*Completed* Th#1 ArHi SS: Making Decisions

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Fau Zi

@lazylad8-FauZi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Wow!!! Please continue and PM me PLEASE!!!!!!

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Hey!

That was an amazing first chapter! 😃

I don't blame Khushi at all. Her focus is on getting the money in order for her babuji's operation, not matter what she has to do. Having said that, she has tried for hours to get the money together without much luck ... 😕

Arnav on the other hand, just uses that to his advantage. She openly asks him as his employee for a loan. He turns her down. However, he'll exchange money from his own account for a night with her ... wth!? Will he really sink that low ...?

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Nice update. going on lines of Indecent proposal. Can't wait for the next update. Loving this so far. You are a damn good writer and you have this amazing ability to leave the chapters at cliffhangers which make us viewers desperate for more.

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

DOUBLE L ...HMMM IT IS GOOD BUT DON'T YOU THINK THE PRICE

IS TOO HIGH 15 GRAND

CARRY ON ...

LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU UPDATE AND ALSO THE OTHER WORKS

KKKA

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Arnie baby. Itna rude hona, is not at all good. If u r attracted so much towards khushi, then why r u behaving like this? Poor khushi, I love her, kya khichake Di!
But what's gonna happen in d hotel?
Plz update fast!

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shanon

@shanon

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Good one.nice attempt.

Waiting for your next update.

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Why Didn't Arnav Melt When He Heard That Khushi Is In Pain?! ; O 🥺

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magss24

@magss24

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

wow a new ss from u...awesome.. loved the first part...n arnav deserved the slap...

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amritafan

@amritafan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

oh my god.dont do this arnav

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essess

@essess

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

This is the second time I am writing this message-- the first one went off to another land-- gone with the wind...( ie Error message received by me)

Like i said beforeI l like your writing and have liked most of your stories, even this chapter the writing is good, but i dont knoe if i can like such a Arnav-- for me Arnav is strong, and angry but Just ,

I cant really like a guy who propositions his staff-- it hurts my romantic image of Arnav-

Sorry i hope i havent hurt you, but u did ask my opinion.

Saying alll of that I will probably still read the story as long as he has some good qualities and it doesnt become a sicker version.

My email is seems2@rediffmail.com if u can send me the blog link. THX!