Kriyansh SS: We Belong Together (update page 48) - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update👏

loveddd ittt😃

and d dance sequence part was too good😃

waiting for d nxt part😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update..
Really loved it..
update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Liked nahi
Super liked there chemistery awesome
And
Song super awesome
Dono ek dusre ko chance de rahe pyar ka
Update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
verryyy Nicee dearr!!
OmG!! luvv dizz songgg..
the music s veryy good!!;)
and thatt dance seq.
Damn KriYaansh!!
although it was only written ...
i. felt juzz like watchin In Lamhoon Ke Daaman...**dreaming dreaming**

oh myy... Reyansh crying:'(
aaawww...
hope everything will be alright between em!!

update soon n thanx for pM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazng...
and dance sequnce was jst awesum
lvd it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i have not readed this ss before.. hows that possible...

anyways just readed all parts ...
awesome concept nd idea...
kriyaansh always bring smile on my face... 😛
dance sequence was nicely written ...
loved it
update soon
thnx for pm

p.s. all the best for papers
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Posted: 12 years ago

part 6

The ceremony ended with laughter fun and jokes , everyone started to leave slowly slowly , by the end everyone was tired , and knackered .. they all said bye to each other and went off to their rooms to get a goodnight sleep ...

rohan came up to kriya and gave her a small peck on her cheeks rey saw this and turned away and went off before he would see anything else goodnight😊 rohan smiled at her .. kriya was shocked but she still managed to say goodnight to him and the day ended with a goodnight sleep.

It was a new mourning ... back to all the chaos .. obviously wedding wala ghar tha sab jaga shouting toh hogi na , everyone were shouting at each other from one side to another ...Kriya was very confused, The next day was wedding and still she didn't have the right dress to wear.

"Kya huya kriya?? Why you upset??" Asked neha...
"Vo kya hai...I don't have a dress for tomorrow"
"Not a big problem...tum bhi hamare saath shopping chalo" said rinni. On hearing this her face lit up.
"One minute...let me call Rohan"

She was about to phone him but he, suddenly he came in front of her scaring her.
"Uffo rohan...tumne toh daraa hi diya"
"Sorry baby" saying this he kissed her cheek and hugged her.
"Rohan, tum yeh kiss karna band karo nahi toh you'll be dead" she whispered while hugging, Rey was very much irritated.
"Iss chuchundar ko bhi saath mein leke jaana padega...akela nahi chid sakta yeh meri baatcutter ko" he thought, toh chalein shopping rohan said putting his arm around kriya, umm ha chalo she replied looking away embarrassed.

They all set off to the shopping mall.. kriya would have a confused expression whenever she would enter a shop , rohan bhi koyi kaam ka nahi tha ulta jawab deta tha..' tumhein jo acha lagein wahi le lo' rohan kehta .. this would make kriya even more confused, finally she entered a shop , she saw the perfect outfit in front of her , she screamed like a little kid ,which made rohan jump, tum ..'tum theek toh ho kriya kya hua?' holding her arm .. kriya looked at him laughing' ha rohan mein bilkul theek hoon' she said ..' woh kya hai na mujhe mera outfit milgaya , woh dekho ' and infront was a beautiful saree lengha ...mujhe wahi wala chahiyein rohan .. please ha ha theek hai chalo tum try karlo .rohan smiled looking at her cutness,kriya took the dress and went off to the trialing room to see it ,before she entered she asked rohan tumhein toh yeh acha laga na ? she didn't know why she was even asking but she still asked,'ha kriya mujhe yeh dress acha laga kyunke tumhein achha laga' he said smiling at her .. rey was watching this scene from far he was so annoyed 'tumhein accha laga toh mujhe accha laga ' he imitated him and went off from there.

Almost all the trial rooms were filled. A last one was empty as she thought that. As soon as she entered, she was about to shout. Rey was in there shirtless. He had come to try a sherwani but forgot to lock the door. Before kriya could shout he pulled her in, closed her mouth with one hand and with other he locked the door.
"Shh don't shout"
She indicated him to remove his hand but he couldn't understand that. So she bit his hand making him wince slightly. She was breathing heavily, but then soon composed herself and went to her hyper mode.

"Aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?? Door lock kyu nahi kiya?? Agar koi hume aise dekh leta toh??" She went on blabbering. Rey moved forward and placed his finger on her lips.
"Shh...kitna bolti hu tum...abhi bhi waise hi ho...baatcutter"
Automatically a smile spread across her face. Rey too smiled on seeing her smile. On realizing this, she put a straight face.

waise tumhein yeh dress try karna hai toh karlo mein nahi dekhunga .. ha agar help chayein toh mein hoon na ... having a mischeveious smile on his face ...
Muj..mujh.. mujhe koyi help nahi chahiyein agar aap ka hogaya ho toh aap chale jayein mujhe yeh dress try karna hai.. mistakenly kriya hand touched his bare back.. whilst pushing him out .. just then she realized he never had his shirt on she quickly moved back,rey turned around and started to come close to her .. with his one hand leaning on the wall .. 'kya hua kriya acha nahi laga ?' He said to her coming close, Kriya closed her eyes wishing he wouldn't come close but opposite happend he moved more closer, whispering 'kya hua ?''Tum mujhe aise pehli dafa thori na dekh rahi ho?' he came close kissing one side of her cheek which made her blush and she closed her hand tighter.. 'toh baat cutter mein help karun tumhari dress ko pehne mein' kissing the other side

Kriya snapped open her eyes, but cursed herself for doing this. He was just an inch away from her. They were very close. She so badly want to touch him, feel him. As if be read her mind, he spoke "I know you want to touch me...you can baby I won't mind"
Her eyes widened at this. She looked towards other side. She could feel his heart beat. He further moved close to her and took her hands and placed them on his chest. His hands circled her waist. Kriya was losing all her senses. Her hands, on their own ran over his body, feeling him. She leaned over him, digging her head in his chest. He pulled her even close, pressing her into him. Both of them had their eyes closed, feeling each other. They stayed in that position for a long time.

They jerked away on hearing kriya's phone ringing. They felt a little awkward. It was rohan's call. He enquired where she was? She replied that she's just coming back. Quickly she left the trial room, leaving behind a frowning rey. To her luck, no one was present there. Inside there rey cursed rohan to a great extent.
"I know baatcutter you love me and i'm gonna make you confess that very soon" he said to himself. He put on his shirt and left.

They all came back home really tired.. and they plunked themselves on the sofas."yaar in larkiyon ki shopping khatam nahi hoti this is the first and last time am going shopping with girls " vicky said giving the girls an annoying look ..neha slapped his arm,'babu tum mere saath shopping nahi chaloge tum kehna kya chatein ho huh ?" Arein kagu mein toh in larkiyon ki baat karha tha tumhari nahi giving her a side hug trying to calm the matter neha gave him a glare 'mein bhi in ke saath ek larki hoon ok '.. vicky just stayed quiet .. whilst the others laughed .. raj came and sat beside him and whispered to him.. 'tum larkiyon se kabhi nahi jeet saktein so try bhi mat karna' .. vicky laughed at this ..just then they heard a knock on the door .. ill open it swayam said standing up strolling towards the door .. he opened the door
AAAPP!!😲


like it then give us our likes and comments next update will be after 65 likes otherwise no update and next update on page 45... adioss,,, tcc


Edited by aishasully - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
why the hell i am have a fear that the last word app is related to kriya mom...
it cannot happen so soon ... continue soon and do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing updte

yeh Rahul ko jaldi bhagaaoo yaar too irritating

the triak room part was the best loved it

poor Vicky, 😆 sahi kaha ladkoyon se kabhi nahi jeet sakte 😛

kissko dekhkar swayam swayam got shocked

updte soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesoome nd maazing...
Ab rey apna dimag use karega kriya ko confess karwane mein but dis time it won't be easy...
Rohan is so irritating...

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