OS-Queen of my Heart pt15--p23(Current track)

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OS- QUEEN OF MY HEART

Part 1- pg 1
Part 2- Pg 4
Part 3- pg 7
Part 4-pg 8
Part5-pg 9
Part 6 -pg 12
Part 7- pg 15
Part 8- pg 17
Part 9 and 10- Pg 18
Part 11 and 12- pg 20
Part 13 and 14- pg 23
Part 15- Epilogue- pg 23

PART 1

Arnav was hell worried for khushi, as he walked out of the room after teasing her on the jalebi antic, in front of everyone! He knew he is going to have it as he's home for that as he smiled fondly through his worry! He knew this isn't his wife's world and hence the worry but seeing her determination he had full faith in his khushi. She wanted to do this on her own so he's going to let her- she doesn't want my help so be it but he was always going to have her back- he thought as he drove home.

Three weeks Had passed and he could see how hard his khushi was working, he admired her determination and he could vouch surely that khushi was going to give the others a run for the crown, coz he knew for sure other things cud alws be modified and changed a lil and he cud see khushi coping well really well indeed with her high heels and confidence and as a sponsor he had all the feedback,but his woman was a one with a golden heart - a woman of substance, and tht was how she went about winning everyone's heart- her cocontestants even. And that thought reminded him tht that's how simply a while ago she had walked in and become the queen of his heart.

Khushi was working hard, an it was tiring and gruesome. After that day when she stopped that evil vikranth from his advances on Natasha- simply she had won the hearts of evryone. All helped we train and she was more than happy, she had everyone's support , Nk, Mamiji, Naniji, Anjali and even arnavjis she knew. But today as se walked restlessly in their room on the eve of the competition, she was really nervous.

Arnav saw her walking all around, she was nervous he knew. He walked up to her and smiled-
Arnav- nervous ho khushi?
Khushi turned around, this was the first time she and arnav were having an upfront conversation about the show, everything had been perfect odrwise just that they had avoided discussing this issue being a sensitive one, but she knew he had her back and his silent approval and support shone from his eyes lovingly.
Khushi- arnavji.. Haan him thode.. Pata nahi hum kar payenge..
Arnav pulling her onto his lap and hugged her from the waist as they sat on the poolside recliner- khushi tumhe pata Haina tum apne type ki ek ho.. U have worked so hard u have come so far khushi- dong loose hope now..
Khushi snuggled upto him- u were keeping a watch weren't u arnavji.. I knew u asked them indirectly to be extra strict with me right.. For my good.. But I knew u were always watching over me.. Arnavji thank you..
Arnav- ofcourse khushi, I am always there to watch over you love, now c'mon don't b nervous.. Why don't u practice ur ramp walk in front of me once-
Khushi jumped- arnavji I would love to.. And she went in to put on her heels

Arnav as being the main sponsor had to in the end walk the ramp with the winner as this was a suprise for everyone as the winner Mrs India had to after receiving the crown walk in his bridal wear designed exclusively by him. He was sure his Wife would be the one walking wth him.

Khushi walked around with confidence and her angelic aura and he was so proud of her. As they snuggled to bed , khushi looked up confusingly-
Khushi- arnavji how is it that you managed to keep it a secret till now that I am your wife.
Arnav kissing her forehead- coz u asked me to khushi but he pinned her down and looked into her eyes and whispered- but tomorrow everyone will know, I shall reveal to the world what iv been dying to khushi-
Khushi as smitten as alws- what arnavji,?
Arnav- Mrs India or not khushi- but you Mrs Arnav Singh Raizada were , are and always will be the Queen of my Heart

I am planning to make this into a three part series , if you all feel I should continue- should I?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continue!
Loved it. Pm me the next part.
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i think it's ur first attempt to write.. good one.!!! liked it...!!! continue soon n pls pm me next time..!!!😊
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Grammatical errors, despite that this was one good FF. FIRST attempt? KEEP up the good work!

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Good job dear... Plz plz cntnu...luved it...can u pm me wen u update the nxt part..plz...
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Nice, much better than the current track!
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gud one...
wld u mind sendin me a pm whn u update nxt???? wld b delitd!!!!
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plzz do continue...pm me plzzz if yu can...
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Thx all of you! Posting from my fone, that's why some grammatical errors! However but no this isn't my first attempt- have written another FF- Were we ever meant to be? On arnav and khushi and am almost done with it!

However I usually write and keep it to myself ! Were we ever- is the frst one iv posted on the forum and this is the second one on the forum!

Please do read my other FF as well! feedback is appreciated!

Thanks once again :-)
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Loved it!!!!
Continue soon...
Plz pm me

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