SwaRon/TanHa SS ~You R Mine~ Last chp pg 36 - Page 3

Originally posted by: --Rumeli--

Baz!how on earth do u manage to write such ah-mazing romance on swaRon!!
I have an awe-ed expression after reading each of ur writings!...thank you so much😳
i really loved the jerk swayam who manages to make sharon speechless in his own way!(LOL)😆
I dont even have much of words to describe how much I enjoyed reading the first chapter!!...i am so gld u liked it😃
yeahh please turn it into an FF for sure..certainly anyone of us wudnt mind dis at all...will think about it :P..like seriously!bt iss thode jaldi updates dena!:)...will try my best

Originally posted by: manasie

Baaazzz, Awesome seriously it was amazing... thank you so much

Swayam is such a jerk and arrogant... I love this Swayam... ahhh we all do😉
SwaRon are enemies but they kiss like hell...😆
loved it.. update soon...

Apne baki ke works bhi update kardo...

Originally posted by: Nehal92

Baz!!!! you write such awesome stuff and ask us to wait long and long for the updates ! This is so not fair na!..awww that is really very bad on my part :P i know what it feels like to wait for an update :P

Hostage update i am dam excited for it :D i was waiting for it for so longgg!! ...updated as promised

but wait how am i suppose to wait for the update of this??? :'(...it will be updated by this weekend😊

Originally posted by: little.princess

Totally loved it.. Swayam s such a jerk y is he troubling Sharon so much.. Poor gal..

Waiting 4 u 2 update the nxt part.. Thanx 4 the pm and do pm me whn u update..

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

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Hey Swthrt🤗 Api🤗

WOW...a light hearten..happy and romantic SS from you...a treat for ur readers...like always...as u know i am a big fan of your writing skills...i dont want to repeat myself again and angian...just one thing...u r amazing my dear...awww api i am not that good but thank you so much this means alot to me.😳

The 1st chapter of this SS...you made sure the readers get hooked to this SS😆...Sharon...her relationship with her family..her Parents..her brother..Rey...beautifully penned down by you...well nothing to be surprised about it...i am used to the amazing write ups u give us...i wait for them...crave for them...okay now seriously that is a huge comment for me. thank you from the bottom of my heart for those kind words Api they mean alot to me.😳
I loved the way u portrayed...SHAREY relationship..😃

she heard a voice from behind saying "Dumboo?" she turned around and smiled widely upon seeing her brother standing there with a shocked expression on his face. She said "Big Bear'did u miss me?" and ran in his arms. Who hugged her back and replied "u have no idea" rey was sharon's big brother

And how beautifully u merged the real story with ur imagination...one word...perfect...thank you once again.

Her reason for hating HIM...WOW...it was hilarious...😆

That was one reason for her to hate him the other reason was that he stole her first kiss from her. He kissed her in front of the whole college to shut her up when she was insulting his team "WEAKLINGS" and gave her the tag that she a dazzler has been kissed by a weakling. That was not the only time he kissed her, he kissed her later on too one other time when she decided to give him a piece of her mind but he was not in a mood for it.😳Lovelyyy...

GOSHHH...u want to kill me girl...i was grinning like an idiot while reading this ...😆

"well if a weakling can kiss a dazzler than he can sure as hell do more" Sharon glared at him she hated it when he would remind her that he was the one who tasted her first and spat back "that is never going to happen'.this time I won't let it happen" he smirked at her and replied "yeah like u stopped last time?" and that was it. She hit him where it hurts with her knee and he fell sideways groaning in pain.😆😆😆

I am loving the ping pong fight between them...their chemistry is amazing...like always...I am dieing to read when they will fall in love......they r already in love just need to realize it😉 plz plz continue soon dear...😊

Yeah!!!!a romantic story frm u...comin 2 d updte..it ws super funny...i lyk dis SwaRon vry mch hu r alwys ready to rip each odrs head off...dey r jst uber cte...d swaron clash ws super funny...naughty swayam..nd sharon ne jo kia...ai..i ws roflin imgnin shantanu lyk dat...but d scene also had swtness to it amidst all d fun..poor sharon...swayam ne uska dinosaur jala dala...he z in deep trouble...d way she brgd in d hse..uff..u gve a hillarious descrption f dt..nd d thng dat follwd aftr dat ws unexpected...swayam rly has sme guts...kissin sharon in dat mood..its lyk bhuke sher k muh mein hat dalna...nd d kiss ws gr8...swayam didnt leave sharon until she responded...ROFL...sharon tried nt to respnd bt she also knws he wl nt leave hr easily...nd pichli bar ka v revenge le lia swayam ne..u brng out a rly vry swt nd naughty swayam in mst f ur rmntc wrte ups wch i loveee...thnx fr d pm...gr8 writin...do updte soon...

Originally posted by: an_skyfighter

all the while i was reading this i had my hand on my cheek as i was so mesmerized by both of them who supposedly HAte each other ahahahah😆
i dont like swayam being a jerk but this jerkiness of swayam I love hahaha...oh we all love dear😉
where to begin from. The way they met each other is quite weird what was he doing in her room 😳...later in the story rey mentions he called him so just barged in her room for no reason😆and awww out poor sharon i really pitied on her ...oh u r gonna pity her so much in near future.
although she was the victim but she somehow had it coming when she went to his house at that time...yup she did😆
enjoyed it to the fullest and loved it totally...I am glad u liked it.
eagerly waiting for the next part and of HOSTAGE to be updated !!
p.s. i have one complaint
u update really slow yaar...yeah loads of people have same complaint but they r used to it now...u will also get used to it😆...no i will try my best to update soon :P
i know u have work being a student and all and i know how universities treat us but i think u might be having atleast 4 days holidays now..No i did not...our one holiday was cancelled by uni😡
so update HOSTAGE alteast ...updated
really wanna know whts next with them

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

Yeah!!!!a romantic story frm u😊...comin 2 d updte..it ws super funny...i lyk dis SwaRon vry mch hu r alwys ready to rip each odrs head off😆...dey r jst uber cte..yup they sure are😉...d swaron clash ws super funny...naughty swayam..nd sharon ne jo kia...ai..i ws roflin imgnin shantanu lyk dat...but d scene also had swtness to it amidst all d fun..poor sharon...swayam ne uska dinosaur jala dala😆...he z in deep trouble...d way she brgd in d hse..uff..u gve a hillarious descrption f dt..i am glad u liked it :)..nd d thng dat follwd aftr dat ws unexpected...swayam rly has sme guts...kissin sharon in dat mood😆..its lyk bhuke sher k muh mein hat dalna🤣...nd d kiss ws gr8...swayam didnt leave sharon until she responded...ROFL...sharon tried nt to respnd bt she also knws he wl nt leave hr easily...nd pichli bar ka v revenge le lia swayam ne..u brng out a rly vry swt nd naughty swayam in mst f ur rmntc wrte ups wch i loveee...aww i am so glad u like him in my write ups so much...thnx fr d pm...gr8 writin...do updte soon...

Originally posted by: Tanuka_TanHa

BAZ 🤗 Tanuka🤗

A new SwaRon os from you and i am the happiest person over here .

its always fun reading ur works 😃...aww that is so sweet of u🤗

The start was amazing !😃

very well written . ..Thank you

nobody can actually describe swayam " the jerk" better than you....aww wthank you once again😳

i loved how swayam was giving all perv remarks and sharon was blushing 10 shades of red on every word .😆

the last kiss part was HAWT .☺️

SwaRon fun and hot romance is our way and that too written by you .😊...yup

i will be waiting for the coming chapters , update soon..

thanks for the PM.

P.S - i am eagerly waiting for the next chapter of hostage , update ASAP...updated

Loads of love

Tanuka