Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 1)

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dazzlerabi

@dazzlerabi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#581

Nani no more😭,that's sad...Feel sorry for Arnav ,hope khushi helps him to get out of sorrow soon n Thankz for pm..

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#582

That's sad!!! Hope Arnav copes up... with Khushi's help... Will he legally adopt the kids?

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Theepthidevi

@Theepthidevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#583

Nice update. Nani s dead. Feeling very sad about that. Khushi said so many things to him but he obliged only when she said that she will leave the house.

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#584

i am trying to follow your ss ...nice idea and well executed ...

loving all the updates good ob

good luck with everything and keep writing...

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831628

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Posted: 12 years ago

#585

Nice update...nani dead...did not see that coming...very sad

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foesb

@foesb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#586

An emotional chapter... So nani is no more and Arnav back to a shell. The way Khushi tried to make Arnav eat and finally only thing that worked was threatening that she will leave was very nicely written can visualize everything. Very sad update hopefully good times are ahead for them, and waiting to see how you are going to make Arnav accept his feeling for Khushi and the day Khushi also realizes she has developed something for him cauz as at for now seems like she just respects him a lot and that's it... So eagerly waiting for everything to unravel.. Once a again fabulous writing👏

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#587

Is it wrong of me to think that Arnav should just seduce and ravish Khushi to keep her with him forever?

Poor guys, Nani left them. I hope things turn out for the better!

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Bella023

@Bella023

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Posted: 12 years ago

#588

Amazing story ... Quite unique ...keep up the good work 😃

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ashred12

@ashred12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#589

oh no...nani too !! :'(
so arnav got all worked up wen khushi threatened to leave...

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Simran

@dmg123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#590

AWESOME!!

It was sad reading that Nani ji passed away.

The way you portrayed Khushi's concern for Arnav was great! Arnav telling Khushi that she cannot leave, was also nice! I hope he talks to her about his feelings and opens up to her a little more:)

I can't wait to read more!! Thank you very much for the pm!

You have me totally captured in your story and you are doing an awesome job!

Edited by dmg123 - 12 years ago