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kushigowda

@kushigowda

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

after a long time...nice update ankur its not only her lose it wil b yours too if you dont look at her... n arnav ek look main fida hagaye ho kya??😆

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Gunjan

@..Gunjan..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

oh Please don't be discouraged it takes time sometimes for story to get many reader...i have even seen such stories which in starting for many chapter don't even get any comment or only few...but slowly they get many comments and likes ...it just takes time...
Your story is amazing...really do continue
Coming to the update
It was well nice ...arnav atleast saw her face
It was short though..
Loved how arnav was lost in her beauty.
When will they meet ?
Update soon
Thanks for the PM
😊

Edited by fan123GUNJ - 12 years ago

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varshamaharaj

@varshamaharaj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

i read from chap 1 to 6 and this is what i have to say "THIS IS INDEED ONE CRAZY TALE!!!!lol...this is totally entertaining!!!!i love kushi and her craziness lmao she is such a clown ...lmao lol😆😆😆😆😆😆truly enjoying this so far...hope to see update 7 soon...very amusing update..loved it...and arnav lol he is sooo cute as usual lol arrogant ass usual lol..lovely updates dear...

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varshamaharaj

@varshamaharaj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

really you dedicate it to me also

thanks you soo much 🤗 it's so sweet of you 😳

coming to the update, Ankur is just superb, love the way he was trying to not look back 😆 and in his section of trying to not dare to look back he shouther also on the great ASR 😆

wow Arnav noticing Khushi and his heart skipping a beat was really written beautifully, love the way you described Khushi and the way he looked at her and his state, it was hust awesome

dear 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

what the 😲 Khushi was running under a car thank God she stopped in time and with that she stopped also someone else beath and hear also 😉

For a moment Arnav Singh Raizada lost his mind and started thinking just at her, I loved the way stopped the car and stated thinking about her in concerned manner, superb

LOVED IT TOO TOO MUCH 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Want to know when they are going to meet again and this time both seeing each other 😳

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A_R_S

@A_R_S

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Welcome back.
Nice update.
So Arnav first meeting with Khushi although Kushi haven't seen and met him yet. But his reactions told everything about him related to Khushi.
Now eager to know how Khushi will react when she will see and meet Arnav for the first time. Therefore hoping u will continue with the update.

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Priti

@Drishuluv

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

OMG!!!!!! u dedicate this to me! really?? am i dreaming or what?? i can't tell u how i'm feeling now.its kind of happiness we feel whn we get another two gifts free in buy 1 get 1 free offer😉 i know its lame of lame example but i recently experience this so its just came in my mind😆 i'm so much touch by this tht i was reading it again & again so at a point like ankur i had to remind this mantra over & over to my self tht "Don't Look above, don't look above"😉 Thank you so so much...

now enough of my blabber, coming to d update it was fab really. how u made arnav saw her tht too whn she was doing her stunts i just luv it 😆 i was laughing like hell seriously!! & i luv his each & every emotion like how his drink get choked in his throt, how he said stop!!!, how he suddenly felt irritating snowfall most beautiful phenomena... ohh i just luv how u expressed it...

love how u show his correct emotions tht too in such funny way...now i'm desperately looking forward for thr official first meeting spcly wanna know arnav's reaction after tht...

And pls don't b disappointed ok u'll definitely get d appriciations tht u deserve its just that some time things take more thn necessary time to happen & i'm dam sure tht this is going to one d best ff ever & don't u dare to even think of ending it abruptly bcoz i don't wanna feel tht loss again which i felt whn ipkknd get ended suddenly...😭( i know its kind of pressure i'm giving but pls pls pls not for me not for other just write it for ur self at d end whn u'll see whr u had reached from some comments to so much u'll b on cloud nine dear...)

so if u want some time to promote ur work its ok even i'll do it becoz in no way i'm going to lose this 😛 i'll always b thr for u no matter what. luv u & 'll b waiting for next one...

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Omg... U dedicated d update to me... Wow... I am on cloud nine...
I dont know whether i am worthy for that... See... D time...i am commenting...
Soo sorry anku... Sometimes my duties r taking a toll on me... Nw lets leave that...

So my girl have written a romantic update...i think our hero & sup hero r bowled over by d beauty of our heroines... Thats cute... The way u described arnav's state wen he saw was beautiful... That drink part was funny too...

So u have proved that u can write romance as well ... That too beautifully... The way u described our hero meeting d heroine was simply amazing... I felt i was seeing a film... So my little girl... Way to go kid...

I loved it... Not only me... Evryone reading this... Love you Anku..

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: lilakumariacnw
Hey anku... Dear. Its just a matter of time...
Dont get disheartened... You just have to keep going...
Never quit...
Failure is not d opposite of success... Its actually quitting which is d opposite of success...

Keep ur spirits high dear...

Anku... my dear... u seem to have a poor memory... so i am quoting my own comment again... poor me...

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

If u r stopping this... Becoz u want to concentrate on studies... Then i will encourage you...

But but... If u r stopping this becoz some ungrateful people after ur story is not liking or commenting... Then i am surely gonna come there & make u write d story...

Did u hear that Anku...
Whom do you love more... The ones who read this & like this... Or the ones who dont...
If u love us... U should continue... Write d next update... When u r free...

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