It all started with 300 Rupees Chapter 33 - Page 24

Beautifully written! Nice depiction of a reunion! 👏

Wonderful update KC...didnot know when it got completed...Thanks for the PM...waiting for new year celebrations...

KC,

ive told u zillions of times KC

I loved it it was beautiful piece of writing

loved the update!
my tarikh! so cute!

THANK YOU... WISH U THE SAME... very good writing.. you explain their feelings very clearly.. i can imagine through your writing.. thank you...

as usual beautiful...

it was awesome...the best gift...will read it again and then reply in details

And so I hit the 50th like on the last one! S'pose that's early for me, ain't it?!

Will come back soon to edit! I actually read more than half of the update while I was waiting at the signals stops while I drove to my internship institute! And the rest in the parking lot! :P

Ahh so - reserved!!!

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What the hell was that? Like seriously? I mean - the realization from his side about her old self lost somewhere this late? What is he- a tubelight?!!!!!

Jokes apart, he wanted to win her back, he did. He wanted to get Aashna comfortable with him, he did. Now he wants Khushi to be herself - the Khushi he knew, I know he will do that to. He doesn't give up easily, does he?

Now that's exactly what I love about your Arnav. He truly regret, he truly wallows in guilt and he seriously wants to make things work. Now, you seriously can't lose everything twice, can you? I suppose knowing what it means to lose Khushi and having lived and survived through it has made me like this. There was a part towards the end of the chapter when Naina tells Khushi that she hasn't seen Arnav like that and Khushi's reply on that the real him is like this - that one really DoD strike a chord. I don't know why. It was great seeing Arnav back in his ASR avatar from the lovey-dovey form - texting Khushi during meetings, teasing her every chance he gets and then loving her the way he does.. But still.. Khushi went back in time because of that and it really did hurt!!!

I love how you have developed and use the extra characters. And especially this chapter, when Arnav gets to know how much Khushi has changed. Brilliant! The background fit perfectly and I loved it!

He's taking her to the party and I couldn't be happier about it. But something still bothers me.. Khushi behaving like this and overreacting and getting hyper - she's not healed well, is she? There are still million things in her mind - courtesy her traumatic past - she's still every bit as insecure as she might have been. Maybe Arnav should do something for that. Maybe. That's what I think at least!

Lovely chapter as usual! Looking forward for the next one...

And yeah - wish you a very happy new year!

Lots of love!