New Arhi FF - Tujh Par Haq Hai Sirf Mera!chap-11!!

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angeldream14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

NICE

LOVED IT

CURIOUS ABT PAST

PLZ PM ME

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moomin4455

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Awww sooo cute!!

Can't wait to read more scenes about Arnav and Khushi when they were little! Arnav is trying to hold back from scaring Khushi with his affection, but it's soo hard!

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faith_hope

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

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Zariya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

is arnav obsessive abt khushi?
what did arnav do?
me waiting 4 updating

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abhi_arshilover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Awesome update. Loved it. Please cont soon. Thanks for pm.

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koisk

@koisk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

wow arnav is soo scary and possessive, and poor khushi she doesnt even understand wats happening😭

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reshmimohan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

😊 Loved it. Interesting.

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Niki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Fab update.👏
Things are getting intense with passage of time and Arnav is totally obsessed with Khushi.
But why is Arnav taking things so fast? Its like he has lost his senses seeing Khushi coz how can a 6 yr old remember someone from whom u are taken far away for such a long time.
Anyways I like how the story is proceeding and I am waiting to see Khushi's reaction in next update.

Dont mind but being a writer myself I am kind of guessing what must have happened in their past but I wont state my thoughts here coz its ur story and I am eagerly waiting to see what u hv in store.😉

Contine soon and keep up the good work.👍🏼

Edited by nikita.nikz - 13 years ago

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MyAnastasia18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

AMAZING...I'M IN LOVE WITH UR STORY...FEELING SORRY FOR BOTH ARNAV ND KHUSHI HOPE EVERYTHING WILL BE GOOD SOON

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

okay like promised am gonna give comments on what you have written so far
i was hoping i would have more time to do this before you updated but guess i was wrong there huh
okay lets start with the prologue
okay so it seems something happened 15 years ago what was it
and why does it say that one truth of her life will be disastorous for her
and why does nani not want that person back in arnie's life
aisa kya hau tha ki ASR is asking DM to give him his life back
and onto chapter 1