ArShi FF: DAAG LiNk to thread 2 pg 134 *3/5*

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Muskaan_87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

waiting eagerly for read ur story:)

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Pizookie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

i serious cried reading this..
very nice..
keep writing..

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allegro

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Interesting story.

Update soon. 😃

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Kurup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Amazing yaar...

I being a male feel ashamed of being a man when i read or watch such incidents in papers or on TV. Why is it that men are such lusty wolfes. Why cant men consider females as human beings...The day men consider women and human beings I think that is the day when the world is safe for the future generations...

Hriddeyyy a very goood start and the take off was superb...Eagerly waiting for the next chapter, but i know coz of ur other commitments and u "n" number of scripts the next update of this chapter would be after a decade...

Try sooon yaar chotte to update...u come up with great plots. but the delay in ur updates reallly sucks and even pisses me up,,,,so start updating faster...

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Scarlet Wizard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: Kurup
Amazing yaar...

I being a male feel ashamed of being a man when i read or watch such incidents in papers or on TV. Why is it that men are such lusty wolfes. Why cant men consider females as human beings...The day men consider women and human beings I think that is the day when the world is safe for the future generations...

Hriddeyyy a very goood start and the take off was superb...Eagerly waiting for the next chapter, but i know coz of ur other commitments and u "n" number of scripts the next update of this chapter would be after a decade...

Try sooon yaar chotte to update...u come up with great plots. but the delay in ur updates reallly sucks and even pisses me up,,,,so start updating faster...

next chapter is on its way bhai...it will arive soon

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...Chanchan...

@...Chanchan...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

poor girl, is it khushi being raped, and who is her attacker, i think it could be either shaym( if he's a dark character its possible to be him )
please update soon.

just read the teaser, so arnav is not the attacker, thank god for that.
it seems like arnav knows her, hope he can be the person who can help her through this trauma.

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shanon

@shanon

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Oh my god.

My heart is wrenching for her.

Your fiction is focusing on current situation.I hope it will send a social message through your fiction.

Pl do continue.
Waiting for the story to proceed.
Plz do pm me.

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amita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

interesting story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

plz update soon

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

TEASER-daag...

Arnav drove towards the hospital...All the thoughts from the past running in his mind...He was seeing her after so many years and that too in this condition...He again turn his face towards her,her mess hair and bleeding lips...He remember their college days when his khushi was the most beautiful girl in whole college...He silky hair pink cheeks rose like lips but the khushi who was lying in front of him was totally changed...

He came back to his sense when driver stop the car in front of City Hospital...Without wasting any more time Arnav took her in his arm and rushed towards the main door...Without caring he was calling the doctors through his lungs and in no time khushi was gone from his strong arms which was now helpless for the most precious thing in his life...

After 2 hours doctors came out and in no time arnav rushed towards them but before he could ask anything he heard them say that "SORRY MR RAIZADA"

plz hit the like button and commant...

your commants inspired me to write more

Edited by hrideyy - 12 years ago

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