M hate it so much dat I lau it, ya?
Putting that B school knowledge right in it, share prices dropping, proud of you!
I like how you set the scene, all the info after the kidnap track..I do appreciate his shadowing his sister even if she refused to acknowledge him.
I was a bit put down..that he wasn't really spending time with her, mending his ways or investing in that relationship. But then he confessed. And you saw between the lines!!
I have always wanted to see substantial reason for him to profess his love, the whole SG thing was like baseless..I was wondering why did he not tell her that day in her mum's house..when he found out she was doing it because the contract was ending! That would have made so much sense...SO THANK YOU Dammit!
And I always thought the 10 things I hate about you confession would fit right into IPK! Well written ridz! Something that actually explained the I love you dammit!
HEATH LEDGER. just needed to say that somewhere.
So as they say I love you is the first step..so whats ahead in the loop??
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