ArHi FF: October 6 ~ *discontinued* see pg 56*

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KKKA

@KKKA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#331

AA LL II AA...I AM NOT SURE HOW THE STORY IS GOING TO DEVELOP

I AM DOUBTFUL OF A FEW THINGS

IT IS A VERY SENSITIVE ISSUE

ONE OF THE MOST HEINOUS CRIMES THAT KILLS THE VICTIM

ARNAV HAS TO GET THE PUNISHMENT HE DESERVES... LET

KHUSHI SEE HIM SUFFER

MAY BE I AM TAKING IT VERY SERIOUSLY

PROBABLY I SHOULD JUST READ IT LIKE ANY OTHER FICTION

I REQUEST YOU TO HANDLE THE SUBJECT WITH UTMOST CARE

WITHOUT MAKING IT SOUND LIKE A VICTORY FOR THE CRIMINAL

AND A SUFFERING FOR THE VICTIM

YOU CAN DELIVER A SOCIAL MESSAGE THROUGH YOUR STORY INFACT

THANKS FOR THE PM

PARDON ME IF MY COMMENT OFFENDED YOU IN ANY WAY

KEEP ME POSTED

KKKA

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shah.1234

@shah.1234

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#332

wow its toooi intrsting nowww

lets c wat wil happen next

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arshi-11

@arshi-11

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#333

hmmm 2 chapters nice :-) am happy
but also sad 4 khushi

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pearls09

@pearls09

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#334

You have written really well,very sensitive points .All what buaji said is what exactly happens in the Indian Society.This society has many barriers related to caste and gender even in 21st century.It is the same in every household.Blackmailing..narrow mindedness.I shud say Khushi is very lucky to have got a marriage proposal from the rapist's family. Not every gal in india who gets raped has this fate.
End of chapter 6 was really nice.Khushi shud make up her mind to get married to Arnav and torture him to hell after marrriage.
and of course i wud love to see regret from Arnav and love to be blossomed and a happy ending of course.
Thank you for the PM.

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Sanchita

@--Sarunholic--

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#335

Woww!! Double Updates!! Totaly loved both of them 😊 evryone s soo helples ryt now..poor Khushi..will have to compromise 😭 evn Buaji cudnt do nythng othr dan convincng her..coz..aftr all..we know how d society is..d blame s put on d girl..Always 😒 Totaly lovng d theme of dis Wonderful FF 😊 Thnxx fr d PM...update soon..!!!

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ag0502

@ag0502

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Posted: 12 years ago

#336

Love this

Just finished for an hour

From my point of view

I would like if Khushi reject the marriage proposal

Than Arnav will determine to win her (to let Khushi know him better)

as you already pointed out that arnav got a good in heart

At the same time Advay also working with Arnav

& he know his boss a good human being

So, let Khushi become friend with Advay

Then you can move further...

Okey..I stop...it's your ff...How can i...?

I'm sorry...

Amazing story...

I love this

TQ...do pm me...please.

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#337

sooo...Arnav z d rapist/..!!!hard 2 digest..:Owell..bein on Arnav's place its hard 4 him 2 accpt as well..i mean he dsnt rememba nethin..he's nt sure if he did it or nnt..bt seein Khushi's condtn..may b he felt dt she was tru..:(xctlie wat Khushi did..most of d grlz do in our society..4 d family n d repo..dey take der case bback..bt here ultimately Khushi wud marry Arnav..wnna c him goin thru pain..n accptin d fact...wt bein drunk cn cause..he was nt in his senses..sooo he cnt b blamed 4 it cmpltly..hope Khushi wud take a wise decision..:(loved it..:)thnxx..:)

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avchowdhury

@avchowdhury

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#338

Awesome update and really interestng concept witing eagerly for the next update

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San.Arshi

@San.Arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#339

It's wonderful, great story,, I always like your story coz, your good to explain the situations or moments...

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Amina Mahmood

@Amina87

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#340

Oh God!
I know these chapters were necessary but they were really depressing!
I have no words, i don't know what to say,
I think i can somewhat feel Khushi's pain bcoz i'm also a woman,
And after reading these chapters I HATE ARNAV,
I know my point of view will change but atleast now i hate Him!
I will wait 4 this marriage to happen and see how Khushi will make Him pay 4 His DEEDS!
Plz plz plz update next chapters soon!
It's really hard to wait NOW!