#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 - Page 52

Originally posted by: shaani2209

Short update...but i liked it...yay!

the awkwardness between rey and vishakha was nicely put...for they had never spoken to each other as friends, its understandable...i liked the part where vishakha giving him privacy to open the parcel...True. They never did talk. I'm glad you liked that!

coming to the contents of the parcel...m sorry i dnt remember them and the moments attached to them...but m sure kriyansh fans will be having their memories attached to it...i liked the way u have penned that part, he remembering abt each and every memory behind those things she has given was nicely put...Aww thank you for the words <3 Those were special moments for sure...

the way u channelized their feelings with the song lyrics was beautifully done...Thanks!

waiting to read about Sharon's decision and as u had said earlier that coming updates the gang will be having their parts to play, so yeah waiting for that too...Yes, they come in now. And about SwaRon, few days ago, I had finally found the perfect way I could make them flow while sitting in class. But I didn't scribble it down so now I can't remember

do update soon...

thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: yogini64

Ye wale gifts kriya ke paas kaise they? 🤔
ye wali jacket to kriya ne show me vapas kar di thi . . . . . . . . Tere ff me nhi ki hogi 🤣 ROFL Pata nai what I was thinking. I had thought usne shivam ki party wali wapis ki thi.
it seems ki usne sab hi de diya . . . . Apne paas kya rakha h fir? 😔 uski memories... jo dil mai hote hai usko yaad karne ke liye kuch thori na chahiye?
khushi tu bahot rulati hai . . . . . . Jaldi se kriya ko vapas la na 😭 aww i'm sholly 🤗 I promise.. she should be back in aroung 6-7 parts more... but I won't be showing much sad scenes...
swayam ne pehle toh bol diya josh me sharon ko decide karne k liye . . . . . . . . Now he's regretting 😆 hehe haan.. naa kar diya toh? Uski toh lag jayegi..
poor sharon . . . . . Strict orders hai,, decision to kal hi dena h 😈 dekho kya karti hai 😛
this song is so painful . . . . . Never wanted to see them going through this situation 😵
I don't have any problem wid taani if she don't have any crush or so on rey 😊 I won't put her like in the show =)
khushi,, u r going inactive na,,, but why did u locked all ur previous OS . . . . . .?? Haan... inactive on FFs and such.. I got them locked because someone or other comments and it brings it up on my first page.. I didn't want to get sad or better if they're kept in the back for now...
the 1 associated wid guzarish as well 😔 voh wala khulva diya... I'll finish it off..

Originally posted by: eshachawla26

Awesome updte khushi..!!..

just luved it..!!..

the songs fits the best to their situation..!!.

thnx for the pm..

updte soon ...!!...

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha

OMG... I have no words to explain how i felt... The things which Kria left for Rey...the song sequence... Woahhh... Dat was really vei touchy... Lovedd ur update khushi... Really sry cnt comment big wala as my xams r going on... :( ... Plz apologies... :( ... Btw mjhe iska pm ni aaya... :(

Originally posted by: asmaju

Muuma I came here to spam alone but see IO havev the TM as my company

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

awesome update...loved it very much

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..

Woohoo! Spam spam spam!! Waise asma, tum msn kab banaogi? 😳

Originally posted by: asmaju

Kria ka re turn in the next 6-7 more parts..U mean ki in the next three to fpour threads kya????