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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: devilish-grin
its awesum nivi😳
too hot☺️

Glad you liked em.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007
Awesome os!😃

Thanks! (:

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Tanhaforever4
awsum os...!! 😳 😳

Thanks! (:

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Sunil

@Suni1986

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

simple yet cute os
love it

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: epiphany.
Reserved. (:
I will edit this and the other reserve asap. 😳

Edited

I normally do not read one shots and fan fictions with mature content. I do find em starkly puerile. Albeit I'm all for polished writing skills which you possess and in plenty. So, congratulations for being the wondrous author you are. Explore various genres and take all the time you need to finalize that one genre you write best. Maybe that will help you eventually stop writing random prose and end up with what you enjoy witting the most.

The carnal episode (sorry if this sounds weird) is carefully and intelligently written. The rest of it is equally well written, like I said before but because this is a one shot, I felt all the parts weren't very well connected. But not to worry, that's how it's like with most OSes we write.

Thanks for the PM.

-Kankshita

K, frankly, even I wasn't very much contented and satisfied with the update and the concept. But one of my friends had wanted me to write about it, so I could not really decline.

Even I ain't too comfortable in writing such pieces, and therefore puerility exists! 😆 But I am glad you tried reading it, and nevertheless came with a feedback. Albeit, it's decided, it ain't my cup of coffee. [I know it is supposed to be tea, but me not drink it. 🤣]

Anyhow, this genre has been happily dropped. And in any case, experimenting and juggling with genres is dropped for the time being since exams are on my head. 😉

Dude, thanks a ton for reading it and commenting! 😳 I always look forward to your feedback.