Kriyansh SS: Some one behind you (Discontinued) - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
I read both d updates n concept was awesome which reminds me discovery show haunted

Neha transfering new houre nd everyone worried for her.
Rey also feel somethink weird abt this house.
Neha literally scared of house nd can't concentrate in class.

Neha scared of house when she observing somethink behind her nd also series activity happened with her.
Rey also hell shocked after looking at house nd neha condition.
Lovely
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Posted: 12 years ago
tooo much scary update...
bichari neha.worried abt her...
wo dho gals kriya n vishaka hai kya????
plzzz un dono ko bhooth math banav...
update soon...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Each much me phati boss I read it in the night and all thanx to u kyunki aapne itna creatively likha hai ki mujaheddin neend Naam ki chez ki yard nahi aayi


No offence but seriously awesome!!! Totally different and a complete horrifying thriller!!!!😈
Edited by karanikakrey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey please update na eagerly waiting...😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow just read this OS
It is simply amazing 😉
Loved it's nice and scary man [:D>]
Merko horror Bohot pasand hai 😆
Kriya and vishaka are he two girls aren't they?
And aw Rey is like neha older brother simply amazing
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys, Aroma and me are back with the update. Enjoy.


Chapter 3:


These two poor souls were hell scared. Rey had no guts to do anything . Neha was crying badly while hugging him tightly. But finally Rey gathered courage and helped Neha to stand up.



In other side of world, one girl was walking on the street in the beautiful city of Scotland . She was thinking about something seriously . How she lost her one of best friend . Life changed a lot . But still she's missing her . She remembered that day when her best friend met with accident; a lone tear escaped from her eye .

The sounds stopped coming. Rey like a protective brother held Neha's hand and walked down stair . The fear of death completely visible on their faces . How they will deny the fact that they have faced a horrible thing. Rey try to convince him that it was a joke played by his friends . But the fact is, the thing he saw was not like a prank . It was real . Both entered in living area . Firstly Rey went into kitchen and came back with glass of water . "Have some water , Neha" he said.


She, with trembling hands took the glass.



"I will call others" saying this rey walked toward window . Neha looked into glass of water . Suddenly it started changing into blood color.

And then the water in glass start boiling . Neha was so scared that she left the glass. Glass pieces scattered on the floor. On hearing the sound of the glass breaking, Rey ran into living room and found Neha weeping badly .


"What happened , Neha" Rey asked looking at broken glass pieces .



"They will kill us " Neha uttered few words choking.



"Nothing gonna happen to you " he tried to convince her. But somewhere he knows that this all things related with their past.



"Let's go we are leaving this house" both stood up walked toward door.



Rey clutched the door lock and pulled back his hand "ahh ' he hissed with pain .

Neha caught rey's hand "tumhara hath kaise jal gaya".



"I don't know door handle garam hey "



"How it's possible"



"I don't know" Both sat on the floor helplessly



"Kisi ka phone b nahi lag raha hai " Rey replied in sad and scared tone .



There was pin drop silence. Both drifted into sleep . But their sleep disturbed when they heard someone singing . Till now because of tiredness and lack of sleep they forgot about previous incident .



"Let me sleep " both spoken together .



"Relax , soon you will sleep forever" someone answered back seriously and again start singing .



In a blink a video of previous incident played in front of their eyes and both of them realised that it was not a dream. They are facing this horrible thing in reality.



Neha stood up tried to open the door .



"Why are you trying this hard " that white thing laughed at their condition .



Rey tried to catch it but it vanished . He slipped because of water on the floor.



"Rey " Neha shouted when she found Rey fell on the pieces of glass which scattered on the floor . some pieces of glass gave deep cut in his left arm . Few pieces of glass causes injuries in his head . Rey become unconscious .


"Please let us go " Neha pleaded looking in the air . But there's not one who will listen her .



Again there is a terrible silence . Neha helped Rey to settle on the couch . She walked toward window . Outside climate is really very bad . Dark clouds covered the rays of sun . It's dark out side . Soon it start raining . For others it is pleasant day . But for rey and neha it's a worst day . She never thought that one day she will face this thing .



"Vicky" next moment she is on her knees and start crying badly . Today she is missing him very badly . She wants him . She wants to hold him , she wants to hug him tight . She wanna share her fear.



"Why me ?" she gathered her courage and take a deep breath and proceed toward main door . She tried to open it . she is continuously crying . Her eyes became red.



Rey Regained his conscious . Rey searched for Neha but she was nowhere ."Neha " Rey shouted for her . Finally rey spotted her in bathroom .



Rey called her but she didn't reply . Neha sitting on the floor with the sport of tub . her hairs are completely messed up . Her face is not visible to him . Rey again called "Neha"

Then he noticed that her one hand bleeding very badly . Rey tried to hold her hand . But Neha pushed him with force . As a result Rey hit the bathroom door and door broke down . Rey was already very weak because of injuries caused by glass pieces . Now This sudden action of Neha injured his back head badly .

He was shouting in pain but ..but Neha she is laughing madly on Rey's condition . It's not like Neha is in good condition no . Her head and hand, both were bleeding badly .


She is also in worse condition . After few min Neha noticed Rey on the floor lifeless . Then she noticed her condition . She searched for her cell . finally she found her cell .



"Swayam , please save us " Neha cried out.



Kya huys Neha" Swayam try to talk but there is dead silence . Swayam become worried.


He called Sharon and vicky . Then they all proceed toward Nehas house . They keep calling her and Rey but there is no one picking their call .



"Welcome to hell"

Some voice welcomed them as soon as they enter in the house .
the door closed with T-H-U-D sound .



So, how's it??


Do hit the like tab and leave your reviews please.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update...
luvd it...!!!!
dis ff has so many thrill nd suspense...
loving it...
nd bechare rey aur neha...
conti soon...
thnx 4 de pm...
Edited by kanchi01 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantabulous update...

as i love suspense n thrill, i love this ss...

plz update soon...
Edited by .....pujan..... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
just fabulous👏👏

loovveedd ittt😊

who was d gal n scotland😕

poor neha and rey

waiting for d nxt part😳
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing...
who is the girl in Scotland?
thnx for pm...

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