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BornToShipArShi

@BornToShipArShi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#621

lovely update😃
i love all the characters here
and HP was so hilarious🤣

"Sir she specifically said she has no desire to meet (cough) err..you. She says she just wants some cell phone of hers you have (cough) sto- err..kept, kept back"

what did she use to address arnav here? and did she say stolen which HP told as kept back?

looking forward to the next part😊

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#622

Firstly , a very Happy New Year to you , too..Sabi!!!

I love the denizens...be it the blithe NK ( I suggest he try the

boomerang,..no hassles of missed catches 😆), Hari ...very astute, and the mercurial Arnav( My respect for him grew exponentially..thanks to his chivalry)...

I truly had a belly laugh..envisioning the salsa step and Hari ruing for missing out on being the videographer...

Khushi is rumbustious and adorable...poor girl looked so baffled after his unconventional reply..

and, the persiflage between the two...was outstanding...

Shyam is for lack of a better word...a masterpiece...Wren and Martin - a novel??...😆

You deserve an encomium...for tickling the funny bone, ...And thank you for the PM :)))

Edited by Aanchal15 - 12 years ago

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Annu92

@Annu92

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#623

Wow..! Practising salsa..! Dat was hilarious...:-D

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#624

just this - 🤣You Shyam is da bawmb, just by the way. Just... 😆

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crazyweird

@crazyweird

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#625

Knew it wld be nk with bottle missles

Nice update

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Swetha Reddy

@swekus

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#626

Just when Hari Prakash, generally the last one to leave for the outhouse was about to make a final conclusion that his boss had taken a sudden interest in learning salsa foot steps, and was busy mourning the fact that his salary didn't provide him enough for a handy-cam, he saw Arnav kick a stand near the plush sofas in disgust, then mutter something, which didn't require him three guesses to know that it was probably a 'damn it..' and then march like a tornado out of the house, or whatever it was that tornadoes did, behind that pretty lady.

⭐️ 👏 🤣 awesome n fab update...

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#627

Originally posted by: swati-89
Saucy iam so absolutely in love with this Shyaam's dictionary right now.

Where from do u get the inspiration for such fantastic and fascinating love spasms dear???

Whenever i think u can't surprise me anymore u turn up with a chapter like this.

The update has ur mark all over it... full of humour, saucy monologues and insight to the characters too.

I was just trying to actually see that scene from HP's point of view abt Arnav trying to learn or do salsa dance steps and almost tipped my coffee cup.

Absolutely delightful sweetheart.

THANK U, for making me smile, no laugh actually after a very boring morning.

Now comes my usual rejoinder____________ DO UPDATE SOON... will be waiting for it.

HAPPY NEW YEAR to u too...

Take care

Love
Swati

See Saucy Sweetheart i didn't even wait to see whether u have Pmed me or not and just dove into ur update.

Just now i opened my Pm box and here i am already trying to give u a mental hifi (in hopes for a sooner update of next chapter) so that u smile though ur day and do what u do best write fantastibulous stories.😊

So love ur story and update soon......

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tanurocks

@tanurocks

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#628

sabi...u r back with a bang...woohoo awesome...missed ur writings...lovely

Dear Shyaam,

Read me, maybe?

Your's sincerely,

Wren and Martin's Grammar for middle school.

Moments later, a message came back.

I read. Even before I grow up. Nice novel. Thank you for reply, it made my night the bright day.🤣

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Aanchal

@aanchu19

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#629

finally you are back sabi 😃

happy new year dear

lovely update👏
though the title is quite similar with UE but the story and characters are not 😛

i love their fights 😆

and yey NK is here already but where are other crazy family members?

felt bad for arnav's mother 😭

but he is going to have khushi by his side soon😉

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#630

D UPDATE WAS H-I-L-A-R-I-O-U-S 🤣🤪

I can't tell u how much my stomach is hurting after reading u're updates..plz dn't stop me from re-quoting u're lines dat were d funniest in dis update..wich got me literatin ROFL...🤪..

Was he Mr Raizada's brother or something? Khushi glanced at Arnav and scratched out her former guess. No one could possibly dish out such looks to one's own flesh and blood. really khushi..u will c more of dem soon thrown @ u...😆😆😆

like shame on you Hari! Is this the first time I have thrown bottles at you? Whatever happened to your catching talents? People like you shame the country at World Cups-"😆 do dey actualy have fun by throwing bottles @ eachother..nxt we might see dem play cricket nd d ball in question will be glass bottles..😆😆😆

"I want you to leave ONE damn place in my life where there isn't a BLOODY circus! This isn't a DAMN CIRCUS!"NK squinted his eyes.. "They have flying cold drink bottles for circus these days?...Oh.kaaay.I will shut up" Nk can u get possible funnier den dat...

Arrogant jerk, weird encounter, flying bottles, loony visitors. She wasn't quite accustomed to the package. u're not alone in dis khushi..😉

kicked the half broken bottle on the floor with a force which could put Ronaldo to shame..poor bottle..i'm tellng u in possible future bottles will replace balls..@ tleast i can gurantee dat can happenin in saucychip's land😉😉😉

Look Khushi, what's more important? Smartphone or Arnav Singh Raizada?

You will go there and demand it back! It is your prized posession. Your first love, your hope for the future, your-"

Payal intervened.. "I seized one today in class. Want it?""You are a shame to mankind. Return it tomorrow or you won't get dinner" Khushi pointed her fingers at her friend ...

u now i love dere sibbling lyk humoruos bonding...dese 3 are made for each other..

Sir she specifically said she has no desire to meet (cough) err..you. She says she just wants some cell phone of hers you have (cough) sto- err..kept, kept back"

The coughs were quite self explanatory that several synonyms had been conveniently used in place of the actual words...never have ever took interest in khushi's grammer till now..nd u now y...

nor do I have the time or the inclination to open a Lost and Found department at my home... hey dat wud be one breaking news if arnav decides @ random to open 1

Insanity often interferes with memory powers,. Maybe I just forgot.."😆😆

final conclusion that his boss had taken a sudden interest in learning salsa foot steps, and was busy mourning the fact that his salary didn't provide him enough for a handy-cam,.. u now never i have i actualy taken HP's interst into account but seems lyk in dis FF dey are going to play an importnt part...

"Oh, well, kind of you to come all the way here to tell that to me, whatever would I have done with just a wristwatch with me?" She spoke faking a sincere expression of gratitude and moved further along the driveway..from where do u actualy get such humorus khushi from...

Your's sincerely,

Wren and Martin's Grammar for middle school.

read. Even before I grow up. Nice novel. Thank you for reply, it made my night the bright day. by the tm i will be perfect in english i must just forget due to shyms angrzi..😆😆

there is a 6 feet 3 inches smart-phone beside her. Arnav Singh Raizada actually dropped her off!" even i need dis smartfone..its better den galaxy tab 2

You practice planchette?" only arnav can come up wid such a funny one liner @ d tym of such grief...

u now i can personaly vouch for d fact dat u can make me read u're stries countless no of tym nd get d same amnot of laughter...it so hilarious..nd conatgious..u're d bst.. u're my uncrowned luaghter GODDES..u deserve more den dat...👏..u're d bst..i mean where do u get d brains to write such addictive humourous one liners...🤪..

plz update d nxt update soon...plz dn't make us w8 for 1 1/2 mnth for d nxt month wich frnkly teling u is yk wn for a lfytym...

PLZ UPDATE SOON...!!!!!!😡😡😡

p.s kindly ingnore ny shym type mistakes..

Edited by penny25 - 12 years ago