ARHI TS: BETRAYED note on page 1&43

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supakoolpr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Hey thanx for the pm😊 i really liked ur work...👏 do continue shooon n pm me also...😉 bt u broke my heart💔 he married sum1 else n also father..😭 she must be shattered🤢 bt nice now suspense will be opened why he did so m eagerly waiting for the FACE-OFF after 5 long LONELY years.. do pm me

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Srivi01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

waiting fr the next part pls cont soon.

Yu'v written well and if poss pls write in eng cos i can't und hindi tat well

But must say very nice concept and gr8 piece of writing fr 1st attempt 😊😊

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mehak

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

This ts has created a magic on me... plz plz olz continue soon. n do pm me plzzz

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Sim96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Thanks for the Pm.
Nice one. :D

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Mithila

@Mithikush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Awesome update😊

Interesting concept😛

Tanx for d pm

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834074

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

lovely start continue soon... Nd pm me also... =)

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Akorshi Oroni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

wow! very nice...

like it...

update soon...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

what are you trying to do make us cry buckets and buckets
god that was so emotional i couldnt stop my tears
and should you continue with this
i can only say hell yes
wow that was some powerful stuff
i wonder why he did what he did
well if he was gonna do this then why did he raise her hopes
and why didnt he say anything when his wife would insult his parents
something seems amiss here right
pls do give the concluding part of this i wanna know what happens in the end
cheers for pm

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

My God what pushed Arnav to betray Khushi

What is wrong with him, he knew Khushi loved him and waited for him.

Please continue soon, can't wait to find out what happened