Troubled love...a KR ff THREAD 1 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
guys this is my 3rd ff..i hope u all enjoy this...its on my lovable kriyaansh...
Chapter 1

reyaansh!!!reyaansh!!!reyaansh the crowd was goin mad...girls shouting their lungs out...enterred a handsome

guy in his blue sports bike...he took his helmet and gave his oh so sexy smile...half of the girls population
fainted...but one girl amongst the crowd directly came towards him...held his caller pulled him n gave a kiss on
his cheek...

girls dress:

g: all the best baby...i knw ull win(with attitude)

rey: tani kitni baar kaha hai...aisa public mai kiss mat karo...kya sochenge??(the girl was tani)

ta: i dont gv a damn of what people care...ill do what i wanna do...kyu tumhe acchha nahi laga...(clinging to him) i
love u...u also love me rite??

rey: tani phirse shuru mat hojja..i care for u...love n care its totally different..ur my best friend sister...hw can i..

ta: oh!!! ab vo swayam is comin b/w my love...

before rey could speak...announcement said that the race is gonna start...

the race started...for evry bikers the one n oly envy was rey...(guys ill nt give much abt the racin part...)crossing
all the laps...rey won the race

they were cheers...love you mantras...marry me proposals from the crowd...

finally rey n tani made their way to their flats(i hv mentioned that reyam,vik n tani lve togrther)

rey opened the door...n they entered... immediately tani locked the door n pushed rey to the wall n trapped him...by
keeping the both hands on the eitherside...(this waz not new to rey...he knows she loves him but...he don't oly
cares )

tani inserted her hand under his shirt n moved forward for a kiss...but rey pushed her(

the door bell rang...)

rey: tani open the door..

ta: hug me..

rey:tani dont b childish..open the door

ta: i said hug me

rey had no other option...coz he knew she was stubborn...so he hugged her..

ta: (she hugged him back N whispered)that's like my baby...

she went n opened... it was swayam n viky...seeing swayu tani left to her room...

rey: hey guys...

sw: oh!! hi so hw was the race??

rey: it...

vi: ill tell ...as always u won rite...

rey: ya(smilin)

vi: so treat

sw: viky kitni baar treat mangta hai tu...

vi:arre chup re!!!(dreaming) khana...

rey n sw: bukkad kahi ka

vi:rey mera bhai...mera dost...chalte na yaar...(movin his hands allover rey's body)

rey:(pushed him)stay away dude...n fine vll go...

viky was jumping all over the house..shouting treat!!!!!!!!!

sw:(smilin) paagal

precap: kriyaansh meet

kaisa tha..
plzz gv ur precious comments...dont forget to hit like..😊
Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
res
unres
yipieee me first one to comment
thanks for pm
it was awesome but itna short
this taani iska koi murder kardo warna main karoongi
viky as always khane ke siwa kuch nahi dikhta
update soon😊
Edited by ruchitasaphire - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
asusual...u rock out..it..was jst fantastic...wuld..love..to read..mre.. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
AND yeah..sabra hi karenge..afteral.sabra ka..fruit..meetha. .hota hai..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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asusual...u rock out..it..was jst fantastic...wuld..love..to read..mre.. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: ruchitasaphire

res

unres
yipieee me first one to comment
thanks for pm
it was awesome but itna short
this taani iska koi murder kardo warna main karoongi
viky as always khane ke siwa kuch nahi dikhta
update soon😊


Thanks for likin it..
haan chota thha..nxt time bada wala k..
Tu hi karle tani ki murder...
Viky ko iski awala kuch nahi atha:))))
updte zaroor karungi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Awesum update..but us tanni nani ko toh kutte kha jaye..besharam kahin ki..vicky food fond..like me lol..n rey won..yeah..n swayu..nice nick name..luv it..thnk u for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
super duper osm part dea...!!!
but chota tha dumdum...😛
uss tani ke alawa evrythng was juz sooo REY!!!
NEXT PART JALDI UPDATE KARNA...
AUR THODA LAMBA..!!!!!
LOVINGG ITT...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: hotdiva_dmg


super duper osm part dea...!!!

but chota tha dumdum...😛
uss tani ke alawa evrythng was juz sooo REY!!!
<font color="#cc0066">NEXT PART JALDI UPDATE KARNA...</font>
</strong>
<font color="#cc0066">AUR THODA LAMBA..!!!!!</font>
<strong><font color="#cc0066">LOVINGG ITT...</font>


Thank u lovely..
Haan chota tha..
Nxt time pakka bada wala k...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
awesome...
rey won n vicky fond of food...
loved it...
bt chota tha...plz update soon...
thnx for pm...

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