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OnlyHope

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I shall reserve only because you said not to.

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BlackStar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Iqra.. I randomnly stumbled across this and I must say it's amazingg!
Please do continue soon.
Loving it so farr <3

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ZumSrK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wonderful update <3
Can't wait to read next part :)

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PixieFlame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

This just keeps getting better and better!

You are an amazing writer! :)

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.lostinthought.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

OMG! I love these two! Fab update:D

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Manjit Gurcha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Okay, so I know I'm pretty late at commenting, but better late than never, right? (: So I read the entire three chapters in one go, and I'm loving this dark story. All the characters have some mystery hidden within them, and I'm so curious to find out what you have in store for your readers. And I feel so sad for Arnav. And I'm loving all the characters. No Khushi for Arnav yet, but I guess I could wait. Please update soon 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Chapter 3 was great Grace! Although I'm absolutely dying to meet Khushi already :P

And I wonder who Aliya is? A former lover, or a childhood best friend?!

Khirad seems to be a persistent woman and I have a feeling that even if ashar doesn't want it, she'll worm her way into his heart :)

Missed Rohan in this chapter and even Vivan but I can't wait to read more! Continue soon :)

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-Grace-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

chapter 4 has been updated on the first page.

don't forget to comment and please avoid reserving.

thank you!

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ZumSrK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Loved the 4 th part :))
Arnav-Asher not so good interacting was very well written :)
And Khirad-Khushi r friends <3 can't wait to read more :))
Wonderful update :)

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Sarah Ashraf

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

The story itself shows how close this must be to you. You got me glued to this one!
It has this heart touching feeling to it, that has me affected as well :) i really really love the setting, the storyline and the characterisation. You're an amazing writer and its always a treat to read you. I look forward to the next update. Very eager to know more about their pasts. And yes, wonderful how you've linked their stories and brought them to work at one place.

Love, good wishes
Sarah