ACP Arjun ka Apharan.. updated part 19 on pg 92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee
OMG!! Yeh chotu n shree bhi na!! hadd hoti hai!!! dostana?? breakup?? double cross??🤣 if rathod was near them 😆 dono ki band baja dethi!! ROFL!! hope dese idiots wont mess up!!

loves riya's care.. abhi tak woh log kahi nahi pahuncha!! i thought they would have arrived at darjeeling.. its high time.. she should open his hands.. arjun ko aise imagine karthe hi bura lagtha hai!!

i know rathod apna angry look se hi dono ko mar deta... i added at last min. the riya's care scene and i worked...

it takes atleast 11 to 12 hrs to reach darjeeling... and they started their journey at 6 am in the morning and they stopped many times so obviously it will take more time

and thank you

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: tmbs
arjun riya scenes were too gud...want to read more of it and Shree riya frenship also...nd thanx for d pm

i'll try to make it more interesting and romantic... thanx for comments

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: fatima15
the update was just so funny :) loved it..
awww how sweet riya brushed arjun's teeth..
chotu and shree's conversation was hilarious
can't wait to read more
thanks for the PM
update soon

thank you... hope you will like the further parts too... shreetu is my favorite... love to write their convo.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah
Nice part..
Continue soon

thanks😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007
🤣 I'm laughing too much..

Dear , Chotu is too much... 😆 Rathod Sir tadap rahe hai , "Jaise jal bin machli"😉

Doublecross😆

Jab Arjun & Rathod ko ye sab karnaame pata chelgne tab Choree ki kya hoga???

Aur jab Shree ko Riya ke karnaame ke bare mai pta chlega tab kya hoga?

Aur jab Arjun ko pta chlega ki Riya & Shree dost hai tab kya hoga Shree ka??? soch ke hi dar lagta hai.

And vo lake wala scene... awesme...

And vo Toothbrushb wala scene ... aaa so cute.. aisa laga ki meri eyes ke saamne sab chal rha hai..

plz update soon dear..

thank you... thank you.. thank you...

i am so glad that you like it...

and yes when they'll know about the truth , its gonna be the real dhamal and fun... havent think yet how i'll write but i'll try to make it damn funny...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Princeess07
Chotu nd shree's convo was gr8...dostana gr8
riya no more afraid of arjun...nyc update

sreetu is my favorite and they are so sweet and cute...

thank you

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: Moumimon

OmG oMg OmG...
just love it yrrr..😛
Awsome update...🤣
ArjunRiya was too awsm...😳
And ShreeChotu was awsm too...😉😆
Waiting for next entry[Shree and Riya ka best frnd]...
Update next part soon...waiting for your next update...😳😳

thank you so so much...😊

i am working for next part

hope you love that one too...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: tani23
OMG i m dead after Laughing so much

kya update thi ...

loved it

Ria stopped d car so that dey can freshen up...
arjun dreaming about Kissing ria 😊...so cute

Waiting for more parts

hey thanks for comments...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Piyarani
Omg dekh kaise tadap rahen hai jal bin machhali ke taraha, mar dala ,
mar dala
Ooofff ye arjun n sam ka yarana ,
n riya total super girl etna sara saman,
n arjun dreem n vo bhi kisss haye not fare or kitna hasaoge
supub yr minnnddd blowing thank for this lvly update n plzzz conti soon ,n riya jaise to coppy
, is anythink happend to riya ??????????

as you said riya is a super girl... and this is romantic comedy of ariya... so nothing is going to happen to her