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Posted: 12 years ago
I love it, I love it, I love it times infinity. Dude, why just why didn't they show something like this in the show? Like the two of them got married to expose Shyam, fell in love, and Anjali was a rational minded woman, who saw sense, and the demons of his past were thus exorcised. And yes, Anjali kept the baby, and didn;t try a DIY abortion, and she went on to be a successful woman , who fell in love again. Instead of that domestic violence- infused with stupid comedy and random romantic moments.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I always wanted a happy ending for Anjali, but never would I have thought of her as an English teacher. :) Loved it! Thanks for the update and PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES BABAYYY RESSS

I'm coming back to unres on this straight after I've prayed!!

I BE HERE FINALLY (hey, at least I'm back the same date that I Res'd on ;D)

OK. I would just like to start off by saying something I've said to you before;

I LIKE YOU A LOTTLE. Do you wanna know why? BECAUSE THIS 'LOOP' WAS FANTASTIC!

I absolutely, completely, irrevocably loved it because it genuinely caught me by surprise - the bit where Khushi turned around at the terrace, I panicked; I thought that it'd follow the same route, but that he hears the bits where Khushi taunts him or whatever, with a different resolution, but I did not, for one second, expect this.

But I'm glad I didn't, because it was phenomenal to read.

Just.. Thank you, Ridz :')

I LAUU YOU DAMMIT <3

Edited by MsIPKKNDManic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update epic i loved how you wrote this i loved how she weighted everything and decided to tell him the truth loved how she told him to have snake investigated i always wonder about that asr had money and brain yet he never had snake investigated loved how payal told akash the truth and loved how arnav reassured her he was their for her loved the update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is awesome. In my alternate universe this truth happened.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bookmarked*
Will read and comment as soon as I can :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Even if it was not a unfinished loof ..this what if loop warmed my heart.
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Posted: 12 years ago
it wud hv been soo much better... so much more fun , n entertaining too... had the show decided to follow the path of "the truth"

gives more credibility to arnav's love, n khushi's love too.. gives more sanctity to akash n payal's marriage..

n definitely a lot more positivity to the entire story...

too gd :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I remembered the day of Payal's wedding before the terrace. Their whole interaction was magical, the flirty ASR was a joy to watch but the one thing that I remembered clearly was how happy and determined he looked when he was in his way to the terrace. It was like he was free of all his chains. This is probably why that scene hurt him and made him jump to conclusion about not trusting people. Anyways, I loved how you describe the pre confession feelings they each felt and the reasons she gave for not being able to tell him in person. All valid reasons. Would it not have been great if they were each as adult like as in your loops? Let us not forget that she also acted as rashly as him sometimes but his anger was just more overwhelming, her rash acts stemmed more from the need to protect and help others compared to his anger. Beautifully done - made me think of that determined young man who was on his way to confess his feelings finally and brought nothing but a smile on my face before going to bed.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was simply beautiful!
I never even considered that u would give us such a what-if loop closure...
They both were anxiously anticipating a lot...but i would agree that i was as surprised as arnav when khushi just pushed him and ran away!
The reason was not surprising at all! And somewhere i m glad that u decided to make khushi let arnav find the truth himself...he is right, he never gave her a reason to place her trust in him...
Loved the way u presented each and every memory of arnav anxious for khushi...just like his di...
Thanx for the happy reading moment!!

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