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Posted: 12 years ago
Important Note
Guys I am ready with the Part One. I don't know why but then this Fan Fiction is just getting interesting to write. When I took up this concept I did not know how I would mange it? But today when I started writing the update, I just got indulged in it so much that automatically my hands were typing out the dialogues.
Since, this Fan Fiction is a combination of three different shows there are a lot of characters in it. Thus, you may find that the update is too heavy with so many events going on at the same time. But I am sure that all my wonderful readers will start enjoying it the same way as I enjoy writing it out.
Also, one more thing is that the readership of this FF is not just limited to one kind of readers. It has four categories. One, Arshians, Second Yuvreens, Third Rishbalas and the fourth who include readers who like 2 or more couples. Thus, there are many charcters which may seem to be strange for
some readers. Thus, I have included pictures of the characters that have been added on in this chapter. The pictures of characters who have already been introduced in the character sketch are not included.
Please it is a humble request that you make this FF popular among your friends in IF as well if you all feel it is worth it. Also, don't forget to hit the like button and leave a comment for me. Please..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
kyu itna wait tempt karva rahe ho...update it sooonnn

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Part 1: Four Places, Six People - A

Delhi: (Delhi 6 area ' a small house)

This is the Chaudary household. Here resides the widowed Padmini Chaudary with her daughter Madhubala and her son Raj. Knock on the door. Padmini, opens the door to find the landlord of their house.

Padmini: Arey Mishra ji aap? Come in, have a seat.

Mishra: Padmini ji, it is already 20th of this month and you have not yet paid the rent.

Padmini: (a little in tension) I am sorry Mishra ji. I know you have been waiting for the rent for a long time, but then please try to understand. You know na, ki Madhu is going to Bangalore for her studies. It is a new place and I don't want her to feel all out of place when she gets there. So I need to see that I give her some money.

Mishra: I understand Padmini ji. But then we have a family too, we also have commitments, we also have expenses. How will we handle all our expenses if this is the case every month? (in irritated tone)

Padmini: Mishra ji, please I beg of you. I will try my level best and will pay the rent as soon as possible. Please (Pleading). You know that even the rent has been increased in the past month. (Now her eyes are wet)



Padmini Chaudary

Mishra: Look Padmini ji, this is the last time I am allowing you to pay the rent late. If this is continued the next month as well then you will have to vacate the building and find yourself a new house. (Sternly)

Padmini: Mishar ji don't say that. Where will we go? You very well know that we have no one in the city.

Mishra: That is left to you to decide. (Without any emotions) I will take your leave now.

Mishra gets up to leave and that is when Madhu enters the house. She is lost somewhere. Madhu gives a smile to Mishra and folds her hands, but Mishra turns his face away and walks from there. Madhu walks towards Padmini. As soon as Padmini sees Madhu she hides her tears.

Padmini: Arey Madhu beta, you came? How was your day at the work place?

Madhu in order to support the family takes up the job of a tutor in a nearby coaching class for small children.

Madhu: It was good ma. (Slightly depressed)

Padmini: What happened Madhu? You look worried and tensed. How many times have I told you to not work. Is there any problem? Did anything happen? (it is as though rapid fire round has started)

Madhu: Aahh, Ma how many question will you ask at once. Atleast take some break to breathe. And ya don't worry nothing happened in the tuitions. Actually while I was coming in the' (She narrates the roadside incident that happened, about how the girl was harassed, how she helped that girl out, how there were these other two girls who joined her)

Padmini: (Proud of her daughter who saved the helpless girl) Good beta, but take care of yourself. I mean what if those goons had harmed you?

Madhu: Aise kaise? I am after all Padmini Chaudary's daughter (in a dramatic way, and hugs her mother from the back). Now forget all this and tell me Why did Mishra uncle come? I mean he looked a little angry too.

Padmini: Arey kuch nahi. He had come to collect the rent. (Tries to change the topic) Where is this Raj? He has not yet returned from his tuitions.

At the same time Raj too enters. Padmini and Madhu turn towards him.

Madhu: Lo, your son is here. Why Bandru? What made you take so long? (In a teasing tone)

Raj: (Not in a mood to take any nonsense) Today again I was teased by my friends for wearing this torn shoes. How many times have I told you guys to buy me a new pair of shoes? But no, every time we have some financial crisis or the other. Why don't we go and meet Trishna didu? But ma always has her own reasons for this.

Padmini as tears in her eyes hearing to Raj and to Trishna's name.

Madhu: Raj, (scolding) Stop talking that rude to ma. You very well know that we have so much of financial trouble. You can buy your shoes even later.

Padmini: No Madhu, don't stop him. Let him continue. (in a sarcastic tone) After all I have not done anything for him. (Crying badly)

Raj: Lo it started. Again ma started with her emotional drama. (Irritated moves from there to his room).

Madhu cannot see her mother crying and she comes and hugs her mother with tears I her eyes too.

Shantivan (Raizada Mansion), Delhi:

In the living room Manorama Raizada (Yuvi and Aakash's mother, Arnav and Anjali's chachi and RK's Mami) is reading her Women's era magazine. She is reading the gossip of the B-Town as though she has to write an exam on the subject. She is all decked up with jewelry and is wearing a grand Benaras Sari. Devyani Raizada (Arnav, Yuvi, Akash and Anjali's Dadi and RK's Naani), Anjali and Radha Kundra (RK's mother) return from the temple.


Manorama Raizada


Deyani Raizada

Radha Kundra

Devyani: Ye lo, Here she is. (Talking about Manorama) Manorama, if you have finished reading your Gossips then take some Prasad, from the temple.

Manorama is too engrossed in the magazine and does not notice the three women standing in front of her.

Devyani: (irritated) Manorama'Manorama.

Manorama startles: Hello, Hi, Bye, Bye. Saasuma, when did you make your enterywa? (slightly embarrassed)

Devyani: You would have known if you concentrate a little on the outer world too. (rudely) By the way when I asked you to accompany us to the temple you had headache, now you don't have headache?

Manorama suddenly keeps her hand on her forehand and pretends to massage her head. Devyani, gives a evil stare to her and walks to her room. Manorama takes a sigh of relief as soon as Devyani is out of sight. On this Radha and Anjali start giggling.

Radha: Bhabhi, you will never change. (giggling)

Manorama: How could I come to the temple? I had to watch Pyar ka Dard hein. I missed it yesterday. Hello Hi Bye Bye You knowing Pankhudi and Aditya's past are related'

Radha and Manorama get into this discussion. Anjali sees this and lets out sigh.

Anjali: Now, these two will not stop with their Serial Puran. I wonder where are these three brothers. Hari Prakash Ji'Hari Prakash Ji

Hari Prakash (HP, the Raizada Servant): Ji Anjali didi.

Anjali: Where is Chote (Anjali calls Arnav Chote), Rishabh and Yuvi?

HP: Didi, they have gone for tennis practice.

Anjali: Okay. You carry on with your work Hariprakash ji. (HP leaves) These three will never understand. I had asked them to start with their packing for college. They have their flight today. In the last moment they will start irritating me. Kya karoon mein inn teeno ka?

Right then RK, Arnav and Yuvi enter from the main door wearing their tennis dress. They walk towards Anjali.

Anjali: You three came? Did I not ask you people to finish with your packing today? What would happen if you guys would have not practiced tennis today?

RK: Waise di, Looks like you had been to the temple? (Seeing the Taal in Anjali's hand)

Anjali: Ya so?

Arnav: Then what would have happened if you would have not gone to the temple today? (with his smirk)

Yuvraj: What happened di? Now answer bhai? (stats smiling at the helpless condition of his cute di)

Anjali: There is no point arguing with you people.

The three of them settle down in the sofa. RK stares at Manorama and his mom who were still busy discussing the serial. He also stares on the Woman's Era magazine, cover page of which was showing the details of the interview of this famous actress Trishna Chaudary. He is irritated. Yuvraj clearly understood this.

Yuvraj: RK, did you buy the tennis shoes you wanted to buy?

Anjali: (understood the situation very well and wanted to divert RK's attention from the serial discussion. All very well knew how much he hated anything and everything related to the showbiz) What ! A new pair of shoes? But you purchased one last week. You guys will never realize the value of money.

Finally, Manorama and Radha too stop with their serial chat.

Manorama: Hello, Hi, Bye, Bye!! So what Anjali Bitya? RK Bitwa wants to buy a new pair of shoes then what is wrong in that?

Then the family starts to chit-chat. Arnav is busy with his BB texting his girlfriend Lavanya Kashyap, who too studies in SBU. The ladies are busy in chit chatting, while RK and Yuvraj are enjoying Manorama's non-stop bickering. Tea is served and they all enjoy the tea.

Part 1 - B Scroll Down


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Part 1: Four Places, Six People - B

Gupta House, Lakshminagar, Delhi (A small cottage):

This is Madhumati's house. She is Kushi and Payal's Bua, who stays in Delhi alone. Kushi and Payal have come to Delhi, as Kushi had her train ticket from Delhi to Bangalore. Madhumati is walking from one corner to other in the hall in tension, with Payal standing along with her worried and nervous.


Payal, Madhumathi (Bua), Kushi

Bua ji: Hai re Nandkishore, This girl will never learn a lesson. Why did I even agree to Shashi (Kushi and Payal's dad) Babuwa? I should have not agreed for Kushi coming to Delhi. See now, Maharani who had gone to get the vegetables is not yet come.

Payal: (who is also worried) Bua ji, you calm down. Don't worry Kushi will be back.

Bua: Why will I not worry? It has been 2 hours since this Sankadevi (Kushi) has gone to the market place. I had stopped from going but then when does she even listen to anyone. First of all Delhi is new to her, and here she even forgets to carry her mobile with her. Hai re Nandkishore what will I tell to Shashi and Garima, if something wrong happens?

Right then there is a knock on the door. Payal runs to open the door. Kushi absent mindedly enters.

Bua: Lo here she is. The Maharani of Lucknow. Arey wo Sankadevi, Where were you for so long? Don't tell me you were sitting in some chat shop for having some sweets.

Kushi is still lost in her own thoughts.

Payal: Kya hua Kushi? Where were you? You know how scared I was. Why didn't you take your mobile with you?

She takes the vegetable bag from Kushi's hand. She is shocked to see an empty bag.

Payal: Kushi!! Where are the vegetables?

Madhumathi snatches the bag from Payal.

Bua: Hai re nandhkishore!! Kya karon mein iss ladki ka?? She has been to the market for 2 hours and she got nothing. When will she get rid of her Sanakpan?

Payal pinches Kushi. Kushi gives out a small scream.

Payal: Kushi where are the vegetables? Where are you lost?

Kushi: Jiji, Vegetables?? That…I forgot...I mean…that guy…

Bua: Here, she came to Delhi only today and already she started with her problems. Which Guy? Look Kushi, I have been in Delhi for so long and I have led a respectable life. If I get any complaints then see what I will do. Tell me What did you do? Which guy are you talking about?

Kushi: Arey Chill bua ji. There is nothing like that. First I while I was walking to the market I found this girl being harassed. Somehow with the help of two girls I helped that girl out. Then…

Payal: what? Guys were harassing a girl?

Bua: Maharani, what did you do? Oh so now I get it. That guy followed you? That is why you are doing guy-guy from that time?

Kushi: No. Those guys don't have much guts that they follow Kushi Kumari Gupta. They ran from there. Then I met this other guy while I was returning.

Payal and Bua: Which guy??

'Welcome' Lodge, Delhi:

Suvreen like Kushi also had her train from Delhi. She thus, came to Delhi with her parents. Actually, Suvi wanted to come alone, but then her parents would not allow. In fact, her uncle and aunt too wanted to accompany her, but then in god's grace they had to cancel the plan due to some wedding they had to attend. In room number 101. Suvreen on returning explained all that happened in the road with the girl to her parents.

Mumma: Suvi, beta why did you have to get into all this?

Suvreen: Mumma if would not have gone then probably today that girl would have suffered a lot. Mumma you and Puppa have always taught to favor the right and today you are asking me to stop?

Puppa: Loveli ji, Suvi is right. We have to be proud to have a daughter like Suvreen. I am proud of you Suvreen Beta. Beta today you will leave to Bangalore, then we both will be left all alone. (sadness clear in his tone)

Suvreen hugs her puppa and then her mumma to joins them.

Mumma: Wish even Jasleen was with us. (she later regrets telling this)

They break the group hug.


Loveli Guggal (Mumma) - Baldev Guggal (Puppa)

Puppa: How many times have I told you that we never had a daughter named Jasleen. We have only one daughter and that is Suvreen Guggal.

Suvreen: Mumma-Puppa, I need to see that everything is packed. Or else in the last moment there will be a hurry. (Tries to change the topic)

They get into packing.

Four places, Six people all getting ready to meet in one place - Shradha Bakthi University, Bengaluru. Will Madhu be able to solve the problem between Padmini and Raj before leaving? What is that RK does not like about showbiz? Who is Lavanya Kashyap? Who is the guy who Kushi met while returning? How will Suvreen say good bye to her over protective and loving parents? Wait for the Part 2 of 'Under One Roof'.

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Edited by Manish_Shetty - 12 years ago
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this was really amazing
hats off manish...👏

i mean wow i luvd mamiji asusual...ur lukchnawi typz hindi was toh "mashallah"

and madhu ka scene awww u are showing her as a dramebaz...wow luv madhu tht way...!!!!!

and nw m toh pakka walla sure tht wen these 3 will meet in SBU they will bcum gud frnds
{{arey koyi toh batavo yeh SBU kaha hein...mein bhi join kar lethi hun!😆}}

and the 3 HHH in the tennis ka attire haye haye mein marjawaan...

this was really perfect!!! tum ko ekdum pakke walle writer nikle!!!

but

but

LAVANYA KASHYAP?????????????????/...ASR ki gf...naaahhhiii


chalo lets see...abb iss bala ko paar karke...arshi ek saath kaise ayyenge!!!

and manish yaaar bohut pyaara tha...m addicted to it now..so update soon

cuz urz is the 1st update jahhaan mein itne lambe lambe cumnts kar rahi hun...srsly m in luv wid this ff...and mujhein mere luv sein jyada judda math rakhna...so update soon...{bdw as per my dhamki in SG forums i haf started paakofying u😆}


Edited by chaichil - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chaichil

this was really amazing
hats off manish...👏

i mean wow i luvd mamiji asusual...ur lukchnawi typz hindi was toh "mashallah"

and madhu ka scene awww u are showing her as a dramebaz...wow luv madhu tht way...!!!!!

and nw m toh pakka walla sure tht wen these 3 will meet in SBU they will bcum gud frnds
{{arey koyi toh batavo yeh SBU kaha hein...mein bhi join kar lethi hun!😆}}

and the 3 HHH in the tennis ka attire haye haye mein marjawaan...

this was really perfect!!! tum ko ekdum pakke walle writer nikle!!!

but

but

LAVANYA KASHYAP?????????????????/...ASR ki gf...naaahhhiii


chalo lets see...abb iss bala ko paar karke...arshi ek saath kaise ayyenge!!!

and manish yaaar bohut pyaara tha...m addicted to it now..so update soon

cuz urz is the 1st update jahhaan mein itne lambe lambe cumnts kar rahi hun...srsly m in luv wid this ff...and mujhein mere luv sein jyada judda math rakhna...so update soon...{bdw as per my dhamki in SG forums i haf started paakofying u😆}




thanx a lot tanya..!! Ekh baath pata hein thumhe?? you always are the first to comment on all my updates in this FF...and ya shayad that is lucky too for me...becoz I am writing so well on this FF..!!! Thanx a lot..!!!! 😃😃😃waise paakofying karna tho thumara huq hein na? After all writer friends jo hein..!!! 😛 😆
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Originally posted by: Manish_Shetty



thanx a lot tanya..!! Ekh baath pata hein thumhe?? you always are the first to comment on all my updates in this FF...and ya shayad that is lucky too for me...becoz I am writing so well on this FF..!!! Thanx a lot..!!!! 😃😃😃waise paakofying karna tho thumara huq hein na? After all writer friends jo hein..!!! 😛 😆




m lucky for u...wow yeh toh pehle baar huva hein...usually m really unlucky typz kyunki i mess up things...cuz i keep going sar sar sar all the tym wid my non stop talks and confusing the hell out of ppl

vaise haq toh mera bantha hein...ab haq de hi diya hein toh jhel lo...baadh mein pachtaana math!😆

vaise ur ff is worth all the best cumnts wij u will get soon frm othr ppl...nd mera cumnt...toh hein hi...u kno spcl cumnt from a extra spcl person to a spcl prsn who alwayz updatez spcl things..😆...sooo u r totally worth it !
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Posted: 12 years ago
@tanya waise you know wat...such mein thum bahuth hi acha baath karthi ho...I mean logon ko tho confuse karne mein thum mahyir ho..!! 😆

By the way while typing this comment out..I am getting a thing in my mind..I was thinking why not use your this confusing technique on any one of the heroin in the FF...I mean ekh scene...it will be awesome..!! wat say?? 😉 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Manish_Shetty

@tanya waise you know wat...such mein thum bahuth hi acha baath karthi ho...I mean logon ko tho confuse karne mein thum mahyir ho..!! 😆


By the way while typing this comment out..I am getting a thing in my mind..I was thinking why not use your this confusing technique on any one of the heroin in the FF...I mean ekh scene...it will be awesome..!! wat say?? 😉 😆



manish abb tak toh theek tha but if u will use tht na...log tum par jhoote fekenge...i mean mere is confusing way...omg m trying hard to get rid of it...but yahhan tumh usko apne ff mein use karoge????

tumhe karna hein toh kar lo...phir baadh mein mujhein maath kehena cuz bichaari sahas ne mere saath ek baar baath kya kar li voh ab tak pachtha rahi hein!!! { pakka walla virus}

soo do this at ur own risk😆😆
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Originally posted by: chaichil



manish abb tak toh theek tha but if u will use tht na...log tum par jhoote fekenge...i mean mere is confusing way...omg m trying hard to get rid of it...but yahhan tumh usko apne ff mein use karoge????

tumhe karna hein toh kar lo...phir baadh mein mujhein maath kehena cuz bichaari sahas ne mere saath ek baar baath kya kar li voh ab tak pachtha rahi hein!!! { pakka walla virus}

soo do this at ur own risk😆😆


dont worry yar tere is weakness ko mein ekh weapon bana dunga for any one of the herions...😆 and ya talking about the virus...this time it wont be just one person like sahas...this time it will all who read the FF...I mean sab iss bimari se peedith ho jayenge...😆 😉

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