
Different from ur other stories, but it awesome, & I love it!!
Amazing prologue!!
Can't wait 4 u to update!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

avantika :

yeh prologue tha ya update😕 ? i mean, agar prologue hi aisa dhaansu hoga to actual updates kaise honge😉 ? anywayz, back to the prologue, i'm a bit confused about a few things like what's this mission in goa is all about and why aisha's maintaining so much secrecy about it, but i prefer not to ask you now about it ..warna puri suspense hi barbaad ho jayega. but you know, aisha's words to rosy reminds me of riya badly , specially when rosy tells her not to point at her inexperience every time😭. and karan looks like a good friend of aisha apart from being a cop ( or a flirty cop😉 ). both rosy and karan looks interesting characters , hope they introduce similar characters too in the show in future.😊

update soon.😊

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Can't wait for it...
The prolonge was gr8...whats in store for arjun in 6 months.. update soon..

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grad2011

@grad2011

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

very nice!!! do update soon

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nikki08

@nikki08

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

wow!!!!

a thriller...!!!!

Amazing!!!!!😃

so aisha also in this...intersting...

the last line blew me off...

hmmm...whats on her mind???

Already loving it...!❤️

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Really love ths..

plz contiune soon

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Avantika my dear,

The New Year has begun well! This is truly scrumptious and most promising. You never disappoint me, my dear! I was most pleased by your assurance that you will not turn this into a camouflaged romance. The only thing is that you must not wait too long to continue this.

And yes, your Spanish is fine. If Karan had wanted to be more expansive, he would have said "Senorita, tu eres tan hermosa", but this is entirely adequate! Though D'Costa sounds more Portuguese to me than Spanish.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl

Okay.. here's the Prologue.. Well, it's as long as a Chapter! 😉😆
Do leave behind your reviews as always.. I love reading and replying to them.. And please excuse the shabby editing of the banner.. Edited it in a hurry.. 😕😊