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Posted: 12 years ago
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Zehara meri jaan I have a lump in my throat after reading what you have written it s beautiful piece of writing and you know how much im fond of your simple yetasuperb writing. Zehara you can act more on this couple though this OS seem perfect in its place. But I would love to read more and for me reading such ffs, os an ss are the only solace to recover from the pain of losing my show and at least I can imagine them in the best possible way. Thanks to you and your gang of writers form farah, sami who I read passionately thanks again zehara. Pls pm me when u update this if ur doing it and Late too. shami
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Zeh,Dont you dare stop Writing😡Samjhiii!

BTW,This made me cryy,such a beautiful piece of writing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Great os.. It was a touchy one..
So, Khushi got married to NK but never loved him.. NK wanted to be Khushi's best friend.. He wanted to make her fallen love with him as much as he loves her..
Arnav was repenting his mistake..he wanted to get back his Khushi...
Khushi's widowed avatar made me very emotional...
Don't you even dare to think of stop writing.. You are an amazing writer and you should keep writing..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Wow! This OS left me speechless and some sadness!

Sadness because this beautiful show has been reduced to a shell and the characters have been reduced to jokes!

Speechless because this OS reminds me of what Iss Pyaar could have been! You did a wonderful job!!

Thank you!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Awesome os.in the beginning i thought arnav was her husband and thid was future track but after reading the part italics i was relieved that NK was her husband and this was way back their contract marriage times...


Loved the os... Pls dont stop writing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
A heart wrenching OS...but so very beautifully expressed...
Loved it dear...Khushi is like a flower here who also needs to be nurtured ...
Brilliant OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
This OS is definitely a make it one!

I m crying.

Full of pain, regrets, longing, guilt, love, hope, kindness, and grief!

Please do continue writing!

Thank you!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
If this was a make or break stuff, then you have come up with a brilliant story to prove that you need to keep writing more such amazing stories.
I loved it, though it was very sad that NK died... I had to read the 1st few paragraphs twice to make sure who was that husband.
I can't imagine how bad I shall feel when they ease out Arnav's character in the serial, coz reading about NK's death and Khushi's plight in your story was itself enough to make me feel depressed!😔
Beautifully written👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was a so nice OS I am grateful that I got to read it thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just got this to say that you are my one of the fav writers.i would never want you to stop writing.what has become of ipk is really sad but this forum is by us people..i want to continue with it and wish everyone does..and so do you! So plz continue writing! :)
and yeah,this one was good..and impactful.

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