KriYaansh OS - Rasiya - Page 2

as i commented i was all dizzy and breathless and yeah half killed...so u don't expect me to be able to read it again or else is baar toh i'll die but haan u r incredible just so amazing...and i rlly wud beg people to stay away if they feel offended...

Hawt nd romantic os...
i have never such romantic ever...
very nicely written... really have no words...
BEAUTIFUL ❤️ ❤️
Thank u for writing it...
thnx for pm

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

pehle toh i never thot ki yeh aisa wala 18+ hoga...

but i loved it...

u know the way u used those terms... angvastram...

it added a different aura arnd it... u know like sort of medieval times...

like they show in dances nah... ekdum vaise...

so i can literally imagine what was going on... and i am so happy for that ... non-d3 KR rocks...

maine abhi jab shaant ki saath pheel ke saath padha... i am telling u... it was such a beautiful sight to imagine...

just perfect di...

perfect choice of words... to the point word usage...

such a powerful artistry... ;)

the way he proceeded towards her... how she was nervous... how they mated everything... just a beauty di...

like how he held her... how he wanted to devour her... how for kria evrything was just like it was happening first time...

how for them each touch was new... just perfect...

the way how rey chose everything...

u know the cryptic feelings... how his eyes showed it out all... then how kria was so nervous... how she was u know sorta cursing types... like bhavnayein samjho...

then the perfect dance poise u describing abt he bringing her to him... then devouring her... too good di...

then mirror ke paas ka scene... that was one amazing creation di...

how she hid... how he made her face him... then how she hugged him... then the word usage there for the mirror thingy... that was breathtaking... u know she felling him...

then that kiss... i mean seriously... that was pure bliss di...

finally they mated... and really loved it... par usne thoda sa hi torture kiya... he shud have done more... a longer OS wud have been the result...

but anyways... then they... finally... totally awesome... amazing... a beauty... especially the vocab u used for it... that was just fab di...

plus the way u described the feelings... OMG di... was beautiful...

mujhe best part toh the way u descibed their actions and reaction .. how they were speaking thru eyes... and the sophisticated paryayvachi of dhoti...

prodigious OS di...

P.S: sorry honey bunny... i am again reposting the same comment...

haan itna bada comment phir se likhne mein bohot time lagtha na😆

😛
unres...
first let me calm down...
m sweating like anything...
vo b december me...
*deep breathe*...
firstly abt the promo..
mene ab tk promo nai dekha..
n seriously i don even want to...
but i read in IF k there is some so called hot scene
been used on that couple wats the name of that couple...emmm...forget it who cares...
this was THE HOTTESTEST OS i have ever read..
n i jus love this song...
i listen this song almst everyday...
now coming to OS...
i mean it was like killer...
i don have words...
m speechless...
n i m sure that palki cant even think to touch this...
awsm awsm awsm...
thnx 4 the pm...

P.S-thanx a lot di for reposting it...mene same comment post kiya h... :)

love u anky for this os...

it's jst amazing...
I read it again...
nd luvd it again...
Thankx 4 d pm

diii!!!!!!!!! ye to sab OS ka baap tha😉
hahaha super duper hawwt n sexy
😛😳

hayeee!!!!! i m toh blushing all da
tym while reading it
☺️
you knw wht wen vaishu told me dat
you writing dis OS
i strted dancing in someone's marrige xcitdly
evn i dnt knw da name of bride n
groom

n n n...dam i love last line which you
dedicated to palki matte
you seriously dare to her

i just love dis song re
bt promo eewwweee i dnt want to
see it

n now i m proudly gonna say
MY ROMANCE QUEEN is back
seriously soo beautifully you
describe evryting ki anand aa gya

ps: mera wo desi boys concept wala
to yaad h na apko OS..hehe