Kriyansh SS: We Belong Together (update page 48) - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update
lykd it
thankx 4 d pm
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome!!!
Finally Kriya came...n their chemistry is too good!
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome update
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heheheh poor kriya 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum chappy...
i personally loved the dress...
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Posted: 12 years ago

omg... rey actually landed in kriya's house ... alongwith a pretty indianwear 😛

loving this romeo avatar of rey...apni juliet k liye pipe pe chadhna... hayeee

hehehe... he is authoritative... kriya ko aana hi pada ... 😃

& top of dat... side by side flirting ... 😎

i'll not be surprised if he pulls her in privacy & kiss her unexpectedly... ☺️

lolzzz ... i'm waiting for such scene 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome update

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update...
Kuch aur badle na badle lekin Rey ko kriya ke ghar ki entry kabhi nahi badal sakti hai...
Finally kriya came...
Plzzz update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update.

rey and kriya's moments r sweet n cute
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kriya become nervous by rey's movements..😳
loved it

waiting fr nxt update. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys here, we are with the update. Enjoy.
Part 5:

"Kriya I'm sorry..plz mujhe maaf kardo" rohan asked. Every one was busy in the function going on there. Since they were in a corner, only the gang, raj and preeti were observing them.
"Rohan...its okay" said kriya.
"Thanqqq soo much kriya"
"Uh...rohan I'm ready to give US a chance" Both Rohan and Rey could not believe their ears. The gang was also shocked. Raj was happy and sad at the same time. Happy that his one friend is getting his love, sad because his other friend is losing his love.
"Kriya are you sure??"
"Yeah rohan"
Rohan unable to control his happiness hugged her.
Rey became numb. He thought she'd forgive him but never thought she would accept rohan. He was hurt to the core and angry too. Swayam, sharon and the rest of the gang were worried for rey. Rey at once left that place.

rey ran from there to the balcony.. he didnt want to cry infront of everyone.. he didnt want to show his weakness, sharon ran behind him .. because she knew rey needed her right now.. she indicated swayam to go and talk to kriya. sharon reached the balcony .. rey was crying so much .. he was trying not to... kyun kriya ki universe ji kyun aap ne mere saath aisa kya ? kya mein itna bura hoon ? kya mein kriya ko deserve nahi karta kyun ! he sat down crying burrying his head inbetween his legs ,, sharon came to him and sat down infront of hm .. rey ..

rey picked his head up .. he looked at sharon and hugged her he started to cry .. kyun sharon ? kyun mere saath hi aisa hota hai ? mein kriya se bhot pyaar karta hoon bhot , mujhe laga usne mujhe maaf bhio kardiya tha lekin nahi.. she wanted to move on isiliyein ... isiliye usne rohan ko ha kardiya.. he started to cry alot.
sharon trieds to calm him down after alot of effort he did.. he wiped his tears and stood u , rey kya mein kriya se baat karun? rey smiled at her nahi sharon , agar woh rohan ke saath khush hai then isimein meri khushi hai, im happy for kriya and rohan they both deserve eachother...chalo neeche chaltein hai lets go and have some fun , he took sharon ahnd and walked down , trying to hide his pain.

On the other hand swayam went to kriya, who was sitting alone in a corner losr in her own thoughts. Swayam placed hus hand on her shoulder. This made her come back to present. On seeing swayam there she gave him a week smile.
"Why are you doing this kriya??"
"What??" She asked pretending that she didn't get his point.
"Stop pretending kriya...at least mere saamne toh pretend mat karo"
As swayam finished kriya burst out kriya. She dug her head in his chest while he was trying to comfort her. After a while she stopped crying. He wiped away her tears and asked "ab bolo kyu kar rahi ho yeh?"
"Swayam, mein rey ko aur hurt nahi kar sakti"
"But tum usse hurt kar rahi ho aur saath mein apne aap ko bhi"
"I have to swayam, I have to...I want rey to move on"
"But kyu??"
"Because mom kabhi nahi maanegi...aur mein rey ko firse hurt nahi karna chahti...isliye its better agar vo mujhse nafrat kare"
"You know what kriya..i'm proud to be your friend...you are one in a million" and they hugged.

As they parted sharon and rey came back. Kriya could clearly guess that he had been crying. This hurt her even more. She never wanted herself to be the reason behind his tears but the truth was different. She turned away so that he thinks she's ignoring him.

"May I have your attention plz" said raj.
"I know its just a mehndi function but I thought why not lets have some fun..its very simple...the spot light will select 2 random people one girl and a boy and they have to dance on the song played...so, everyone ready??"
The audience hooted. First the spot light fell on the to be couple raj n preeti. Next it fell on swaron and then on rohan and neha. Every one danced well. Now it was the last turn and the spot light fell on Kriya and rey. They were shocked. Kriya who till now was avoiding rey was now worried how is she gonna dance with him. She knew his one touch can make her go weak and she has to dance with him. Taking a deep breath she movef forward. Rey was very happy. After so many days he is going to dance with kriya. With a smile on his face he too moved forward. Both of them were in the centre and the gang was smiling wide.

Guys please play the song Mar Jayian from vicky donor.

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song

Lamhe..velle lamhe
Velle pal yeh
Idhar udhar tehal rahe
Sehmein..sehmein dil bhi
Keh rahein hai


rey sits down in front of kriya pulls his hand out , kriya slowly puts her hand in his hand, rey stands up and twists kriya around until she bumps on to his chest , her hair covering her eyes , rey uses his other hand to move the hair and picks her up and tunrs her around.

Bina tere
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian re..
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian re..


Rey twirled her around twice and now her back is facing him. His hands gripped her waist tight and her hands were above his on her waist. They were swaying to the rythm. Rey came close to her ears and sung the line "Mar Jayein".

Dil mein..koi rug yoon
Dhadakti hai
Ki jaise bijli si daude
Saansein..teri saansein
Jagaati hai bina tere


kriya places her hand on her heart and sways around to the song , she twirls around and hugs rey, rey moves back , takes hold of her hand kisses it, and slowly moves, his hand up to her shoulders both facing eachother, kriya twirs back , and rey picks her up on her feet and twirls her around.

Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian re..
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian re..


Rey lifted her up and she locked her legs around his waist. He bent a little making her bend backwards. He swayed her and then brought her back to the position. While placing her down her hands carressed his cheeks.

Girhon ko suljhaao
Tere bin kya jeena
Bata mujhe..bata mujhe
Girhon ko suljhaao
Tere bin kya jeena
Aa bhi jaa..aa bhi jaa
Aa bhi jaa..aa bhi jaa


they both dance together hand in hand, kriya puts her head back , rey slowly brings his head forward and kisses her neck and brings her back up , she moves away from him but rey catches her hand and brings her back. while she puts her arm around his neck and sways with him.

Lamhe..velle lamhe
Velle pal yeh
Idhar udhar tehal rahe
Sehmein..sehmein dil bhi
Keh rahein hai
Bina tere


Kriya went away from him and did some contemporary step. Her back was facing him. In that same position with her back facing him, he pulled her towards him. He passed his right hand over her visible chest above her cleavage making her face him. He locked her hands with his and bent her back and swayed her in a circle. He pulled her front and her hands landed on his shoulders.

Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian re..
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian


she put her head on his shoulder, rey made her look up , moved her away , never letting her be far from him , and twirled her around him several times , then they seperated , did the same moves , both faced eachother , rey pulled her towards him , made her sit down whilst looking at eachother and ended it in a hug position.

And then the lights off!!

The lights turned on. There was silence prevailing for a few minutes but soon the place was echoing with applauses. People were awestruck with such a sizzling chemistry. Every one had wide smiles on their faces.
"Woah!! What an amazing performance" exclaimed preeti. Every one cheered for them. Kriyansh were happy from inside but didn't show it off. They were stealing glances of each other making sure the other doesn't notice.

So, hows it??

Its our first attempt on a dance sequence... Hope you all liked it...
Do hit the like tab and leave your reviews
P.S PMS later
For further PMS buddy me..
Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago

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