SS:ARJUN PROMISE..i m always with u riya*Completed*

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@mishree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

de tuhada jawb nahi

it is awesome

kya kaho bus dil kush kr diya apnai

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

really nice update..
Thanks for the PM

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

hey again sorry late reply:(

yeh kya yar aisa cliff hanger not fair yar!!!!

i want next update also now!!!!!

how dare the sik slap riya...😡😡😡

jaldi update karo na plzzz!!!!

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Krinal

@MissC

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

OMG Arjun kissed Riya 😲 And in front the goons 😳

Poor Arjun got slapped by Riya

And Riya loves Surya 😃 Hope that she soon finds out that Arjun is Surya 😊

I hate Sikander 😡 Hope that Arjun soon kills him

Poor Riya has got bomb on her 😭 Hope that Arjun saves her

Can't wait to read more 😊 Update soon

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Thank u so much dr frs..n reader n scilent reader...
for reading my stories..
as i say before i wanna to end this..
but jab tak sahi end nahi likhungi end nahi karongi..
so back with next part...
hop u like n enjoy..
n realy sorry if i waisted ur time...
it was one of my fav story that gona be end soon...
ab tak sath dene ka bahoot bahoot shukriya...
lov u guys ...
n realy sorry if i hurt any one..
but wait for some more time..

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

PART=11
"plz trust me..i promise..nothing gonna happened u..my lv"

Scence-Sikander hold riya..n fit bomb on her body..
Ariya eye to eye cono-
Arjun saw her corrner of lip is bleeding..
he tightend his grip wanna to give one tight panch of that blady sik..
How dare he slap my riya..?
Dard ho raha hai..
she nodded in negative,
Ar-dont warry riya main sab thik ker doonga or es sik ko..
Ri-No arjun time bahoot kaam hai,just go n save ur life..
Ar-no i dont,tum ehsa keh bhi kaise sakti ho,tumne soncha bhi kaise main tumhen jhood ker Chala jaonga..

Ri-But why..?
Ar-bez i.i..i lv u so much..
Sikander laugh loudly that brock their eyes conversation..
hahhaaahhaa tum kuch nahi ker sakte,jaise das saal baad maine esake parents ko mara tha..
vaise aaj ehse bhi maar donga,
bus kuch minute or or eski body dhamake ke sath udd jayegi,
Ar-tum ye bhul rahe ho sikander tun bhi mare jaoge,
Sikander laugh evily..
hahhaa ye tumhari galat pehami hai officer,
kuch hi der main mera helicopter ata hoga or main yahan se,
hahhaa duniya ke kis kone main honga tumhare en police valon ko kabhi pata bhi nahi chalega..
arjun pissed his teeth he looks riya n riya to..
They again share a beautiful eye look..
no sign of fear he saw in riya's eyes..
but he can easily feel fear inside his heart of losing riya..
Sikander yelled on arjun..
ye taries ka darwaja band karo verna bomb blast hone se pehale hi es ladki ko
maar donga,
Arjun turned n closed door,
Sik-ye jo gun haath main pakad rakhi hai use niche rakho verna..?
arjun hav no other option..
vo apni gun nichhe rakhane lagta hai,but before he put down his gun on ground..
he shoot ..yes he shoot n bullet hitt on sik left leg,
Riya was hell scared by arjun quik action,
ever sik didnt realise..ke arjun kuch ehsa ker sakta hai,
sik feel

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

So much pain on his body..he yelled with pain..Ahhh..
when sik told arjun to put his gun on floor that time arjun graze fall on sik legs..it was uncover by riya's body..
its a grate chance for arjun,without waisting any single minute,
before sik culd understand
he shoot sik's left legs..
Sik-Ahhh officer ye tune achha nahi kiya..Ab dekh main es ladki ka kya kerta hoon,
Esase pehale sik kuch ker pata arjun took long step toward sik..
n give one tight kic on his stomch..Ahhh
Sik gather himself n giv one tight punch on arjun face..
arjun touched his face, n give another kic on his left leg..
sik jercek with pain..
it was already hurt or arjun ke kic ne uska pain double ker diya..
Arjun grabbed his arms n twisted litle back..
Arjun shouted..
Esi haath se chuya tha na tune riya ko..
twist litle more..
Teri himat kaise huye use marne ke..
Arjun looks toward riya n saw her bleeding lips..
Arjun twisted siks arms n give many kicks..
but sikander laugh loudly..
ha ha ha ha ha ..
It made arjun more angry..
Tumhare pass bus do minute hai..
tum bekar main apna time mujh per wait ker rahe ho,
Ha ha ha us ladki ko tum nahi bacha paoge..
Jab tak tumhari team ayegi jab tak boomb ha hhaaa...
arjun give one tight punch n sik fall uncionsious on the ground..
Arjun imedeatly turned toward riya.

"NOW ONLY TWO MINUTE LEFT"
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Ri-arjun just go..Ab kuch nahi ho sakta
Tum jao or apni life save karo,mere liye apni life dene ke koe jarorat nahi,
.
Ar-Just shut up riya main tumhen jhood ker kahi nahi jaonga samjhe ya samjhayon..ab ek or shabd nahi,
arjun cubbed her face just looked at me riya..riya meri taraf dekho..I promise riya main tumhen kuch nahi hone donga..ye arjun ka promise hai riya..tumhen kuch nahi hoga,
Ri-riya eyes numb..per arjun,
shhh arjun put his finger on her lips,bas ek baar ...

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Bas ek baar bharosa ker ke dekho..bus ek baar..i promise main tumhen kuch nahi hone donga..
Riya nodded her head in positive..
Arjun bent down n maintain his level..
Riya wariedly ask arjun
Ri-arjun tumhen bomb defuse kerna ata bhi hai na..
I meen main waqt se pehale nahi marna chahati..
Arjun shak his head in unbelive..
Ar-Riya chup raho or mujhe focous kerne do,
i know how to defuse bomb..
Ri-How..?
Ar-how meens i m police officer or..maine spacial traning le hai,ab chup ho jao or mujhe bomb per focus kerne do,
Arjun muttered himself..
Red wire connected hai enterace circuit se,ye black vali exit..or capacitor se..haan ye rahi,
Timer se..haan ye silver bali..per..
riya impaitently..
Arjun bomb defuse karo physics class baad main dena..vaise bhi i hate physics..
tumhen pata hai..vo physics ke sadu mam pore period main pakati rehati hai..
Ar-Riyaaa chup raho do minute,
Ri-arjun do minute...do minute ka time nahi hai,
timer dekho dekho sirf 15 sec reh gaye hai,jaldy defuse karo etana time kyun laga raho ho,
Ar-riya kahin jaldy main hum opper na pahonch jaye,
ab chup raho or mujhe connection wire dhodane do..
circuit ko connenct kerne vali wire nahi dikh,
riya closed her eyes n remind all day or time both spend each other..
1-Riya act as gosht ..n bang on arjun..
n fall on the top of him..
2-She saw arjun shirtless..
arjun hold her by her waist near to him..
she smiles litle
3-when with the help of shree she make arjun vedio clip..
4-She call arjun to her driver..
Arjun angry n kissed her three time..
(a lite blush crept on her face)
5-Arjun fight with sik just to save her..
the whole scence flashes in front of her..one tears fall on her eyes..
n droped on arjun face..arjun lift his face up ..
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"only ten second r left"
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9
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8
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the time is moving faster n faster..

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

They can easily heared increasing heart beat of each other..
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sudenly arjun graze fell on one silver tungston wire,ye wire..ye to special type ke wire hoti hai
5
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4
yes i got it ya yahi wire hai,jo sari circuit se connect hai,
esi ko kat kerne se bomb defuse hoga..
3
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only two second r left..
Arjun tool his special knife n cut the wire..
2 bippp...
time stoped..
yes time stoped arjun closed his eyes n took long breath..
after few second he lift his graze up to look riya..
she stil closed her eyes tightly,
Arjun get up n put his hand on riya shoulder..
Riya ..riya
riya opened her eyes..she looks in his eyes..
Arjun smiles n nodded in possite..
After few minute he remove that bomb jaket..both looks each other eyes..n share a beautiful eye look..
Arjun riya wishper..riya eyes get moised ,now she is safe,yes she save,
riya without waisting any single second hug arjun tightly..Arjunnn,
she didnt kno but she has a feeling for him..
Arjun hug her back,tightend his grip as wanna to hide her in his strong arms,she feel secure n warmth..
Arjun rested his head on her shoulder n cloed his eyes..
just wanna to feel her..
i promise riya kuch nahi hone dunga kabhi bhi kuch nahi...
Arjun parted that hug n looked up down to face her,
i promise riya i m always with u..
Arjun cubbed her face n leaned closer to her n kissed her forhead ,riya cloesd her eyes when arjun kissed her, then he kissed her eyes,
he bent litle below n give one wet kiss on her cheeks..
Move other side n give another wet kiss..
She tightly hold his shirt..
Arjun bend near her lips n give one light kiss n wishper..
Riya i love u,
Riya opened her eyes n looked in arjun,
both lips r few inches apart as they needed to meat onces time,
Sudenly they heared one breaking sound,
Somone break the taries door,
TBC-

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago