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Kareena1994 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all the chapters in one go.
Want to read more
Can u pls add me in your pm list.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally read the part...it was simply awexome ...mai ne bara wala comment blog pe kia hai...soo plzzz read it...
It was fabulous...zabardast...
All the scenes were awesome..most probably The HANGING Garden part...lolz...they actually kissed infront of team...
N the cite scene of pulling his nose...i was smiling n laughing...imagining...hahaha...
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls pls pls pls pls pls
sent me the mail
i am dying to read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
How beautifully you wrote!!!

You've left me at a loss for words. This chapter was so beautiful.

Arjun rescuing Riya, the hanging love confession demanded by Riya, the sensational unexpected kiss initiated by Riya, the flashback (that was Ooh-la-laa!), and the Arjun's discovery of her wound.

The feelings and emotions I felt at each different part of the chapter were so vastly different from each other!

The nail-biting suspense of the fall and the adrenaline rush from the hanging conbimed with the romance of the confession and kiss. That was the cherry on the top!!

And. The precap is killing me!!! And. I want to see Sikander punished for what he did to Riya. God.

Waiting for your next update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally i read d chapter

n believe me ...my first reaction after reading was..."koi mujhe paani do"

awesum yaar

i m still in Ariya dreamland

kitni saari hotness add kar di ...☺️

The chapter was beautifully written

Arjun n Ria hanging n den d confession

ria adamant dat she wont leave him until he says ILY to her...gr8 timing Ri😆

n den d FB...👏

mujhe abhi apni story likhni thi ...but cannot write anything 😆

i m still Blushing

continue soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG muskan diii that was speechless...
I Mean "Wow"
you did a mindblowing job full paisa wusool work
for me it was 5 star ⭐️
Let me confess few things
The character u depicted of riya as a cute innocent and naive girl was so sweet
You surely did the full sincerity with that character...
Than the character of Acp Sir rough and tough...
I loved the swings that you depicted in his character that from daring to caring how sweet😳
Than you showed the relationship between riya and rathod a pure brother and sister relation...
The love and concern for riya from rathore's side and from the rest of the team was so
Beautiful...
Then u showed a cute innocent agressive at the moment confession...That cliff scene and riya's commanding tone was really awsome...
You know i myself im not good with words...
But i have to appreciate your writing skills you write so awsome and well...
Well its also truth that first time im commenting so long on anyone's thread...
But you actuallly deserve this...
Well done...👏
Edited by dia121 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sounds like an interesting precap, Muskaan! I have sent you my gmail id, so please do send the update to me:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
got d mail ...
bt ws not able 2 read dat 😕
i've sent a request to you ..
accept it
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh u don't want me in the blog then its oky
Posted: 12 years ago
Update soon, i love your FF very much. its an amazing story. Can u please PM me when u update the next..?

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