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Posted: 12 years ago

first by chance

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See, I'm doing it... slowly. I think its because I was first you know?
anyway - wonderful play of emotions. Really, just wonderful! ASR is so cheap. He did so much to her just for that little thing?
I kind of hate your Arnav. I am glad Khushi is okay.
-Vee
Edited by V323 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow so much pent up anger and hatred for Khushi.

Arnav's POV was much needed, which clearly depicted his robust hatred for Khushi and the reasons being so valid, I am assuming the more he loathes her, the stronger his redemption will be.

I guess its just the beginning, once he gets to know Akash's plans of them getting married, his repugnance for her will multiply by ten folds, as he will have to live with her and have her around all the time.
Thanks for updating it.
Edited by vtan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful chapter Zehra.
And I totally despise Arnav right now.
He better apologize to Khushi as soon as she wakes up. And I mean it.

To think, that he put her through all this, because he hated the fact that despite having similar problems as his, this girl still managed to get through the day with a sunny smile on her face, not to mention that she also succeeded in bringing about a smile in everybody else's faces too, while Mr.ASR here, remained gloomy and sad.

She manages to find happiness in EVERYTHING, while he blames fate for his situations and takes out frustrations on the world. And he hates her, because he loves her. Her willpower and strength, to overcome all her obstacles with grace, her happiness , and the good soul within...she was everything Arnav wanted to achieve or be, but couldn't. He has a lot to learn from her.

And the best part - he wanted her to say sorry, and he got it eventually. But it only made him feel more worse and guilty. This is what comes of being insanely jealous about how Khushi was. Atleast he accepted it. Rather than denying it all over again.

The stark differences in their outlooks, brought out so well, just through Arnav's POV...and that too through the emotion of hatred - beautifully done Zehra.*claps*

And Alanks , that is one lovely banner. :D

Edited by raomedhz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 4:

Again a quick one because this curiosity is killing me.

Khushi fell down? Did she? So she is dead? Is that so? Oh no! And someone committed suicide because of him? Who? Maybe his mother. Will he be able to save her? I hope Khushi will be fine.

Payal is the best sister & I don't know what they said to the media but it's definitely not good :/

Shyam sounds like a good person.

Who is Lavanya? Arnav's Girlfriend?

*off to read 5*

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Posted: 12 years ago
just came across the story... very nice...
I think Arnav still doesn't know about the press announcement...

Sruthi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
very intense chapter showing arnav's feelings
why is he such a sadist is it just bacause of power or something that has happened in the past
whatever he did with khushi is unforgivable that too to satisfy his damn ego
he better live up to his guilt and make it up to everything otherwise i will hate him
will be eagerly waiting for the next update

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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav's P.O.V was absolutely amazing!
Loved the way how you described his hatred-I actually pity Arnav that he instead of having some respect in his heart for Khushi he despised her just because she was not rich!
The Arnav in this story is the true ASR -cold heartless unforgiving!:(
So finnally you revealed why Arnav did this with Khushi-to be honest I was expecting a much much greater reason than this atleast!
Just to satisfy his ego,he destroyed her😡
Poor poor Khushi-and to be honest I don't think it'll be fair on Khushi if Arnav marries her!
She deserves so much better than him!😭
Edited by samaz95 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved this update ... Khushi religiously follows her name :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay so I officially love Aakash. Aaksh sweetie do you know that you just played cupid in your's bhai & future bhabhi's love story? :P
I am so glad that they made up this story, there are 4 advantages:

1. Arnav will have to marry khushi

2. His family will be happy

3. Khushi's family will be happy

4. Khushi can easily take revenge from Arnav. Yes I'm evil & I know it :P

What happened with khushi? Itna suspense :/

I see sparks flying between Aakash & Payal *ahem*

Glad that Shashi is fine.

I felt bad for Lavanya, she doesn't deserve this but to be honest I felt relieved when I read that she'll be out of Arnav's life. I know it's wrong but can't help it.
BTW according to Lavanya Arnav is a man of principles then why did he sleep with khushi? That just proves that he likes khushi. Am I right?

*off to read 6*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Two individuals having similar beginnings, being orphaned early in life, having to earn and struggle at an age where fellow mates would rather study. While Khushi took everything within her stride with a smile, with a resolve to crack it and convey her Devi Maiya that they had succeeded together; Arnav had turned ruthless. He ceased to appreciate life around him, believed that everything can be bought with the money and power he had spent his teens earning. When he met Khushi the first point that ticked him off was her guts to stand up and ask with her head held high for an apology. The nerve of her to refute him every time, coming out successful at every challenge thrown, doing the unexpected, being an exception to his theory on money and power were welcomed by him as his own defeat. And defeat is one thing that he cannot accept. Knowing her background he couldn't take her level of optimism even after the pain, it would have been easier if she had broken like him. He was weak when it came to fortitude. The fact that she had picked herself up proving to be superior made him despise her to such an extent that he wanted to destroy her, but even then he was left void without any satisfaction.
Wonderfully penned Zehra, you gave us his perspectives, the unreasonable way in which his ego caused pain in Khushi's life which makes us want him to suffer the consequences.
Edited by sj_arhi - 12 years ago

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