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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#691

Omg m lateee.. update was as usual fab.. Manvi's feelings for Virat was love bt she dnt wanna accept so she betrayed him.. poor guy nd now story fast forward.. yay.. Cant wait for next part.. Continue soon.. 😃

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keirafadyen

@keirafadyen

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#692

Amazinggg!!!!!! Thank God you updated i thought i will die waiting for your update 😉

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#693

OMG!! What a superb updt nisha.. Extremely blasting one... virman separation sounds really good as the face off and confession would be double dhamal types... Cont asap and all ur other stories too and pls pm me... Take care

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#694

Fab update Nisha!! 👏👏 Totally unexpected twist! Virman separation :((.. Manvi's dilemma is very well portrayed.. And Virat's outburst is quite heart touching.. His mother didn't care about him and now Manvi also left him.. Both are really confused.. They started liking each other but still unaware of their own feelings.. Loved the update! ❤️❤️ Eagerly waiting for their next meeting.. Please continue soon.. Take care 😊

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#695

awesome update nisha but again quite short i know am going on complaining but what to do cant get enuf of it plzplz plz update next one soon
the update manvi is soo damn confused with her feeling her feelings and confusion very well explained but feeling bad for virat coz he is totally unaware of the reason for her weird behaviour which is not right even manvi in ignoring her feelings towards him she completely ignore the thought how he wud feel with the ignorance just a little thing messed up their frendship too wish they wud have talked abt it ...the separation was sooo unexpected feeeling soo bad for them and manvi also left the place without even meeting him once...😭😭
waiting to see how it goes further plz plz plz update soon

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kinz

@kinz

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#696

Twist in the story was unexpected hawai trip was
Suppose to be interesting haina tou ye kya hova 😭
Point is they are in different corner how will they meet again??k

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shona v p

@Shona1907

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#697

Jst caught up wid the last 4 chapters... I feel so sad reading the last one 😔 things were going on jst fine and then they left to never see each other? Ok.. Why fear wen you are here... :p its not the end yet so i guess they'll meet again :D i liked the elder sister Manvi, the way she scolded janvi... Virat, poor guy i dint think he was too much at fault except for the last part.. He shud've talked to her bt human nature.. He got hurt and angry and said all that... Well w8ing for the future of them to unfold... Thank you for taking out tym and writing for us :)
oh btw what does 'only cigarettes' imply? :p *talking abt ur signature box*

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#698

amazing update Nisha
rocking one...waiting for next part
update soon 😃

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Disha

@daydreamer9

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#699

why do u like to inflict pain on others?i was hoping for a happy beginning bt u jst...,...,... u could've made them happy,make them fall in love...bt no.pain,pain n only pain.i know they'll meet again,will fall in love bt still...d way manvi just dissapeared... virat must be so hurt.😭

GODDESS OF CRUELTY!!! welcome back.😔