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this is not at all common... plz cont soon...
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Sounds interesting...u shud continue... update soon... Pm me!!😊
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its such an awsum concept .plz cont soon nd pm me ..thnx😳
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hey dea nic concept .. do continue:-D
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Kuch alag n bohot jyaada interesting...cnt soon n pls pm me...
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I so want to read this now.. Its a total different concept bags! Loved it! Please do continue coz it seems very interesting! Please please please pm me when u update!
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hey its sounds interesting and literaaly remind me arshi (arnav or khushi ) because they also do elope and opp' to each other i loved this concept or agar tumne jaldi se start nahi kiya toh i will kill you😆😆😆
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awsum di ...really intresting concept

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hey peeps!!m here with chapter 1 ...hope u guys like it...n haan do like it n give comments...😊

Chapter 1: meet miss bubbly & mr grouchy.

ITS 6 AM..Somebody watching news ..

News reporter: Singer Reyaansh singhania fir se Charcha ka vishey bangaye..lagta hai reyaansh ko fir se pyaar hogya hai..sautro ke mutabit Reyaansh aur new singer nisha Sharma ek dusre ko date kar rhe hai, Reyaansh aur nisha ,music director MK Roy ke party mai ek saat ate huye dikhe gaye, dono ek saat party se jate huye bhi dikhe.. aur kal humre reporter Anil ne dono ko andheri ke 5 start hotel Raj Palace mai ek saat jate huye n dinner karte huye dekha and apne camera mai unhe capture kiya.. jaise hi Reyaansh ko pata chala ki anil unhe record kar rhe hai wo aur nisha pechle door se nikal gaye..

Footage of rey n nisha entering the hotel is shown..

Kya reyaansh ke liye pyaar ek khel bangya hai? Kitni ladkiyo ko wo date karenge?Ek week pehle hi unka break up super model mouni se hua .. aur itne jalsi rey nisha ke saat bhar ghumte huye mile..mouli se pehle reyaansh shambhavi ko..(somebody is very furious and turns off T.v)

He picks up the magazine..he sees picture of reyaansh and many girls and with caption "REYAANSH THE PLAY BOY"..he throws away the magazine..he saw news paper it showed rey s pic with head line "REYAANSH S WILD WAYS"..he tears the paper into pieces..he is getting calls regarding this from people.. he is really angry..then he hears a knock on his door ..and says comein!!

A girl in her twenties enter..she is pretty,fair,tall,beautiful..

she asks:are you ok? He looks at her and starts crying… she sits beside him and hus…and says

girl(concerned):hey!!pls dont cry!!everything will be all right rey!!

Yes he is rey and she is saanaya….

Rey:sana !!pata nahi kyun sab mere peeche hi pade hai??har baat par rumor n jhuti khabar phelate hai…pehle yeh ki mai mouni ke saat tha n fir breakup? And ab yeh???kyn?kyun?nisha kisi ko nahi janti thi industry mai uska pehla album mere saat kaam kiya to mai hi uska dost tha..isliye mai uske saat gaya MK roy k party mai.. Fir kal usne kaha ki uska janam din hai and wo akele nahi mana cahti so hum raj palace gaye….log iska galat matlab kyun nikal liye.(he remembers his convo with his dad…

R:papa yeh juth hai ..rumor hai!!

RD:chup raho!!humsha tumhre wahje se meri garden jhukti hai…tum kab sudroge?

R:par..

RD:par kya humsha yahi kahni..maine kuch nahi kiya.. tumne is baar haad paar kar di hai..tumhe mera beta kehne mai bhi sharam arha hai..and cuts the phone)

Saanaya(consoling rey):janti hu rey..janti hu..tumhari koi galti nahi hai.. tum to uski madat karne gaye the but usne tumhe use kiya..

Rey(shocked n confused):kya??

Saanaya:rey usne jaan bhuj ke tumhare saat dosti ki..taki tumhare zariye use fame n name mile..publicity stunt u know..usne jaan buj ke MK roy k party mai tumhre saat jani ki baat ki taki logo ko lage kit um n wo k saat hai..and kal uska koi janam din nhi tha…and usi ne reporters to bulaya tha waha pe…

Rey(angry he is fuming):kya ?uski yeh himmat??Uski to…(and gets up angrily but saanaya holds his hand) and

Saanaya:nahi rey!!ab tum kuch bhi mat karo!!wo yahi cahti hai kit um react karo..and aur mamla kharb ho

Rey:to kya karu??mai?aese hi usko zane du?noways!!

Saanaya:hmm kuch aur sochte hai..usko sabhak sikhne ko..

Rey(smiles wickedly):mujhe pata hai kya karna hai..miss nisha ab pata chalega reyaansh se paanga kitna bhari padega.. and calls his agent abd says Desaiji press conference bulayi sham ke 5 baje ko..

Saanaya:kya karne wale ho tum?rey :pata chaelega..

Mean while..in beach house.. 7AM..BG song mai chali from force is played…

Yeh roop aur yeh rangaat,( a girl with her face coverd with her arm is shown she is troubled by sun light falling on her face..face of the girl will not be shown till the end of song)

Yeh chaal aur yeh nazakat,Kaisi hai yeh kayamat,(alarm(in alarm watch) is ringing she is trying to hit snooze button with her hand ..atlast she hits button after unsuccessful attempts)

Ab koi kya kahe(she gets up and streches ..her back is shown)

Yeh roop aur yeh rangaat,Yeh chaal aur yeh nazakat(she goes to krishnaji pic and prays.her face is blurr)
Kaisi hai yeh kayamat,Ab koi kya kahe(she goes to window pulls the curtains and opens the window closes her eyes taking fresh air in and smiles(focus on eyes on lips)..while breeze played with her hairs…still her face is not shown)

Main chali,Toh jhoom uthi zindagi(she is dancing and spinning with pillow in her hand)
Main chali,Toh jaag uthi roshni(she sees the time..and she is running late)
Mausam naya,Nayi nayi hawayein hai ,Mein hoon nayi,Nayi meri adaayein hai

(she slaps her head and grabs bath robe and runs towards bathroom..still face is not shown)

Main chali,Toh jhoom uthi zindagi(she is splashing water on her face..face is blurr)
Main chali,Toh jaag uthi roshni(she takes shower..her hairs are dipping wet)
Mausam naya,Nayi nayi hawayein hai (opens her wardrobe and thinks which dress to wear.. smiles and chooses a dress )
Mein hoon nayi,Nayi meri adaayein hai(she wears the dress ..her dress is shown..she holds the tip of her flowy dress and spins)

Teri zulf ki ghatayein(she is shown drying her hair with dryer)
Teri shokh si nighaayein(she is shown wearing kajal)
Kaisi hai yeh balayein,Ab koi kya kahe(she is wearing earring and smiling)

Teri zulf ki ghatayein (she is combing her hair and pinning them)
Teri shokh si nighaayein(her eyes are twinkling like stars)
Kaisi hai yeh balayein,Ab koi kya kahe(she giving flying kiss to her image(blurr))

Duniyaa badli hai,Mera andaaz na Kyun badaale(she is haves a look at her file and smiling)
Sab kuch toh hai Badaal gaya..(she grabs a fruit and haves it and locks the main door..she has a tear in her eye she remembers her parents n she wipes it immediately)

Gunjaa hai joh,Geet naya,Toh saaz na,Kyun badaale(walking on road,she smiles n greets people on her way..she waves at kids ..)
Mera bhi sur hai naya(kids are happy to see her and run towards her..she gives them chocolate)

Nayi nayi si hai,Meri raahein Naya naya,Mera safar hai (she sees an old lady and helps her cross road)
Nayi nayi si hai,Meri chaaheein hai Nayi nayi Meri nazar hai (she looks at sky and smiles)

Nayi nayi Meri nazar hai ( she sees few girls skipping..two girls were spinning rope and girl was jumping..she goes to them and starts skipping while skipping she is laughing..then goes away by waving girls bye)
Tere nain hai niraale,Madira ke jaise payale,Sambhle na dil sambhale(she is walking on road guys are watching her with open mouth..)
Ab koi kya kahe(guys are bumping into each other)

Tere nain hai niraale,Madira ke jaise payale Sambhle na dil sambhale(she trying to cross the road guys riding vehicle are staring at her )
Ab koi kya kahe(she smiles and guy on vehicle goes and falls into heap hay.. she is laughing.. and the guy gets up uninjured and gives her dazzled look)

Dil chahe keli,Kiska haar banaloon main,Chaand ho meri bindiyaa(she is in park and dreaming to fly high)
Sagar ki saari lehrein,Aanchal mein sajaloon main, Jane kya chahe yeh jiya (she is under tree wind blows and flowers starts to fall on her she spreads her arms lifts her face and spins)

Koi samjhe toh samjhe diwaani,Mujko hai parwah hai kya(she holds old man n starts dancing ,ppl are giving her wired look she smiles back and starts dancing again..ppl too smile back thinking how care free n innocent she is)
Main jani toh bus itna hi jani,Dil dhoondhta hai raah kya Oh..dil dhoondhta hai raah kya (she closes her eyes and dreams to become a successful writer and smiles)

Tu hai kaise rang layi,Kaisi tarang layi
Kaisi umaang layi,Ab koi kya kahe(she sees a boy pleading her gf..and saying sorry dhe goes to the couple..gives the guy so many red roses and asks him to manofy her by sgiving her the roses..then boy kneels on his legs and holds his ears ,gives roses to girl..girl forgives him both hug and both gives smile and wave at her)

Tu hai kaise rang layi,Kaisi tarang layi,Kaisi umaang layi.Ab koi kya kahe(she sees an old couple..holding hands n sitting on bench ,wife is asking for ice cream but husbands old aching legs are not letting him walk..he gets up but unable to walk sits down..then she gets ice cream for them and gives them smling.. both smile and bless her, thinking how bubbly she is)

Main chali,Toh jhoom uthi zindagi(she sees dog and starts playing with it)
Main chali,Toh jaag uthi roshni(then she sees few poor kids staring at balloons…she buys all the balloons and gives them to kids…seeing balloons all kits face lits up and they hug her )
Mausam naya,Nayi nayi hawayein hai

Mein hoon nayi
Nayi meri adaayein hai(she waves at all while going everyone in parks smiles at her and waves back)

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She reaches publication house… girl is smiling Her face is shown she is taani ……. she is wearing

Taani is in editors chamber ..editor is reading her story..after some time..he puts down the story..taani is looking at him with hopes in her eyes..

Editor:taani!ur story is good(taani smiles) but the climax n ending is very predictable..u know readers don't dig stories with predictable climax..its gets boring.. u will still have to work on it..hope you can understand…

Taan(disappointed but smiles):I can understand sir..thank you and leaves..

Taani is walking on a isolated road..thinking

Taani:fir se rejected!! Toh kya hua agli baar ki kahani achi hogi..is baar ki kahani last time se better thi..agli baar ki aur better hogi..kabi na kabhi to sahi hogi n publish hogi(and smiles)

Suddenly are speeding car splashes mud (from mud puddle) on taani s face almost compeletly n dress..

Taani( shocked & angry wiping mud ):ewww!! Yeh kya? Then she sees black BMW car the driver did not bother to stop so she takes some mud in her hand makes a ball and throws at car..it hits car car stops ..and taani yells ..andhe ho?chalana nhi ata to drive kyun karte ho..

The car door opens some guy comes out he ..he is wearing

He removes sun glasses its none othe then our hero rey..Taani is shocked she is blinking continuesly..rey comes near taani n snaps his fingers..taani s out of her trance..

Rey(angrily):yeh tumne kya kiya?meri car.. .. taani cuts him

Taani(angry):maine??and tum ne meri dress n mera face pe keechad udya?? Rey opened his mouth to talk but he was unsuccessful taani was cutting him n not letting him talk…

Taani:meri fav dress kharb kar di…agar gadi chalani nahi ati to chalate kyun ho?? Now rey yells

Rey(in full attitude n ego):haan toh?konsa pahad tuth pada?

Taani: haan toh?? Ek to galti karte ho n tewar dikhate ho??itni bhi taamiz nahi ki maffi mang lo…

Rey(full furious):LISTEN YOU!!TUM JO BHI HO TUM JANTI NAHI KI MAI KON HU!! JO AESE BAAT KAR RHI HO

Taani:naam taani hai!!(rey is shocked) and mai ache se janti hu kit um kya ho..agar tum kisi alag situation mai mile hote to mai autograph zarur le leti ..but tum to ek akdu,khadus,batamiz,egoistic insaan ho..so don't expect any good reaction from me!!

Rey(is so damn furious):AKDU?BATAMIZ?EGOESTIC?KHADUS?? huh?

Taani(looking into his eyes straight):HAAN !!!AKDU..BATAMIZ..EGOISTIC..(ladki mai bahut hi guts hai)

Rey(angry):MAI KHADUS HU? And starts walking towards taani n taani s scared n walks back ward..taani still looking into eyes straight (with attitude)T:haan..

Rey:BATAMIZ..?

Taani(with ,ai tum se nahi dar ti attitude ):haan..then taani s back hits a tree truck..rey is still moving towards her he is really close to her they r only few inches apart..Rey(in husky voice):abhi bhi mai khadus hu??taani(with attitude): haan!!n tumhra charm mujhpe nahi chalne wala… taani tries to slide from left he places his hand on tree trunk n blocks her then she tries do the same from right side..rey blocks her again pinning her to tree…

He moves close to her..

Taani(scared n in commanding voice):Mujhe jane do…chodo mujhe..nahi to…

Rey(happy n satisfied):nahi to kya huh?

Taani(angry):chodo mujhe jane do nahi to mai chillaungi..

Rey(smirking):oops yah ape to koi bhi nahi hai..chillo na!!chillo! n starts laughing..

Taani:chodo!!

Rey(smiling):try karlo chudne ko!!

She tries to push rey but rey holds her hand ..and both look in each other s eyes..and both are lost ….

precap:rey s press confrence,taarey s second encounter in plane...

so hw was it guys??

if u dont like it feel free to throw fresh apples,strawberries,litches,etc...if u want to trow chapls pls throw size 7 chappals😉

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pls if you want me to pm the updates to you...add me in buddy list😊😳

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